I Am Invincible in Tianshi Mansion

The author couldn't write about Gou's taste. There was still a hint of Gou when he was writing about Demon Appraisal Division in the early stage, but it changed once he left Demon Appreciation Division. If the title of the book is not changed, more than half of the readers will be lost after 50 chapters. People who read the book with the wrong title will start to withdraw after about 40 chapters.

I have read more than 60 chapters, and the 20 or so chapters after reaching the Nine Transformations Golden Elixir and starting to give birth to the Nascent Soul are all very enjoyable, because you can see the protagonist obtain various props and cultivation through the golden finger, and you can clearly feel the protagonist's improvement. The next 40 chapters feel unremarkable, almost all of them are plots where the protagonist pretends to be a pig. Goldfinger almost disappears, and I start to feel bored just watching it. As he writes, the author begins to deviate from the essence. The subject matter is obviously about obtaining various rewards through golden fingers, and the protagonist himself is supposed to play a role that is inconspicuous in the eyes of others. However, the protagonist is dancing in front of his boss, showing off how good he is, and even playing the role of a smart star in front of his colleagues. This is not a simple role. This seems normal at first glance, but the theme of your book is to survive first, then use your golden fingers to brush your cultivation and various props and skills, and then slap all kinds of clowns to death when you reach a higher level. As a result, the protagonist not only did not ignore everyone, but instead pretended to be a pig in front of everyone and made others think you were you. He is an excellent junior and colleague, so forget it. The author has also given all the space to this kind of plot. The content of using gold fingers to brush cultivation and props has been passed over in a single stroke. I read this novel just because the introduction said it would be more exciting. As a result, the plot not only deviates from the theme but also has no excitement at all. This is wearing down people's patience. In the world of cultivating immortals, cultivation and combat power are everything. Conspiracies, power and status are all just a cloud. Once you are strong, you can see cause and effect at a glance, and you can be slapped to death. The protagonist's golden finger can completely allow the protagonist to improve his cultivation level wholeheartedly, and then wait for those scheming clowns to jump out one by one and slap them all to death. The protagonist of a novel with this theme should be invisible to the public, and then focus the exciting points of the plot on the protagonist's process of obtaining skills, props, cultivation, and exercises and the protagonist's various applications, as well as the enemy who works hard to plan everything and finally jumps out and is slapped to death by the protagonist. It feels as refreshing as eating ice cream in the summer, instead of the whole story being about pretending to be a pig in front of your boss and colleagues and making them think that you are excellent. In order to hide yourself, you always fall down and act like a self-proclaimed brat from time to time. This will only make people feel more and more boring and even feel aggrieved. ps: This is an opinion based on personal preference. I am not teaching the author how to write. I am just putting forward my own views on the novel. How to write it depends on the author himself.

It's a very real ancient society of demons and gods. If it were really that era, such a protagonist would indeed be very realistic. Many people say it's OK, but I think it's okay. My reaction is the same. No matter how big the matter is, if you help yourself, you may pay the price with your life. If you can survive without helping, I will probably choose to survive.

I haven't started watching yet. I'm guessing the plot. After Invincible, will he start working behind the scenes and pretend to be a noob? Even if he finds out, he will be speculated by all kinds of tricks.

To say a few words, I have read more than thirty chapters. I can't stand it any longer. It's okay for Gou. Being cautious is also king. But the protagonist goes too far, giving the impression that he is pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. As a result, he forgets that he is a tiger and thinks that he is a pig. What is the real Gou? 1. Make reasonable use of golden fingers 2. The world is busy and rarely participate in the cause and effect of the world 3. Organize information, know what factors in the current world can threaten you, and then avoid them But seeing now, the protagonist will only touch corpses and improve his realm. Then he didn't have the slightest understanding of his own strength, and he didn't look for relevant information for reference. Whether you encounter warriors, foundation builders, golden elixirs, fusions, or land gods, they are all sneaky. The way you write makes it difficult for readers to watch. Currently known power systems: Heaven, Heavenly Master, Tao, Buddha, and evil spirits. But after more than 30 chapters, apart from knowing how much money the monastic system and the Celestial Master system are divided into, I don't know anything about other systems, including the magical powers in each realm of the monastic system and the Celestial Master system. The reader is very tired of reading. Recommend a book to the author. I hope you can find some inspiration. I will live forever in the world of cultivating immortals.

