Weird Stories About Rules: 4016

I am a lover of horror/suspense (especially ghost stories) and have read most of the online ghost stories. I can only say that there are still too many cool ghost stories nowadays. It's not that I can't read them, but there is not much sense of suspense, thriller and reasoning at all. Until I got to this book, the early part was high-pressure, but I could clearly feel that the structure and settings of the entire campus were very grand. Therefore, I felt that the slow pace and overly long foreshadowing in the early stage were understandable. However, it was a bit too much of the protagonist's thinking and death-seeking, which really drove away customers. However, my curiosity about the content made me persist until about 100 chapters. I accidentally caught up to chapter 150 in a day, and then found that I had no money to count. I can give this part an overall rating of 9.5 Out of 10 in the mid-term. The writing may need to be improved, but compared to the excitement of the plot, I can only say that the flaws are not concealed. The wonderful exploration and step-by-step revelation are an exciting and thrilling experience that you cannot experience in other ghost stories. I'll buy some coins later and take a look at the rest, looking forward to the follow-up plot. If there are people who want to join it, I suggest that you can endure the early part, and it will definitely be worth it after reading the middle and later parts. It can be said that it is one of the few rare good and in-depth rules-based articles. This is a professional only seedling.

Save chapters. When will this book be finished? And give me some suggestions. It's purely my subjective experience. I'm just telling you my true thoughts on reading the book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it Some vulgar jokes made me feel very bad when I read them. Not only did I not appreciate them, but sometimes I read them too much. I feel bored because I am a female reader, but my psychological acceptance threshold for books written by men is relatively high. I think the jokes at the beginning are okay, but the more I read later, the more accumulated they become. But to be honest, I really like this style of writing, so I feel uncomfortable. In my mind, this book is a book about rules and weirdness that suits my taste. I think it should be out of the circle, but because of this dirty joke, it is difficult for me to recommend the book to outsiders. If the author doesn't care about his own data and thinks that the audience is the starting point, that's fine. The author himself wants to write like this and it's fine. But for a book fan, after reading the first chapter until now, waiting for several months to accumulate chapters, and being attracted by the rhythm at the beginning, he thinks it is the book that suits him best, but Yes... As for the rest, there is not much to say. I personally feel that it is particularly suitable for film and television suspense stories. The visuals are particularly strong. However, considering the current film and television industry, it is almost impossible to put it on the screen. In a few years, I am afraid that not many people will read this book (unless it becomes popular), and in a few decades, it will be forgotten in the dust. No matter how I write it later, I will order it all (unless the author is in trouble). I just hope that the pace can be faster, and some parts can be refined as much as possible, and I will try to finish it within a few months.

First of all, let me say that these are just some of my feelings. At the same time, because I have only read dozens of chapters, I may be biased. The writing is indeed good, but in my opinion the biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist's purpose conflicts with some thoughts and actions. The protagonist's purpose is actually very clear, which is to get money to save people. What you need to get the money is to stay for three days and then come out safely. Then, the problem arises. The first thing you do when you enter the school is to find loopholes in the rules and get out quickly. Later, the protagonist did not learn when there was a successful example, and did not listen to the advice given by the sports students. I know the school rules by heart but don't follow them. Then he repeated that he wanted to get the money to save people. It's like when running a group, an autistic person with an autistic background wanted to escape quickly, but in the end, the entire group relied on their excellent speaking skills and superb leadership to lead the team to the most dangerous place to fight the boss. Very dramatic. In fact, it would be better to change it to say that a brother or relative is missing and looking for him, or simply an agent of a certain organization. Otherwise, every time you emphasize that your loved one needs medical treatment and you need to get the money, it will become more and more dramatic.

