Taojun: Starting from the Small Official in the Immortal Court

It's nothing, it's just that it's too taxing to look at. I scratched my head and realized I didn't know which book I had thrown it in, so I gave up.

The writing style is mellow and sophisticated, the characters are plump and three-dimensional, the background is detailed and grand, and the plot is ups and downs. It is a rare masterpiece of Xianxia, ​​highly recommended!

I'm so tired of watching it. The story progresses slowly. You can have strategies and tricks, but you can't be mainstream in the extraordinary world. You have to practice at the same time to be scheming. Practice has no decisive role. You are a strategic official fighting in extraordinary skin. Moreover, there are too many enemies around the pig's feet. It's not good to have a helper and teammate. I'm tired😫

After reading more than ten chapters, I got the impression that the top prestigious schools in 985 and 211 are recruiting people, but they only teach high school knowledge. To graduate, you need to take the university graduation exam and submit a graduation thesis. Otherwise, you will only be given a high school diploma after graduation. There is no 985, 2 11's double certificate (I only watched the plot of Spirit Seed. The sect does not issue spiritual seed skills, and the disciples of the sect are required to bring their own spiritual seed skills to practice. Isn't this just like when you go to university and need to bring your own textbooks to learn knowledge by yourself, and then the university issues you dual certificates for the graduation assessment)

It's really bad. When you enter the Taoist temple, you don't even have to hand in the most basic things, which is equivalent to not teaching calligraphy in school. . . . There is no logic to force the halo of the protagonist

It's too hasty. It's like trying to rush a duck to market. It creates conflicts everywhere and doesn't even give the protagonist time to develop.

History should be written. Xianxia's conspiracy and palace battles are not popular. No matter how many calculations are made, it is better to upgrade to a level.

Machiavellian tactics are neither fish nor fowl, practice is neither fish nor fowl, painting a tiger is not the opposite of a dog, imitation of others

There are too many conspiracies, and there is no basic base of its own. It is simply unreliable to just rely on others. Moreover, I don't see any benefit of being upright. Cultivation of immortality relies on understanding and does not look at resources. I don't know why I put myself in such a difficult situation. It's been taken off the shelves and I won't read it anymore.

This book is very frustrating to read and the dialogue is very awkward. The style is a bit like that of a book ten years ago. I wanted to write a show-off and slap in the face but it ended up being very frustrating. IQ is barely online. I don't like this book.

After reading more than 40 chapters, it seems that it is the path of Daoting. In fact, it is still written in the style of casual cultivators. The techniques, spells, resources, and magic weapons are all obtained from outside. The benefits of joining a faction are basically the same as none.

If I read it correctly, this is a Machiavellian story. The first three chapters are all about speculation and calculation. A lowly person with no cultivation is calculating this and that. Tsk, tsk, this writing style is in vain.

I'm most annoyed by a protagonist who has a lot of things going on at the beginning.

Very good, keep persevering and you will get results later.

The most annoying thing is to see this kind of writing about cultivating immortality on the surface, but in fact it is still about interpersonal relationships and various struggles. Instead of doing this, you might as well write about official battles and calculations.

What's the use of joining this Taoist court? I haven't paid any money. I rely on love to generate electricity. There are a lot of things when I first entered the spiritual practice.

See before listing. Frankly speaking, there is nothing wrong with the author's control of the text, but it is too scattered and the camera is not focused. To put it bluntly, it is just tiring to read and not interesting.

This chicken is completely forcing its IQ to be online. It looks awkward and too deliberate.

Before it was put on the shelves, the writing was pretty good. Not to mention Fengshen, if I kept it up, I should have no problem with Wan Order. But after it was put on the shelves, I started writing randomly. The protagonist is upright, born as an immortal official, and the road to becoming an immortal is beginning to take shape. Under the yin and yang, there is a bright and righteous path. The way of being an official is to save the people from fire and water, and to work step by step in the country to win over the sky, which coincides with the way of spiritual practice. Golden Finger, the road to unity through all methods. An upright classical fairy tale. The character changed after it was put on the shelves. There was no distinction between grudges and grudges, and the plot was unclear. Especially the story was written in an anticlimactic manner, which was contrary to the original character design of the protagonist. The story no longer has the uprightness and grandmaster style at the beginning.

Maybe I've read too many newbies, and it's too tiring to see this kind of writing. The relationship between the characters could have been explained in a simpler way. Your seemingly advanced writing style is too retro. The necessary narration and foreshadowing can actually fill up a lot of words.

Are you the eunuch who wrote the top-grade golden elixir?

To achieve such a great achievement, if you start from a small official. Then don't subscribe

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The writing style is first-class, the logic and planning are meticulous, the layout is broad, and the writing is profound. This is the prototype of a masterpiece. I don't believe that newcomers have this skill. Who is the author? Please tell me and let me pay my respects😛

Can the author update more every day or have more words? All of a sudden it was gone.

I read it in one sitting, with twists and turns in the plot and wonderful dialogue. A rare good book! Come on! Author

I just saw the author in the review section of another book saying that for newcomers and new books, the number of people who read them is very important, as it determines whether a good book can continue to be written, so I would like to appeal to those who like to keep books. Even if you keep them first, it doesn't matter, but please turn to the last page and encourage everyone. I came here to slide the page number 😁

Not bad, keep it up and update it steadily.

It's very well written, it feels like a big fight.

I discovered this book when it was just over ten chapters old. Overall, it is very good, a bit like Qing Emperor and Chunyang. But your update is too embarrassing. In any case, as a senior lover of classical fairy tales, for me, the more novels about classical fairy tales, the better. So I still have to vote monthly to support it.