Let me tell you, the writing of this book is okay, but the realm feels so strange to me. I feel that passers-by practice so fast, and they have golden elixirs in their 20s. It is so dramatic, and it is so different from traditional immortals 😭. For example, the Celestial Master surnamed Ling, the talisman given to people can withstand the attacks of the Nascent Soul. She has only been practicing for a few years, is she so stupid? There are also monsters and monsters. They have to practice for hundreds of thousands of years, and they have to practice killing people before they can fight against the four-five-six-dollar Celestial Master, and they will be killed... Wouldn't it be better to just lie down? It's useless to practice killing people. Wrong, I will modify the post. It means that everything below Nascent Soul is fine....

It's rotten and messy, the writing is extremely poor, and there's no desire to carefully craft every word and savor it carefully. The main line is unclear, the pig's feet don't know what they're going to do, passive upgrades, and forced coincidences. The supporting characters are clueless. I only saw the number of words "water" and had no impression after reading it. Pig's Knuckle has an extremely unpleasant personality. The author originally wanted to portray him as lawful and neutral, but ended up writing a bodyguard article. As soon as I read the first chapter, I thought of the ending.

Doesn't the protagonist know some common sense and learn some knowledge? A common problem with this kind of writing is that the protagonist obviously has great strength but lacks common sense. He just doesn't change it, and at the end he says, ah, so I am so strong. He is still a time-traveler. Even if he just came here at the beginning, he will no longer be at the bottom. He knows the dangers of the world but doesn't know how to understand the situation. He just lives for the sake of survival. He thinks he is weak and always takes action. After taking action, he should have seen how strong he is through other people's explanations, but he doesn't. He still thinks that he is weak. It's really disgusting.

It's so damn strange. I felt that the writing was okay, but as I was reading it, I suddenly didn't want to read it anymore. It's weird,,,, it's just a very strange feeling, and it suddenly felt boring.

You know keep pretending to be a pig. . Will he turn into a pig?

The author failed to grasp the refreshing point and essence of Invincible Gou Dao's novel. The protagonist can be stubborn in his thoughts, but not in his actions. Necessary people must show his sage and high-level pretense. However, in more than 50 chapters of this book, I have seen that the protagonist is 9,000 years old and still writes the right words. Just like a passerby, I am invincible at the same level and even fight monsters beyond my level. Everyone looks down on anyone who rides a horse. So there is no point in the protagonist joining the Patrol Guard. Being a free and unorganized person is better than this. At least I don't have to look at anyone with supercilious looks or bad words. This kind of arrangement is really unbearable. Just like there are more than 90 million Alipay and WeChat users, but no one around has heard of Jack Ma and Ma Huateng. I don't know about others, but I think it's quite weird. If the author doesn't make it interesting for most readers, then the book will have no future.

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 120. He is so powerful and yet he has to pretend to be weak.

I've read a dozen chapters and it's okay. Golden elixir stage monks have to run to get there, but the problem is that they are afraid of breaking their legs if they run. This is a good idea, and the author is a great talent.

The protagonist is not strict at all. . I don't know why I keep talking about Gou in the article. .

Come on, author!

There are not many themes, but the combat power system has collapsed. After reading dozens of chapters, some online games commented that I am invincible under the immortals, and I am invincible above the immortals. I can't stop reading. Even when the immortals come, I am invincible. The protagonist has never escaped. The clones can not find a golden egg. It is incredible. It is a bit nonsense that a golden elixir can be called a great magical power. Although the protagonist is the protagonist, there must be logic.

I was watching the protagonist discover that a dragon had taken away the Taoist priest, but the protagonist did not remind his colleagues, and saw most of his colleagues die tragically. This is not a dog, but a cold-blooded one. Is this a time-travel story of a hero who sacrificed his life in an emergency? It is better to write a time-travel story about a gangster. This is more reasonable.