This book is not famous for its plot, but for its complete logic and self-consistent settings, it uniquely creates a world with various rules and strange stories. There are many comments from readers of the first dozens of chapters, criticizing the book for not being exciting enough. This is easy to understand. There are not many such plots in this book, relying on rules for counter-killing. Compared with the story of the protagonist struggling to survive and fighting wits and courage, the style of this book is more like a science fiction novel. First, create a logical and self-consistent world, plan all the clues that the protagonist needs to collect in a certain period of time, and then tell it from the beginning. The shortcomings of this creative method are obvious. Due to the needs of the plot, 01 on the first day had to take information and clues in a way that many people considered reckless and stupid, and even had low intelligence. However, book lovers who are interested in spending the first hundred chapters will find the brilliance of this book, which constantly revisits the foreshadowing laid before, so that every moment is fully explained, and the world like a thousand-layer cake is broken down into details to reveal the rules. Anyway, I think this book is worth reading.

It's a great novel. Don't take it too seriously when the protagonist tries to die in the early stage. Later on, the protagonist slowly grows up. The protagonist's high inspiration is his talent, but he can also easily attract indescribable attention. If something goes wrong in the early stage, you can ask for help, but you are afraid of cognitive errors. In the later stage, the school will definitely be more dangerous. I look forward to the author's follow-up plot development!

It was exciting in the early and middle stages, but it changed in the later stages.

1. The construction of the world and atmosphere is extremely high-quality, which is an important point. 2. The protagonist's thinking process, behavioral motivations, etc. Are difficult to describe in one sentence ( The author is not strong enough in writing. In fact, if he improves the character relationship, emotional connection, thinking process, and gives reasonable behavioral motivations, the protagonist's perception will be quite good, and the whole book will rise to another dimension) 3 . The forced respect in the comments and the author's own yin and yang answers are extremely damaging to the reading experience (extremely!!!) 4. Supplement: Forced explanation is worse than no explanation. It will only appear tough and give people the impression that the focus is on disputes, debates, ridicules, etc., And cannot be respected at all. 5. If the viewing core is placed in the above 1 and accepts 2 (this is actually barely acceptable, not too outrageous, but there are indeed shortcomings), you will have a pretty good reading experience 6. Warning! ! ! Be sure not to read or pay attention to the above 3 and 4, otherwise it will extremely damage the perception of this book (the damage will be very thorough) Finally, I wish you a pleasant reading experience! Book review: Overall, it is extremely high-quality, and it is only short of the above two shortcomings.

Those who like rule-based ghost stories must have read the "Zoo" rule-based ghost story. Everyone has imagined what would happen if I entered this kind of rule-based ghost story myself. Can I find the "real" secret deep in the ghost story? Most of the novels on the market now are based on this, and a large number of rule-based fantasy novels have been born. But, in my opinion, these novels are all superficial. The so-called rules are rules for the sake of rules. The essence is to create a character who enters the rules-based weird story, but there are no rules. If a rule appears, there must be a reason for its appearance. Everyone wants to know why they can't do this. When asked, the answer is because it can't be done and it will crash. Why does it hang? Because doing so will cause a hangover. What about here and here? This book has the rule that "the author can justify himself". The core of the rules should be similar to the "zoo" rules with logic and reasons. On this basis, the author created an ordinary but extraordinary protagonist to enter this world of ghost stories, which satisfies everyone's interest in exploring rule-based ghost stories and can be a good substitute. Follow the protagonist and see who he will meet in the rules-based world of ghost stories. Did you see any weird rules? Can we understand the nature of the world of rules?

The greatest fear comes from the unknown, and all tangible and intangible things have a "shape" In the end, the shape of the god is carved by rules. Go forward, ignorance is always a reason to be fearless. Be afraid, the survival instinct will guide the way. Think about it, people will laugh when they think about gods. Numb it, you can deceive yourself and others by ignoring everything. Despair, the boundless night will eventually come. It's getting dark. Before the night comes, see Him who is unknowable, and you will know Him.

