Rise of the Mortal Family

Either become mortal enemies and rob them all, or lick them if you can. Don't listen to some blind bastards who have read too many novels about Long Aotian.

With this kind of talent, it is not impossible to seize the body without being cautious. Before you have absolute strength, the closer you are, the more careful you have to be. In the mortal world, most people are ruthless and will do anything for the sake of immortality.

Since many people say it's boring without a harem, let's find another one in Luan Xinghai. Everyone talks about who to choose, Yuan Yao, Zi Ling, Ling Yuling?

I can't think of any reason to let Zhou Yuan go. The two couples conspired to kill the protagonist, and then the protagonist killed the man, kept the woman, and even wanted to take in his daughter in the future. What kind of imagination is this. If you think that the other party will not take revenge, you would definitely eliminate the root cause under normal circumstances, but the author's imagination is so big. He thought that as long as he fired a shot, the other party would immediately kneel down and surrender. I suspect that the protagonist will have a fight with Wen Qing in the future and then conquer Wen Qing. Very poisonous, slipped away

No harem. You write a bird family story.

I have been an old bookworm for many years, and I feel that the main reasons why the current fan books have so-so results are: 1. Freshness I remember that not many of my colleagues have been to Sanjiang, but there is a book called Li Feiyu, who studied the Hierarchy of the Moon Sect and Qingdi Muhuang Gong. As a refreshing writer, the writing is very good, the style is concise and simple, and there is no ink. The content and story are average, but it's a pity that it was sold out. Another book, The Daily Life of the Hidden Moon Sect, is fresh and the author treats women with no scruples about meat and vegetables. Because few authors have touched Nangong Wan before, he did it, but it was a bit of a relief. The battle was chaotic and unsystematic. Suitable for readers who like to read stallion stories. The so-called freshness means following the main route while having different ideas. Let readers know the author's core point of expression in the shortest possible time. Personally, I prefer Li Feiyu's book. It does not blindly follow the rhythm of the original work and clearly defines its own path. 2. Sense of repetition: At present, when I read the fanfic, I feel that it looks the same. If I replace Han Li and change the name of the main character, it will be a fanfic. The resources are the same, but the events are similar. It's all that set of resources, and there's no real path for the fan protagonist. Small changes would be plagiarizing the original work, while big changes would be selling the work as someone else's. The mortal world is such a big world with so many resources, why can we only follow Han Li's path? 3. Combat Power Too Raked First of all, the original work of Mortal is original. The author uses Han Li's perspective to show the world of immortality in the author's writing. Naturally, a lot of various fighting and techniques are introduced. Let readers slowly understand the world. What about fan fiction? Always lost in confusion. Just like a crazy person who goes to the widow's village and wants everything, including puppets, clones, spiritual pets, and magic circles, the visual effects are full. But there is no main method. Chaos. The author of the third original work has defined the system, but the fanfic still can't find its own way. Do you need to learn the art of divine refining? After taking away so many resources and skills from Han Li, believe it or not, the Lord of the Reincarnation Hall will let the protagonist reincarnate again. 4. Overlapping resources. Authors of fan fiction all start their chapters by clearly stating that they are grabbing resources. Whatever Han Li has, the protagonist of the fan fiction must take the lead. So will Han Li be invincible if he has those resources? Why is it called Han Paopao? Han Li's biggest plug-in is the Little Green Bottle, around which he finally understands the way of time. What did the protagonist realize? Fans also have plots, but this plot is not a Tao, it is just made up for the convenience of grabbing resources for the main plot. 5. Heroine The heroine of fan fiction is basically defined in Novice Village, and the upper limit of women in Novice Village is often not high. The original work only confirmed the heroine when Han Li entered the Nascent Soul stage. The others were all led by Han Li's pursuit of truth. There are too many books in which the female protagonist is turned into a pendant and ends up on the street because of selfishness. I understand that the world of cultivating immortals is definitely different from the world where mortals live. The choice of Taoist companions is very important. Don't define Taoist companions directly for the help and ability of so and so. As far as they are in Novice Village, they can be a mutually beneficial relationship for trade, cooperation, maids and concubines, or a master-disciple relationship. It is best not to be a Taoist couple. People in the world of cultivating immortals have a longer lifespan than ordinary people. Don't use mortal thoughts to suppress your thoughts of cultivating immortals. Female cultivators are also monks. Equality, mutual benefit and win-win results, rather than pity, sympathy and machismo. 6. Storytelling: The fan fiction is not the original work, so there is no need for the author to lead readers to relive the story of how a novice reaches the top step by step. Therefore, the starting point of fandom does not need to be defined so low. If you watch too much, there will basically be nothing to watch. If you think outside the box, it will be clear. A good story can avoid many of the problems mentioned above. Don't ruin the reader's attention just for a few resources, your favorite woman, etc. Just to get in. Except for stallions.

