Following in Bolt's Footsteps

Let me give you a suggestion: write less about emotions and nonsense. Unless you are a real-life example, even a great sports writer will easily fall over if you do this. Women can only be embellished or not included in sports articles. They must bring the fighting buff. The second thing is, since it's Deep Blue, don't be too slow. If you don't follow the technical path to control the rhythm, it will be like the King of Dash next door. Tens of thousands of collections + 100,000 fans. As a result, there were 6 monthly tickets on the first day and 12 chapters on the second day. Reader stickiness is extremely low. The purpose of adding points is to be fun and fast. Only those who like this approach should watch this type of game. Don't make a dark blue game with added points and shout about hard work and science every day. It's so funny that it doesn't please both sides. Sprint novels are basically aborted, and only a few survive. I wish the author good luck, collect them, and read them later.

It's an okay sports article, the author is very detail-oriented. The event information will be marked in the chapter, and there is no word count, which is great! The emotional line is actually quite good. Putting aside personal life, if you like a single female protagonist, you can watch it. Those who want to read sprint sports articles can also read it. I rewarded you with 500 points, cheers for the author! Then: The book is okay, but there are too many private goods and it is too exaggerated Complaints: 1. The heroine, I am not a fan of Lin Yoona, I just want to read sports articles. So my feeling is that the emotional drama actually has its highlights and the writing is okay, but did you abruptly change the sports story into a fan story about Yoona Lin??? If the author had wanted to, I would have preferred to develop the emotional line while in Korea, instead of wearing a Chinese guise and using the core of a Korean woman. The most outrageous thing is that he started speaking Korean and talking about Oppa. You were just talking about the anti-Japanese plot in the team, and then you started? 2. The role of the protagonist should be to advance some things and make things better, rather than just the protagonist's suggestion. This is very strange to me personally: pretending for the sake of pretending. Coupled with the heroine, this gives me a feeling of entertainment. 3. The handling of memes, including the appearance of Li Jian's lyrics, is very stiff. It came without warning, and then passed by inexplicably. The function of many memes is to enrich the protagonist, but the appearance of memes seems to be just for fun. What are the hints and notes from the water polo player and reporter Li in front of me? If it was to show the protagonist's devotion to the heroine, then why didn't we just go through it without describing it later, and it ended inexplicably? The teacher took the male protagonist to a dinner party as if he was ungrateful. I agree with this, but I think it's too exaggerated, the way I wrote it above. You can use your strength to fight against these petty profiteers, rather than venting them on the people around you, let alone have their own reasons. This kind of plot didn't show the male protagonist's confident qualities, but instead made me hate it. I can understand the behavior, but it does feel like a person just taking a message and starting to complain, which is very similar to Liu Xiang back then. 4. Fans' response and the impact of the event. I've really wanted to complain about this for a long time: (1) It's okay for the female protagonist to build a fan club, but the description is too much. You can have fans, but can you have more fans in the early stage? Can there be such a big reaction? Should the author highlight the process of fans growing from few to many? This is the process of chasing greatness. Now this is more like an entertainment article disguised as sports. (2) The impact of the event is too exaggerated. These are some global competitions that few people pay attention to. There are actually only a few Asian Games. I feel that if they are not organized by my family, their impact will be limited. I think it is better to give a setting: the male protagonist is very handsome. Then the fan base becomes larger and larger, becoming like Yao Ming to Chinese basketball, which begins to influence the next generation's love for sports and the improvement of the youth training system. 5. I suggest changing the title of the book. Chasing Usain Bolt really didn't attract me, and I even had no desire to open it. If it weren't for the lack of sports articles, this book would still be at the bottom of my "slowly picking" book list. It would be better to change Bolt to a dream or some abstract word. Summary of disadvantages: The entertainment article is disguised as sports, but it is professional but heavy on entertainment routines. The description in some places is too exaggerated, and the writing style has room for improvement; I hope to change the title. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions. I have only read Chapter 72. Maybe I will change my mind later? But I can't watch it now, maybe I'll watch it in the future? (Definitely next time🐶) Of course I don't want the author to change the outline!!! I hope the author will not touch these pitfalls in the next book. It is selfish to say that it discourages me. If my behavior is so disgusting to the author, just delete it and treat it as my fart/dog head to save my life.

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It is recommended that you do not write down cadence and stride length if you are not good at arithmetic. Chapter 25, I see your average cadence is 4.05, And your average stride length is 2.41. Calculated in this way, his 100 meters is 10.245 Seconds. But when Zhang Peimeng ran 21.53 In the 200 meters, his best result in the 100 meters in 2004 was only 10.80. For your reference, how much is the difference? 🤤

Oh, I got it!

There is an obvious bug in this book: the system has the function of detecting physical status, why not detect it at any time? Adjust the competition and training according to the detected physical condition, and there will be no chance of quitting the race after starting.

I saved another 50 chapters and I felt really good reading it in one go 😁😁 Congratulations to Su Shen, Lao Xie, Tom and Qiang for winning the Olympic relay bronze medal🥉🥉🥉🥉🥉🥉🥉🥉🥉🥉

It is a very good sprint novel. The author is really dedicated. Many important places are shown with pictures and videos, and the running process is also described in detail. Compared with other sports sprint articles, his character descriptions are not diluted too much. You can also feel the emotions of relatives or every athlete. It is really good. The audience for sprint articles is relatively small. It is really good to write well and persist.

This is the right way to write it. Everyone comes to read the book to have fun. I am also a fan of Bolt. Anyway, I hope someone can surpass him, whether in reality or in fiction. He is already a legend in reality. Anyway, the novel is just YY. The most important thing is that you have fun reading it.

Why don't you write about sports in the next book? I think it's good to write about sports.