This book is indeed wonderfully written, and I came across it accidentally while listening to it. It is worth mentioning that I listened to the beginning of the book twice. After listening to the first 30 chapters for the first time, I put it aside because the introduction and foreshadowing of the opening rules seemed cumbersome. However, when I picked it up again and listened patiently, I realized what a pity it was to give up before. This is a masterpiece that needs to be understood carefully. In order to experience more excitement in advance, I downloaded the starting point and recharged it, just to not miss the shock and thought it brings. Don't judge a book because of its cover, because the cover is only the external expression of a book, and the real value is hidden in the text. The content, thought and depth of a book are its soul. Just like a person's character cannot be judged by appearance alone, a book may have a beautiful cover but empty content, or it may seem ordinary but contain endless wisdom. Therefore, we should read and understand with an open mind rather than jumping to conclusions based on first impressions alone. "Rule-based Weird Tales: 4016" is an addictive suspense masterpiece. It not only brings a Cthulhu-style horror atmosphere, but also brings the subdivision of "rule-based ghost stories" to the extreme. The author uses delicate writing and highly rigorous logic to construct a world full of unknowns and challenges. The story begins in a seemingly ordinary suburban university. The protagonist Lin Yi and his roommates gradually uncover the hidden mystery because of a "campus rule". Behind the seemingly ordinary rules, there are deadly traps hidden one after another. The rules are no longer protection, but judgment; every breach is the key to the abyss. The most amazing thing about the novel is its rigorous logical chain. Each rule not only promotes the plot, but also becomes a key clue for the protagonist to break the situation. The plot develops so compactly that you can't help but read it in one go, while at the same time savoring the profound meaning behind the rules. As readers say: "Each rule is like a piece of a puzzle, and the final picture is a spine-chilling picture." Of course, the novel is not perfect. The pace of some chapters is a little slow, and the protagonist's motivations sometimes lack depth, but this does not prevent it from becoming an excellent suspense work. If you love rule-based weird stories or suspense themes, then this book is definitely worth reading! It will make you feel the suffocation of surviving within the rules, and at the same time experience the thrill of the confrontation between logic and wisdom.

Alas, I still don't appreciate it well enough. After all, I'm just a casual reader who reads a lot. After reading it again, I was deeply fascinated by the author's excellent writing. I finally understood that my inability to understand the logical motivations of the protagonist's actions along the way through cursory reading was because I was not good enough. Good writing with depth must be savored carefully! This is a good story that is clear and clear but has hidden mysteries. How could it be possible... How could it be possible! Was it misinterpreted as being arrogant and obscure? ! It shouldn't be, it really shouldn't be. In the article, the description that breaks apart the protagonist's thinking process bit by bit can definitely give readers a sense of the protagonist's unique astonishing wisdom and quick thinking. Each paragraph has clear motivations and rigorous logic, and the writing style and prose are amazing. The interesting interaction between Xiao Lin and Xiao Wei brings unexpected surprises. The vivid and interesting, clear and expressive psychological activities are a stroke of genius, allowing readers to experience the immersive and enjoyable experience from multiple angles. How ingenious and creative. Presumably, the author and the protagonist must have one mind, wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! After reading the whole article, I realized that the author is talented and his writing is at least five times more sophisticated than ordinary people! Even ten times! He is indeed a person who is expected to create a new genre of suspense. How can people be dissatisfied with such amazing talent and wonderful writing style?

