
If You Draw a Talisman, You Will Become an Ancestor with Your Backhand?
抽到符咒,你反手就做祖宗人?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 128k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Deliberately mentally retarded, the writing is not good, and the current plot development has fallen into the wrong direction.
What kind of headlines? ? ?
So where is the charm? Chapter 44, most of the strength belongs to DC Birdman. The charm will be released only if it is not on the shelves, then I probably won't be able to hold on until then. I came to see Talisman vs. Marvel, not to see DC vs. Marvel, OK?
I'm still used to Spider-Man and Peter Parker, but the Gwen version feels average.
It is recommended to have an evil value, a justice value to draw the ability of the decent, and an evil value to draw the ability of the villain.
Some people ask why there is a female version of Spider-Man. I am very curious about the psychological situation of readers who ask this question. Which Spider-Man is better, or Peter Parker?
Gwen now feels like something out of a Marvel movie. Even if she is a protagonist, she has to have sex with her.
I get annoyed when I see people mumbling to themselves. Now, will the protagonist of the novel die if he doesn't keep mumbling to himself? Abandoned, goodbye
Sure enough, I still wrote Peter Parker to death.
🙂What do you look for when you read fanfiction? Isn't it just to watch the protagonist flirt with the original female character? Change some unforgettable tragedies? What's the result? The first superhero movie I watched was Maguire's version of Spider-Man. Even if Status later saved Marvel and saved the universe, he was almost as important as Spider-Man in my heart. As a result, Peter Parker was killed here. It was really disgusting. Wasn't Gwen interested in the protagonist? Someone else that Peter also likes has to be killed to make the protagonist feel at ease? It looked like Harry had to sacrifice himself, and Gwen's father also had a problem on his head. 🙂When I first saw Dr. Lizard. I thought that the protagonist would change the ending of Peter and Harry, for example, create a super quartet, the protagonist of the Hooded Man, Spider-Woman Gwen, Lizard Emperor Peter (draw a prop so that Peter can freely control the transformation), Green Goblin General Harry, etc., But this is the result? If I change the plot a little bit, I'm afraid the author won't be able to write it anymore.
Does the title of your book have anything to do with its content?😰
There is no need to change the title of the book. Many people from Qidian are tired of aesthetic appreciation, and the scale is not easy to write. It's better to do good things honestly.
You're too stupid, you don't know anything, you can't do anything, you haven't changed anything, are you writing something to move yourself? Author? Were you moved to write about Peter Parker's death?
Not to mention other things in this book, in order to promote the plot, the protagonist obviously can help Peter change the situation of being bullied, but he beats the bully and ignores it. He knows that Peter may still be bullied, but he still wants to leave a tail. Instead of directly solving the problem, he must inject Peter with lizard serum. He obviously knows that he will inject it, but does not stop him from doing it, but just watches him die. He also made a hypocritical attempt to save him, and conveniently left a foreshadowing of Gwen's true identity being exposed. The author knows how to feed us.
It's okay to change the title of the book to gain popularity, and the title of the book does not match the current content. Are you planning to change the protagonist's camp? I have read dozens of chapters, and I am still satisfied with it. Then you suddenly tell me that the content in the back is different from what I read earlier. This makes me almost lose interest. I don't know if people who are attracted by this title will be interested in continuing to read the dozens of chapters.
It's not interesting. Now I haven't seen anything like drawing talismans. Now it's just like those superman templates that need to be upgraded to gain experience, and it's not as good as that.
The author really doesn't care about readers, a lot of them have gone away in the last few chapters
How much garbage is stuffed into this to put together this kind of introduction?
The inferior horse follows the steps step by step and has no ideas. It just follows the plot.
Parker is gone. The so-called fandom originally implies satisfaction and wanting to change regrets. Parker is gone.
Nowadays, there are actually stories about mentally retarded protagonists. When the villain says something during a fight, the protagonist has to follow up with another sentence. Why can't he just shut up and beat the opponent to death? The abilities he got are all from DC, and he is called Wayne, and he fights like Spider-Man.
The author didn't suppress the combat power very much. The protagonist's combat power increased relatively smoothly, but the author suppressed the protagonist's brain. The protagonist's IQ was really high and low. He was still a little smart when he was teasing Gwen, but when it came to fighting, he instantly became mentally retarded.
The useless protagonist slipped away😅
Doesn't this count as selling dog meat over sheep's heads? It's almost on the shelves! The protagonist is still a street hero
What did the 130,000-word daily guide teach me?
Not a single spell appears. What did you write?
After Peter turned into a lizard, the plot took a turn for the worse and the quality became extremely low. There was no need to watch it.
An anti-hero or an ancestor is better than a mere vigilante.
I can give you five out of 10. It's just a little bit of a passing grade. The writing is just a little bit off. Some places are disharmonious and unnatural. The protagonist's personality is not distinct and the image is not vivid. The portrayal of the supporting characters is okay.
In which chapter are you going to collect all the twelve talismans? Um?
Marvel's normal Thor can instantly kill the self-conscious Vegeta😅😅😅😅😅😅