Sprint: This Champion Is a Little Strange

Your writing this time isn't as rigorous and professional as last time! The first non-Black person to break the 10-second record was Patrick Johnson of Australia in 2003 with a time of 9.93 Seconds!

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I have no problem with you writing about the entertainment industry, and I'll even host a harem story. The female lead you chose, Zhang Xinlin, is fine, but what about Karen Mok and Jane Zhang? Are they even pretty? There are plenty of good-looking actresses in the entertainment industry. It's just that the author must be really hungry. And look at the face of the actress you chose as the female lead – it's completely ruined!

It turns out the free chapters are the book's peak. I think the author has gone astray, desperately trying to make the theme less monotonous, but lacking the writing skill, resulting in a disjointed and incoherent mess. You need to understand, the entertainment articles I randomly clicked on recently are all better than what you've written. You've completely lost sight of the bigger picture.

I'm completely numb. This is a sports novel, man! It's supposed to be a sports novel! I can accept you occasionally having sex, but now all you do is have sex, right? The beginnings were pretty good, but now you've gone crazy and can't write a normal sports novel anymore, right? If the last ten chapters are still like this, I'm unfollowing.

Like the previous book, the biggest flaw is still the writing about women. While the praise for athletes is quite good, the praise for women is just awkwardly written. If you don't have the writing skills, go study entertainment literature.

Seeing Karen Mok's writing is unbearable. Out of so many female stars, why choose to write about someone so incredibly ugly? She may sing well, but I just can't accept it. The author's aesthetic sense is truly astounding.

Could you please label the chapters featuring women or the chapters featuring running? Thank you. Please make sure the two types of content are not mixed together, otherwise it will be nauseating when subscribing.

In the last few chapters, only one is related to sprinting... This is undoubtedly a female-centric novel disguised as a sprinting story.

The free chapters depicted the emotions very well, but the chapters after they were released started to go haywire. They'd be innocent for a moment, then suddenly it was like an animal world. If you're going to start something, just say so openly; it feels like they gave you the beginning and then made you sign up for paperwork.