I am a person who likes to read traditional novels, but I am actually not very interested in the emerging Kejia literature. There are many sets of Pike's stories about upgrading monsters and even invincibility. However, this book really attracted me to follow the latest chapter without interruption. I also had a lot of ideas when I was reading it. I wrote it down to inspire others First of all, let me talk about the points that I don't like or are not used to: 1. The protagonist always triggers many negative events with extremely high inspiration. Although this is also part of the plan, the plot is always promoted. Starting with Lin Yi committing suicide, it gives people a strong sense of frustration and greatly reduces the sense of immersion. Although self-consistent reasons can be found in the later chapters, it can easily lead to early abandonment of the book; 2. It may be to enhance the horror atmosphere, even in terms of exploration. After I went there, I still spent a lot of ink on some elementary enemies, but as a reader, I was no longer interested in these things. Then I saw that the protagonist group was still in danger, and I had a sense of humor about wearing a powerful bull magic suit and fighting with the wolf guards. The following are the points that I think are great: 1. The early description of the environment and atmosphere felt very good, and I really didn't dare to come down to go to the toilet 🥺; 2. The writing is smooth and smooth to read; 3. The characters are well portrayed, everyone has their own action logic and story line, and there is no feeling of being forced to do so. Finally, there are some doubts or immature thoughts. Because I don't have a deep understanding of this type of novel, it is difficult to predict the direction. I simply ask questions to see if the author will see it or understand it: because the Ke system highlights an agnostic and unarguable aspect, but in reality people always think and recognize in the opposite direction. This It gives me a contradictory idea. If it can be known and discussed, then there is nothing to be afraid of. If it is completely incomprehensible, then writing it is just a dream. Maybe it will be interesting in the early stage because of the novelty, but it will soon become boring. I don't know how the author is going to check it, whether he will become stupid and show off like a weird fairy, or sacrifice himself like a best friend's pillar. All in all, I am very optimistic and looking forward to this book. I have paid my monthly ticket and recommended it. When I was thinking about it, I also focused on the two popular masterpieces mentioned above. I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I wish Damai🌹

It's been so long since I've been writing and I haven't seen the protagonist poop, what's the matter? Doesn't the protagonist need to poop?

How should I put it, it feels like the story revolves around very short and frequent events. You can go through several pitfalls when you go to one location, and the story construction is not complicated. The front is okay. I originally thought that seven days would pass quickly, but now that I have read more than 50 chapters, only one day has passed, and I have not entered the dormitory... There are too many words, the content of the story is too small, and there are too many descriptions of the psychological environment (but it is relatively easy to guess the method of dealing with the pitfalls. For example, I have already written n points about ignoring this pitfall. Can I have some new ideas?)

The foreshadowing may be a bit long, and some people say that the protagonist has been thinking about things that he shouldn't think about, but these will be explained in the subsequent chapters. You will not regret it after reading 60 chapters patiently, and don't be affected by some book reviews before it is released. Personally, I even think this book is better than some books that talk about natural selection, live broadcasts, and super powers. It is an original and original geek story. Also, can the author give more updates? It's not enough. Wow, wow, wow🥹

A very good novel. The text description alone has already presented a picture. It is as if you are the protagonist in the book. You are frightened. The more you think about it, the more scared you become. This is the most authentic rule-based ghost story I have ever read.

How awesome🤓👆

It's beautiful🤤, a very good novel. There are too few high-quality books on the subject like Rules and Ghost Stories. Come on🥰

Write it slowly. If the rule text breaks down, it's not like other novels where you can just patch it up. The author keeps writing steadily.

The description is detailed, the outline is thorough, the story is laid out in an orderly manner, the theme is innovative, and the story has a strong sense of substitution and imagery. It's been a long time since I watched it and I felt like I couldn't tell the difference between reality. I watched it for 18 hours to catch up. Come on, author. Looking forward to the next story. Highly recommended. It took me more than ten years to write my first book review for you.

The writing is very interesting, much better than many superficial rules and ghost stories nowadays At present, it seems that the protagonist has a hidden identity, but this hidden identity has not brought him any benefits. Generally speaking, Goldfinger can be said to have no benefits. It writes about the fragility and high tension of ordinary people trying to survive. The proportion of pseudo-harem elements interspersed with male videos is not high and does not affect viewing.

