American Comics: Starting from Invincible Young Man

It's okay. I thought I was just a noob but I was surprised to be able to read it. At least it's not too poisonous after reading it briefly In terms of combat power, it's a system flow. You can get an ability template by defeating and touching corpses. You can solidify the template as your own basic ability by spending points. To be honest, nowadays, as long as the word "system" is mentioned, it is basically bound to a noob. The article is insulated from the old bookworms who really give votes. I almost missed it 😅 at first. I can see that you really want to work hard so that you can write more in the future. Before it is put on the shelves, if you still have time and are interested in changing the system, here are some personal suggestions for reference: For the first time, I came to experience the state of a person with supernatural sensing ability, who can sense super powers. For example, Almighty Man is extremely delicious but extremely dangerous, and the hair on the hair stands on end. Mark is slightly delicious but has astringency and should not be tasted too early. Then when I continue to sense at home, I sense the touch of the rift in time and space. Later, the theme can be traversed (teleportation) [It can be related to the brain monster that opens the teleportation. If you want to suppress the combat power, you can only teleport yourself, but in this case, the brain monster's later combat power may be strengthened, becoming a multi-theme parallel universe-level super suture boss] Wearing the black robe to help After Ikkyu defeated the transparent man, he sensed that the transparent man's originally delicious and dangerous aura was only delicious. Then after touching it, an energy ball was absorbed and passed into his body. He was able to mobilize part of the transparent man's power (gaining abilities and preventing abuse at the same time). He continued to absorb the energy of the locomotive and discovered that the two energy balls (templates) cannot be used at the same time, so I planned to go back to the original world to get the Global Guard's novice gift pack. I found that the greater the ability, the greater the energy consumption of opening the portal (to prevent over-traveling). Because Chishuo was waiting, I had to give up Locomotive's energy group to teleport to the main world (recovering backward abilities), After the subsequent battle, it was discovered that the transparent man's hard skin became more and more proficient with use, and even integrated into the body, and he could use the energy group (solidification) of other abilities when the skin was hard The general plot remains the same. It is not the system that newbies can attract old gluttons, and there is a restriction mechanism to prevent later abuse. I am not strong enough to write, and I have the ability to rectify the chaos of later writing. I hope it can be helpful to you👍 In terms of emotion, I have followed several Invincible Young Heroes-themed movies. I am a soft O, but I don't dare to write the legendary Rose Fried Rice Anissa. As long as you dare to write a monthly ticket, you will be great🤓

Before One-Eyed Allen has grown up, defeat him once to obtain his death evolution ability, and use the Eternal Man ability to cause a BUG😏

It's all gone. The author's combat power setting and performance are just a mess. Readers' comments are ignored and the author just ignores them and treats them coldly 🙂

So many readers have opinions, are you sure you won't change them? It took so long to ink someone from the motherland? How strong is your motherland? When we competed with the Invincible Young Hero before, we were able to change the landscape of the canyon. Can the people of the motherland do the same? You wouldn't create a plot where you wrote so many chapters to prepare, and then the protagonist punches you and kills it, right? I don't quite understand what you want to do.

Everything else is fine, except for copying Soldier Man's abilities. Author, did you even copy Soldier Boy's preferences? Looking for an aunt to be your girlfriend?

I don't know how the author wrote the outline. He did not suppress the areas where combat power should be suppressed, but suppressed the areas that should not be suppressed. It's so easy to use abilities. It takes 55 to open a fight. It's really a waste of time to solidify so many abilities. As for the psychic ability, what is the difference between you directly forcibly controlling it and fast-forwarding the plot? When used frontally, it can increase personality charm and gain points for charisma, and when used backwards, it can also hint at implanting weaknesses and write about wits and wits. But in the end, you didn't even write about it, and just skipped the hard control.

The author just wants to suppress the protagonist's combat power so that he can write more (referred to as hydrology) to extend the life of the book, but he does not want to be self-defeating and make more people not want to read it 😥

No wonder you are on the street, so many people are unhappy about insisting on insisting on it, who would spend money to buy history?

Is it possible for the author that the Invincible Young Heroes universe where the protagonist is located is not the main universe but may be a parallel universe. There are many Invincible Young Heroes in the parallel universes who have chosen to be villains and follow their father's will. There are very few instances of being good guys like this universe.

The protagonist has the abilities of many characters such as a soldier boy. In order to fuck the people of the motherland, he still has to find helpers to restrain the people of the motherland. If you can see it, watch it.

It's originally a fun article, but it's not as good as fighting. If you don't like it, who will read it? You don't even know what readers want to see 😴

Let's go, your combat power is like shit. The author doesn't listen to the readers' opinions, so you can just continue with your bullshit combat power.

This is a novel that was thrown off the streets due to procrastination🤣. Originally, the front part was just enough food.

The main character is really flying. With so many superpowers, you can't beat the people of the motherland? There's no need to list anything else. Soldiers and super-fast people can also fly. Doesn't this mean that you can beat the people of the motherland by hanging them? Do you really regard the people of the motherland as superhuman beings?

He wrote himself into a dead end, and the protagonist's combat power was reduced to a sidekick.

What did the author think later? Why suppress combat power? Don't you know that the core of your book is combat power? Don't overwhelm your combat power even if you have hydrology! Purely disgusting!

What a shit, damn I can't stand it

The author has been writing like this since before. Every book is like this. It relies heavily on the original plot. Without the original plot, nothing can be written👍👍👍

I gave up, and I couldn't hold on until Chapter 55. The template fixed in Invincible Young Heroes is not weak. To defeat a native of the motherland is like this, and the combat power is suppressed for the sake of better water figures. However, the combat power logic of the plot development has completely collapsed, as if the original Tianzun was drained of mana by the mortal Yin Jiao, and the overall logic has collapsed.

The intensity of the setting in the Black Robe drama is this, but it is not shown because of the lack of funds. Even with enough funds, exaggerated scenes can be shown. For example, the setting of the Motherland is that no weapon known to mankind, including nuclear bombs, cannot break through the defense. When the butcher learns that the soldier boy has been "killed", his first reaction is at least a hydrogen bomb-level weapon, that is, it is impossible to kill the soldier boy below the level of a hydrogen bomb. If this is not convincing enough, there is an official interview with the author and creator of Invincible Young Heroes. He personally said this. An analysis believes that the strength of the motherland is more than that of Mark in the early stage, and he is a very difficult opponent. In other words, this kind of evaluation also includes the factor that the author of Invincible Young Master boasted about his own son Mark's fighting ability. After comparing Mark with the Motherland, and also comparing Mark with the comic Hulk and Thanos in the later stage, the author of Invincible Young Man believes that Mark can kill them both in the later stage... Let's not talk about the exaggerated performance of these two comic characters. The genuine Superman can't say that he will definitely win against them, especially the latter. It can only be said that the preference for his biological son is too obvious. There are pictures to prove it.

It's not completely enjoyable, and the plot is broken.

What's going on? A eunuch? I have voted for so many monthly votes, why do I need to fly?

As for the people and the author, 😭😭😭

Just like a single-player game, if you want it to truly feel like a story, your protagonist must first have a heart

This suit is very nice