The author should stop insisting and go into the factory to screw in. If the introduction is awesome and the result is a plug-in, it will be garbage. When writing about fan fiction, open up the plug-in and just write the article happily. First, make money and eat, or do something original. As a result, you want to get original traffic and suppress the protagonist in every way. Complete It's all thankless. To be honest, the fantasy genre is supported by a little bit of emotion. (Don't tell me it's a fairy tale or something. Nowadays, all novel websites don't have martial arts and fairy tales. They are all fantasy.) I suggest the author change the track and write about entertainment. First, spend some bad money. He said that most people in their 80s and 90s still read novels. As long as they are not overturned, there are still a lot of people who buy into those female celebrities. Whether they are pure love or scumbags, many people buy into it. Emotional dramas will not be bulldozed directly. As long as they are written in a subtle way, there will be no problem. Now everything There are websites that rely on the two major categories of fantasy and urban. Science fiction, western fantasy, and history are not suitable. Novels in these three categories need to have something in your head. In the future, you will remember that writing fantasy novels is fun. Most readers will correct the bad things in the comment area if they can. It makes money and is not shabby.

Family power? Then you can't marry thirty or fifty? Or the more the merrier? 🙂

That resume of yours is for nothing! The introduction was written in a classy way, but at first glance it turned out to be rubbish!

His natural shortcomings looked like an outline. He handed over his most important secrets to a woman he had just met, and treated the skills of the transformation stage as cabbage. Don't tell me that the technique can be copied. The original version has Qingyuan Jianjue, because it is from a large sect like Huang Maple Valley, and there is only half of it. Others only practice the techniques to reach the golden elixir, but you just go straight to the direct transformation of gods. You are also awesome, and you only have 800 low-grade spiritual stones. You should at least make a secret. If you want to give the protagonist a divine transformation skill, pick one up at a roadside stall, or kill a monk to get it, or encounter an ancient monk's cave.

It has been identified that the protagonist is a "little teddy in heat"!

I'm going to let Mo Caihuan start practicing. Do you have any good suggestions?😍

I'll be poisoned immediately after seeing 3 of them. No matter how poisonous the 3 golden ones are, I'd better find a job in an electronics factory.

For someone from this family, shouldn't the pig's trotters be a hundred or two hundred years older than Han Li? Then Pig's Foot's descendants competed with Han Li, Pig's Foot was easy to show off, and then when Han Li formed the elixir and Pig's Foot became Nascent Soul, he could continue to show off.

He's so awesome, yet he's looking for death by breaking the formation and exploring ancient tombs

This book is not a harem story, but a story with multiple female protagonists. There are currently 4 stories (3+1, 3 planned, and one was added after everyone said it was too much). There is also a supporting character whose brother is responsible for running the harem. By the way, read the author's comment, the protagonist is infertile in the early stages. If you don't mind, don't watch it, it will be very disgusting.

Also, since you are writing about a family, it is not suitable to write about a small number of people, because you must follow the plot. If you follow the plot, the protagonist's strength will increase, and no one in the family will be able to keep up, which is very useless. It will appear that the protagonist is a nanny, and there are too many people. Occasionally one or two members can help the protagonist when he has an adventure. If you want to write with a small number of people, you have to travel back in time much earlier, so that the developed family can be able to help the protagonist at the beginning of the plot.

I really like to wear the word "ah" on my tail. The word "ah" is used by children and women to show off their cuteness. As a man, I really don't like the word "ah" on my tail.