Cultivation: My Hard Work Is Bound to Pay Off

I just want to know what you're trying to hide for? No matter how much you hide, you'll still get into trouble, someone will kill you!

The pacing feels off lately. Entering the sect has been incredibly bloody. How to put it? Yes, the protagonist targets others far too frequently. Everyone's gotta bear with it, but half, or even more than half, of the characters harbor ill will towards him. Well, that's not so bad, just a lot of bad luck, so the author needs to be mindful of the frequency.

I can't help but complain: every time the female leads appear outside, they're always "barefoot." What's wrong? Can't they afford shoes?

Overall, it's alright, but it places too much emphasis on "harmony is paramount." To put it simply, it really enjoys having the villains trip up the protagonist, which left me feeling quite frustrated while reading. However, the villains are never dealt with decisively; they die while the protagonist suffers. This frustration ultimately has nowhere to go. You can't write about the protagonist suffering immensely while the villains are dealt with with utter indifference.

The beginning was alright, and the protagonist seemed quite composed. However, later on, when he entered the sect, it often felt like he was acting like a dog for the sake of acting, and his character wasn't very likable.

I feel that the writing style declines considerably after chapters 40 or 50.

This book claims that one shouldn't consider marriage and children until the end of spiritual practice, yet it also focuses on the complicated relationship between two women, making it exhausting to read. It's so tedious and indecisive; hesitation only leads to more trouble.

From the perspective of a beginner's writer: this is a good article. From the perspective of a top-tier author: You should check out this book, *The Bizarre World, I Suppress All Things with My Physical Body*. 1. Your fight scenes are too childish. You're easily impulsive and quick to anger, killing your opponents in a flash. The opponents are always portrayed as idiots.

Here's a piece of advice for all authors: try to gain less profit and accumulate more good deeds; that's how you build a book with a higher potential.

I've reached the Foundation Establishment stage. Putting aside whether it's realistically challenging or not, the content is alright, but the author is truly terrible at naming characters. There are so many online game skill names in this cultivation novel; it's so jarring.