I subscribed and saw Chapter 52. The evaluation is that the author has more problems than the article. First of all, it is admitted that the reading experience at the beginning of the novel is very poor. This has nothing to do with the plot, but a poor reading experience due to the rare protagonist. The specific manifestations are the following two points. The protagonist's logical induction ability is very average (being criticized by Duan Ping as being mentally retarded); secondly, the motivation is unreasonable (for 30,000 yuan to cure a disease, he risks his life to explore the truth). Some people or authors have explained these, but they are completely unconvincing to my understanding. First, the motivation of the protagonist. First of all, the foreshadowing is obvious. The identity of the protagonist is not simple, the motivation of the protagonist is not simple, and curing grandma is not necessarily the correct motivation. It is not difficult for these readers to understand. But the question is, do we know this? Does the protagonist at the beginning of the article also agree that he has another purpose for coming here? The author likes to describe the protagonist's psychology in large sections, and it is clearly mentioned that the protagonist was persuaded by Ryoko's words and believed that he was doing medical treatment for his grandma in order to make money. So no matter what the truth is, his behavioral logic at the moment is to live well and leave safely. This is completely contradictory to him jumping around the edge of the rules to explore the truth. At the beginning, he is an "ordinary person" with pure purpose and high inspiration. Secondly, the protagonist's logical problems and behavioral logic are unclear. A common danger of strange rules is that the rules are unclear and there are traps or contradictions in the rules, which makes it dangerous to act according to the rules. This situation is one of the motivations for the protagonists of many ghost novels to explore the truth in order to protect themselves. But this novel is different. At least in the first fifty pictures, all the rules the protagonist encounters are set for the safety of students, and although following the rules may not necessarily solve all dangers, it can not only ensure the safety of students as much as possible, but also resolve crises under certain circumstances. In this weird world, just follow the rules. Not to mention that there is a Ryoko next to the protagonist who has downloaded the dungeon, and several sports students are giving hints, but the protagonist still questions the rules and always ignores them. It is not until he is in crisis that he suddenly realizes "the rules are right!". I don't understand what the protagonist's sense of crisis is when he doesn't follow the rules? The author later made it clear that the protagonist's inspiration can easily lead him into danger. This is clearly reflected in several small plots in the gymnasium in about 40 or 50 photos. This part of the reading experience is relatively better. But! It's impossible to clean up the protagonist's outrageous actions in the early stage! High inspiration will lead to danger, but the danger in many aspects has nothing to do with inspiration, it is simply the protagonist not following the rules. Secondly, why do some readers say that the protagonist is a smart fool. Rules and weird talk, especially this kind of weird talk space with certain unscientific elements. In itself, you need to understand it according to the rules of this world. But the protagonist always tests the red line of the rules using the experience of ordinary people. Let me give you two examples: "The rules say that after the classroom lights flash, don't lower your head, don't look up, and don't look around." The protagonist's response is, "It's okay if the lights are not completely out." So he raised his head and looked around. "The rules say that you must study by yourself in the classroom before 7:40, and you should not look at the people and noises outside the window during self-study." The protagonist heard the noise outside at six o'clock and began to look outside despite the dissuasion of his teammates. The explanation given is "It's already dawn, the lights have changed, I'll see, it should be fine" Which genius came up with this stupid logic? I understand that the author put a lot of effort into the opening and characters, and laid out a lot of foreshadowing. But is it possible that your foreshadowing and your poor reading experience are not things that must occur at the same time? It's normal that you want to gradually explore the rules through the protagonist. But can you leave it to the character Long Tao to do stupid things that no normal person would do? Is there anything wrong with the main character's side-viewing summary? For example, the biggest flaw in the first twenty chapters is that the protagonist himself feels, and is clearly told by others, that thinking outside the rules will lead to danger. He still did this again and again, and finally, in the author's writing, the protagonist very "smartly" concluded "Don't think about things outside the rules." If you throw this series of stupid behaviors to a supporting character, such as the suspense blogger of the game Fanatics and Monsters, and let him commit suicide, and then the protagonist records this rule, wouldn't it be a better reading experience? In the early stage, everyone complained about the protagonist's behavioral logic. If you make the protagonist look like he is being targeted by an abnormal classmate in the classroom, and throw him into a mandatory life danger that cannot be directly solved by superficial rules, then readers will not say anything about how the protagonist explores the rules later.

