Cultivation: My Hard Work Is Bound to Pay Off

I just want to know what are you doing? No matter how much you keep getting into trouble, someone will kill you!

It feels like the rhythm lately is not quite right. After entering the sect, it was too bloody. How to say it? Yes, the protagonist is targeted too frequently. Everyone, just be patient, half or more than half of the people have ill intentions towards the protagonist. Well, this is actually not bad, but there are too many unlucky things, so the author should pay attention to the frequency. Then there's the sect. The sect's training of ordinary disciples is nothing like a sect. The culture of newborn blood is a little too uncultured. Then there's the protagonist's character, but the type of book is like that, so there's nothing we can do about it.

I can't help but complain, every time the heroines appear outside, they "stand barefoot", what's wrong? Can't afford shoes?

Overall, it's okay, but it places too much emphasis on "peace is the most important thing." How can I put it this way? I quite like having the villain set things up for the protagonist. I felt a little "angry" while watching it. But it's not always smooth when you deal with the villain, and the protagonist still has to suffer when the villain dies. In the end, this "anger" has nowhere to vent. You can't write the protagonist as being "heavy as a mountain" when being bullied, and then write the villain as "as light as a feather" when dealing with it.

The front is okay, and the protagonist seems relatively stable. But when I came to Zongmen later, I often felt that I was doing it for the sake of 🐶, and the characters were not so likable.

I always feel that the writing style drops a lot after forty or fifty chapters.

While this book talks about not considering getting married and having children until the end of spiritual practice, it also wants to write about the two women who are entangled in each other. It's too tiring to read. They are mother-in-law and mother-in-law. If they continue to be separated, they will be messed up.

From the perspective of Xiaobai: This is a good article From the perspective of a master's masterpiece: You can go and see the author, this weird world, I use my body to control all things This book, 1. Your fighting scenes are too childish. You are impulsive and irritable at every turn. You kill your opponent with a flash of red eyes. The opponent will always be a fool. After your partner is simply killed by the pig horns, you will always be a brat without thinking about running away. You dare to kill my classmate. It is too retarded. Every enemy is always retarded. I think this is really brought out by the author's poor writing, which is a big poisonous point. 2. The language and gestures used to describe female characters are not sophisticated enough, and it smells like anime. However, if the author is a young man, most of his experience with women is from watching TV, anime, and novels such as Immortality. It's not the author's fault. There are not many authors who can write women well, so you can't ask for too much. Miya Shimizu really smells like the eldest lady in Immortality. . . The style of writing is too ancient, this is considered a minor drawback, 3. It is obvious that Goldfinger is described as a late bloomer at the beginning, and the protagonist also has the idea of ​​not being anxious and putting safety first. It is a very reasonable idea, but in the end, he becomes a congenital before the age of 18? What are you worried about, author? You golden finger, so what if you only cultivated immortality at the age of 50? Instead of describing too much time and fearing that too much prefaced content about cultivating immortality will scare away readers, just say that in 10 years, so-and-so pig horns will be successful in health-preserving skills. That's it. After that, it will be hurried, Chinese-style young geniuses, wishing to blow up the earth at the age of 3, and emerge from the solar system at the age of 5. It's not that you can't write, but why did you take your time in describing it in the first 10 chapters? Inconsistent behavior. The writing style has also changed. As the novel becomes more powerful, it describes more and more the various waves of pig horns, and it loses the vigor of being cautious at the beginning. Hey, it's another novel that tries to sell the meat of a sheep's head.

I really want to give this to all authors. Take less advantage and accumulate more virtue, so that the upper limit of the book will be higher.

Now that I've seen the foundation building part, I won't say whether it's tough or not, the content is okay, but the author is really a bad namer. . There are a bunch of online game skill names in the article about cultivating immortals, it's too ridiculous