I can only say that I don't want to be stubborn. If I want to be stubborn, I have to reject the kindness of others. You have to be a solitary person, otherwise someone will come to you today and ask you for help tomorrow, and forming a team is the most meaningless for the protagonist.

It looked pretty good at the beginning! Gradually, I felt that the outline was too big and the author couldn't grasp it! The good guys have broken through the Nascent Soul and all five flags have come out! And Erlang Shen Tianting and other things are coming out! I feel like it's a little confusing at the end, and I can't understand what the author is writing! The pig's trotters are so powerful and awesome, and they have given many rewards. When the pig's trotters form elixirs, they are comparable to land gods! It messed up the whole

There is one point I don't know what the author thought about? The little guy from the Demon Slayer Division provoked the protagonist, and the protagonist's psychological activities afterward were narrated as follows. He did not intend to save him, but he had murderous intentions when he provoked him. This part of the psychological transition is a bit abrupt, for a hero who sacrificed his life in his previous life. Since you have chosen such an identity, there are always certain qualities that run through you. Little white plots of mindlessly provoking the protagonist are rarely well-written, so that the conflicting subject becomes another equally good person. For example, the protagonist observes the other party provoking Qingsong, and the protagonist secretly helps. At this time, no matter whether to kill or not, there will be moral support. Wouldn't it be better? I have read some well-written invincible novels. When the protagonist is directly the subject of conflict, he has the ability to solve problems in a crushing way. When highlighting the twists and turns of the plot, they are mostly described from the side or the reverse. The two brothers are very good at removing ghosts. վ' ——Just my thoughts as an old bookworm

It turned out to be surprisingly good. When I saw the title of this book, I wanted to ask if I could survive. Too many novels say that surviving is a lot of trouble, but it turned out that I really survived. Although I did some things because of my strength, I did it secretly, and it was pretty good without being discovered. Commentary, there are too many subsequent manifestations. Normal people would not think of what the protagonist did, but it is inseparable from the protagonist. It just depends on whether the author wants to write about the protagonist being discovered. However, although the protagonist does not have a Nascent Soul, his cultivation method is different. It is probably equivalent to the strength of a land god. He is basically invincible, so it doesn't matter.

I always feel that the articles have been a bit rushed recently, and the supporting characters have obviously lost their wits. Come on, author, calm down, don't be affected by some negative comments, slowly polish the supporting characters, everything you wrote before is fine.

Where is your dog? Buying dog meat with a sheep's head.

This book is too eunuch, the main character has already lost, so there is nothing interesting to read.

The crotch is stretched at the beginning, and the writing becomes more beautiful as you go to the back! Come on! !

The writing is a mess, and the outline is wrong.

The writing is messy, and it makes me look messy too. . . . . .

Yes, the daily detoxification can also recommend a place to sleep, food and grass, all fellow Taoists can take a look.

Jiang Fengyu, Zhou Xuan's chief disciple and fanboy

I saw the modification you mentioned, and it seemed appropriate to write it down. However, it seems that the changes were made in a bit of a hurry. Since it has been written to death, don't take it with you. . I mainly want to share my feelings, just for reference. In fact, there is no need to refer to it, just read it. . I have read a few Gou articles before. But I feel like others are having a great time, while you are stumbling. I couldn't think of the reason at first, but then I probably thought about it. First of all, they are very stable, which means that they can't feel anything wrong, and even if they are discovered, it won't be a big deal. You are so frightened, you feel that if your secret is exposed one day, you may not be annihilated, but you will still be unable to move forward. Then, even if all the enemies you see are not ants, you basically don't have to worry about combat power. You are here, feeling that your own combat power is not clear, and from time to time, there are experts who are described as overpowering the protagonist. In general, people are like a saint leaving the palace to play private visits on private servers, and you are like a thief entering the police station to play Infernal Affairs. However, this is a problem of framework setting and does not involve modification. You can also say that it is self-consistent, no problem. It's just that for me, writing like this doesn't make me feel happy.