Can Following the Rules Lead to Rebirth?

Pros: The storyline is interesting, the protagonist is perfect and deep enough. Disadvantages: The plot is too fast-paced, the characters appear too quickly, it is a bit compact, and the supporting characters are not portrayed deeply enough.

For the previous book, alas.

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I am currently subscribed to 575. Basically, after reading the updates every day, the beginning is not interesting. Just keep it. At this time of the last book, I remember that I had already finished the Shura Field, and the two female protagonists had broken up. But this book has more than 600 chapters. It feels like it is written on an assembly line. Although I know you are in trouble, I will definitely subscribe to it all in the future. (I hope I don't have to be like that disgusting author from the kindergarten next door and finish it as soon as the Shura Field. It's so disgusting. I feel like my subscription was in vain). Secondly, Bai Yueguang has too few scenes, too many commercials, and it is tiring to watch. As a result, deleting Bai Yueguang will not affect the plot. The overall plot is too slow, and it is already more than 200 W words. In addition to showing off, this kind of harem story is just tearing apart Shura Field. The progress is too slow and affects the perception. Seriously speaking, the first book is very boring at the beginning, and it feels a little bit in the middle, and then the Shura Field begins. I waited for the follow-up plot, but it was removed from the shelves. I kept this book for a while when it first came out, and I was reading it just like the previous one. I was sleepy after reading the previous plot, but there are really not many harem stories with less interesting points these days. Although I feel bored, I still subscribe to support. I hope the plot will speed up. You can also use Shura Field to get water. There is really no need to write so much for business. In essence, it is still a harem story.

I finished reading it in one sitting, but it was a bit short.

This book is not written at the same level as the previous one by Honest Man. Has the author changed? Has he become super evolved after writing the last book? I went to read that honest man. His writing and logic were terrible. This is a detailed comparison.

I haven't read the book yet, so I'll hang it up first

But the protagonist smokes, which is hard to understand. For people who smoke in real life, the protagonist of the online novel will read it whether or not he smokes. But in reality, if he hates people who smoke, he really won't read it if the protagonist smokes. But all in all, it's still a very good novel👍🏻

I came from the book club to explain it to everyone. Second Senior Brother, who has no money to spend, asked the author not to write a harem story. He said that because it would not be popular, he suggested that it be rewritten as a group of single female protagonists. As for the other female protagonists originally planned, they can be used to share the CP with the protagonist's friends. I was very angry after reading it, but I still composed a poem to bless him calmly: After rolling over the sand, the horse was relieved of its worries. On a straight road, act as a speed bump to get lucky.

The writing is good, but the business and emotional aspects are not divided well. 28? Even at the age of 19, business is too slow. Now the word count is only 10 million, or even 5 million at the extreme. I usually write about daily life among a few women. It is really interesting to watch at first, but it will get boring after too much. The young woman next door, Bai Bai, is also pushing forward on two fronts. Your 8-point pure emotional drama, which male video can rely entirely on emotional drama to make a living? It's not a female channel,

This person has passed away, and the world is far away. I will bring you more complete, clearer and more carefully polished works. I hope everyone likes them as always.

Stop making trouble, let alone 2014, right now, which lawyer relies on his skill to litigate? Aren't they all discussed before the trial? If there is no agreement, the court will not admit the defense evidence.

Does the author really know how to write a book? Why are all the heroines female?

Thumbs up to the author, those cyber eunuchs always want to castrate people mentally, the eunuchs have bad nature.

Great book, added to bookshelf. He wakes up and holds the power of the world, but he lies drunk on the knees of a beautiful woman. Counting romantic figures, but also looking at the present. Beautiful women, beautiful young women, beautiful mature women, the favorite of married women, Jian'an style, Wei Wu legacy, no taboos, the world is free.

Judging from the development of the plot, it seems that there are multiple female protagonists. I don't understand that the author's writing style is very good. Why does he always write about the harem? The heroine writing list is no better than the harem, and it is more suitable for the taste of the majority of book lovers. After all, few people are scumbags, they are all honest people.

My pass, you return my pass 😭😭😭

How can such a good book not have idioms solitaire? Let me start with: Do whatever you want

When criticizing, at least one basic principle must be followed, that is, other people's personal hobbies or hobbies should not be criticized as long as they do not violate basic public order and good customs and do not cause substantial trouble to others. The behavior of the poster who smokes and posts is purely Xiaohongshu's method. If you don't like it, just beat them all to death with a stick.

It took me two days to read the book. The character design and plot design are both better. The characters of the sisters are the richest, and they are much more interesting than the similar bestie heroines in other books. The different heroines' views on wealth and consumption are also written in a reasonable way. It is the most reasonable among the several rebirth novels I have read recently.

What a show.

A protagonist's smoking lightning protection post makes you anxious. Did you make it up randomly? Insulted? Nothing, just mentioned that the protagonist smokes and doesn't like lightning protection, why are you so anxious?

There are really a lot of diodes on the Internet. Let's just talk about it. If you don't read books about smoking, does that mean you like watching female videos? Secondly, smoking harms others and yourself, so it's better to remind your friends to pay attention to their health.

I won't watch the Fields Awards next time without you.

It has too much of a dad flavor, and I feel like the plot is all for the purpose of preaching and exporting the author's point of view, putting the cart before the horse.

That's a good scolding, I came here specially to give you a monthly pass

Really, I like to read realistic urban novels, but rarely see Zhong Yi. The author's writing is strong enough, the characters stand up, and the writing is smooth. The most important thing is that it is not greasy at all. Some of the golden sentences that are appropriately used in the plot are very eye-catching. The core logic of the protagonist is very strong, and his main focus is to make money. His daily life after making money is also very eye-catching. Plant grass and plant grass.

But there are too many descriptions of Yuzu, making it difficult to understand. People who actually like Yuzu will read it regardless of the description, but people who actually hate Yuzu will not read it if it is written in such detail. But overall, it is still a very good novel 👍🏻

Hurry up and code, this is enough for anyone to see.

Is this a book that a human could write? Not only is the setting novel, but the plot is also exciting. It is like a god coming down to save the online literature world, the god of harem literature, and the savior of book friends. It is also full of all kinds of whimsical and interesting writing, just like a hungry and thirsty man from the desert who suddenly tastes the clear and clean fairy water. Just one sip makes people addicted and unable to extricate themselves