Reading this novel requires the understanding that the male protagonist's behavioral logic is weaker than that of ordinary people. 🙂. Why, after reading chapter 18, the male protagonist needs to review and think over and over again to draw a conclusion. The readers can probably draw the conclusion on the spot, and not only one person can draw the conclusion, but almost all readers can see it. This leads to the fact that when a large amount of ink is used to describe the conclusion that the male protagonist has experienced after a lot of thinking, there are often comments like "that's it", because readers really feel that this is it! ! If the male protagonist's logical ability cannot be reduced below the level of ordinary people, the reading experience will be very poor. And there is no positive feedback for the male protagonist's actions. Oh, that's right, by chapter 18, there is no positive feedback. On the contrary, the behavior of the male supporting actor, including his logic, is all positive feedback, and he keeps saving the male protagonist. If it weren't for the dual-protagonist route, why would the male supporting actor be stealing the show? There is no problem with the setting of this book, and there is no problem with the plot. The problem lies entirely with the male protagonist. What kind of male protagonist did the author want to write about? I really can't stand the stupid male protagonist. After all, this novel is different from the cool novel that stores the brain. This is a rule-based fantasy novel. Readers can make logical deductions while reading. Some serious ones (like me) can take notes. This leads to the fact that as long as the logic of the male protagonist's behavior is weaker than that of the reader, the anger of "I can fuck me" is really unreadable. What a waste of plot settings. I originally said that I would stick with it until chapter 20 to see if the male protagonist has made any progress, but this is a stupid thing to do and I can't hold on. After all, in less than an hour in the plot, the male protagonist made contradictory decisions such as "think again when we get to a safe zone" and "think about it immediately", which is a profound portrayal of the instability of the mind, not to mention using hundreds of words to let the male protagonist come to the conclusion that the reader came to a chapter or two ago... Even if you let the male protagonist complain that the conclusion he came to is exactly what the male partner is doing, it will not change the result that he looks like a fool.

Key points: My evaluation of this book is "the longest and most rushed novel I have ever seen, but it is also the most Cthulhu-style novel that performs extremely well in the middle period (no one). Avoidance points: Avoidance points I said earlier, this is very important. I think the author has a particularly good sense of writing but It is a poor writing ability, which is manifested in writing according to his own ideas without considering the feelings of more readers. (More importantly, I think the author does not have the writing power to make compromises. The author knows that writing according to his own ideas will definitely drive away customers in the early stage, but he does not have the ability to hint readers or give readers a temporary sense of satisfaction to get through the early stage. A series of persuasive actions by the character). Features: The foreplay is too long, but even with Cthulhu, the mid-term (reading more than 300 chapters) is much better than most unfinished horror masterpieces (so far, there is no obvious balance collapse, and in many well-known horror novels, the collapse has already occurred to the sky). , Failure is also a foreplay. The author is very good at constructing a complete immersive logical chain of Cthulhu horror stories, but he lacks strong conception and poor writing skills. Summary: 1. If you are not a fan of horror novels, there is no need to waste time, please leave it directly. 2. Fans of suspense novels are advised to give up. This group of readers usually focuses on the thriller atmosphere and focuses on the plot and story, especially those with strong stupidity. I don't think you can endure a hundred chapters of foreplay. 3. Horror novel lovers (who like to immerse themselves in a thriller atmosphere), it is recommended to read several other favorite novels at hand (or even go to Archaeological Air Conditioner, Fire, Yixiao, Aunt Shui, etc.), And then you can read this book after there are no more books to read. Personal Thoughts: I endured the stupidity and kept reading because I didn't think there was anything to read (I resisted, but I still commented and scolded it once or twice). It's exactly the same as what many people said. It started to change a little at chapter 60-70 (but I still hate stupidity), and then it got more and more interesting (almost 100 chapters?). At more than 300 chapters, I already feel that this novel has a grander setting (especially the world view), a more complete and self-consistent logic, and a very accurate description of the horror atmosphere. The contrast between the protagonist's mental retardation in the early stage and the gradual completion of the logical chain in the later period is particularly obvious. I think the shortcomings of this novel are that the world view is too grand, and the setting and foreshadowing are too late. As a result, the early stage is very crowded (it is true that the early stage of the novel is extremely crowded), but due to the slow entry, this novel is the most Cthulhu horror-style novel I have read so far. Because if you have a fast pace in the early stage, your early preparation will be very insufficient, and the later settings will be very abrupt and destroy the balance (and destroy the horror atmosphere).

