Clan Cultivation: Building a Foundation from the Start

Xuanjian Immortal Clan, go and see what other people write!

The title of this book is really rubbish! There are a lot of this kind of book titles when you search them. They are very homogeneous and have no appeal at all. Please replace them quickly! ! !

Just like this book, this is a flowchart carved out of a mold. Do you think you can still make money from this?

Lao Mo has several problems that if not solved, it is estimated that all future web articles will be copied from Qinglian. The first problem is that as the level of the male protagonist increases, the level of people all over the world increases. Mahayana is as numerous as dogs, Taoist ancestors are walking all over the streets, and top-notch weapons are flying all over the sky 😥. In addition, there is no concept of time and distance. , Often thousands, tens of thousands or even hundreds of millions or trillions of miles (years); Buddhism has Sumeru (mountain) hidden in the highest realm of mustard seeds. It is not better to be bigger and longer. Watches seem to be much more expensive than alarm clocks; the writing of fighting skills and monster fighting and upgrading is indeed very exciting, but because it is too long, it is basically the same. It can be controlled appropriately 🤭

Can't we just give the book a normal title? This kind of name feels like systematic writing, which is unreliable!

The family portrait is better as a group. The writing style should be strengthened. There are many characters in the Qinglian family, but the dialogue is too plain.

The Immortal Lord of Ten Thousand Beasts is also rubbish. I haven't made any progress after writing it for so long. Talking to people is as numb as a robot. Fighting is 😆 It's always a set of moves. Just change the name and copy it.

Keep up this perfunctory style, order for three hundred, and I don't know if I'll have it for thirty (><)

One hundred thousand words will be put on the shelves. How many initial orders do you want? You are crazy about money.

The human world written by Qinglian is relatively good, but the various settings of the spiritual world are the beginning of the whole book's failure. The spiritual realm and the enlightenment are as messy and messy. What's even worse are the time fairy weapons and various ripening tools, which are a bit like the current overflow of hormones. Can't you use some heaven and earth spiritual water to speed up the ripening? Also, I frequently receive a bunch of magical and magical artifacts just to make up the word count, and the elixir that lasts ten thousand years is even more nonsense. It can be matured for 500 million years. What more elixir is needed?