What's the use of so many compliments in book reviews? Talk about getting through it, but in chapter 80, the protagonist still hasn't grown at all and is still bluffing. This is why readers are losing so much. A very simple problem is that buildings in different areas are on different layers, and he has a way to solve this problem. Logically speaking, 01 has been aware of this phenomenon for a long time, so he should be mentally prepared when he sees a new building or a building on other layers, instead of still being "shocked" and thinking, "The sense of space is wrong, is it really a place?" I found that skipping after chapter 40 does not affect reading at all. Why, because the author is emphasizing the same issue. The only difference is that the scene is changed from the dormitory to the cafeteria to the teaching building. It is a pure scene change.

Read Chapter 20 and it will make me angry. The setting is very good. The protagonist is too smart. The student rules and the supporting characters' warnings on how to avoid risks are clearly stated. However, the protagonist turns a deaf ear and has to be beaten to find out. Oh, it turns out that being beaten will hurt! The protagonist must summarize things that others have summarized once, and then come to the same conclusion as others, and then continue to commit suicide. It can only be said that without the halo of the protagonist, this kind of character generally cannot survive one chapter. I finally understand why I was so angry about watching The Nest, because in other supernatural novels, this kind of character is a little loser who always explores the way around the protagonist. When the protagonist is clearly in danger, this kind of character always does not believe in evil, and then uses his own life to help the protagonist explore information. The little fat man and the aunt at the beginning of Infinite Horror, Zhe Tian also had such people when he entered Mars. Various novels have such a pathfinder, but this novel actually uses such characters as the protagonists. I can't understand it.

It's not that the first few dozen chapters are too addictive. After reading almost 20 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I really don't know how high your anti-drug physique is for those of you who can see the exciting parts.

There is something really wrong with the way this opening is written, and this is evident from the many negative reviews of this chapter. Dissatisfaction with the portrayal of the protagonist is the feeling of most normal readers. No matter what great ideas and logic the author has, the portrayal of the protagonist in the early chapters is outrageous. Even if you are setting up the plot for the later chapters, you should not portray the protagonist in such a negative way. The second male lead reminds you throughout the whole process and the sportsman comes to the rescue at critical moments. The protagonist just gets rescued here and there and then makes a fool of himself. Maybe the author can come back after dozens or hundreds of chapters, but to be honest, the number of words in an opening is enough for a novella, and the protagonist still makes a lot of mistakes. This does not mean that the protagonist cannot trigger something to advance the plot, but it is not appropriate to depict a protagonist who has no reason to explore and keeps making mistakes. He still refuses to listen to advice and has no ability to think (I studied five or six chapters with my life and came to the conclusion that the rules should be followed. It is impossible to find the source of motivation for the protagonist to keep doing things. This aspect is purely a problem of the author's writing skills. You can say at the beginning that the bonus is 3 million, and the protagonist must use this money to save his grandma, or because several good brothers were arrested at the beginning Life or death is uncertain, and the protagonist must save them. Even many authors who are not good at writing, the whole task of deus ex machina, must find the answer. The core is: let the readers recognize that the protagonist should explore and find the truth. There may be many secrets hidden in the author's heart, and there are reasons why the protagonist has to explore that the readers do not know. I really don't know. You should at least reveal it more specifically, instead of writing 200,000 words, the main character is still the image of a pig teammate. After all, I really like the design of this novel, but it is a pity that these problems in the beginning are not regrettable. I feel that the deletion of comments in book reviews is quite serious, so I will let it go and help the author improve it in the next novel.

This novel is written... Everyone who can read it is ruthless

What the hell? The original "gram" and "weird rules"? Are Cthulhu and rules ghost stories conflicting with each other? The essence of the Ke system is that fear comes from the unknown, from being unknowable and unable to be understood by others, while the rule ghost talk is a clear rule, and fear comes from the punishment caused by breaking the rules. The combination of the two is like saying that an object moves at a constant speed with an acceleration of a positive real number.