Dao Lord: I Have a Stele of Enlightenment

In Chapter 1, Poison Death, the protagonist's three spiritual roots cannot complete the sect's assessment even though they have plug-ins (there is no bottleneck in cultivation/level up once the proficiency is reached), then the others must have heavenly spiritual roots, or even Taoist and divine bodies to pass the assessment?

The dialogue is so robotic and the introduction is so dry, it is hard to believe that this was written by a person who has written over ten million words. A huge fireball the size of a water tank! Hahaha! Does every book have to be written like this?

If you insist on making a fool of yourself, it will not only waste your time, but also wear away the patience of the readers! That "Family Cultivation of Immortality: The Beginning of the Foundation Building Period" is 110,000 words long and still has 5,000 collections. Yours is 110,000 words and only a little over 3,000, as you can imagine! Most of your readers come here for the two main points: family-style ➕traditional fairy tales! As a result, if you write system articles and panel flows, there will be fewer readers! Moreover, if you throw away your family and traditional cultivation, you will throw away most of your fans. What advantages do you have in competing with those on the list who have been writing system articles for a long time? The fans have left, and the experience is not as rich as others. It is just a young virgin entering a brothel! I really don't know what you think! Readers have just come out of Qinglian, and you are still in the foundation building period of writing a new book. It is natural for everyone to take care of you, but in the end, you are anxious and cut the book directly after 50 chapters! Then, if you said you would stop for a month, everyone would look forward to it even more, and then you come up with a book like this! I remember at the beginning, I seemed to have said that I wanted to write a Qinglian trilogy or several parts in the future? In addition, the ending of Qinglian is not perfect, so I believe that there are definitely many book friends who are looking forward to the subsequent family series! There are many people who write traditional family stories about cultivating immortals, but there are only a few people who can finish it or insist on writing it. You are still the one who carries the cauldron, but in the end you even want the cauldron and go to write the system text naked! Disappointed➕Speechless

The author is obviously still immersed in the achievements of Qinglian Peak. The reason why your Qinglian Peak is outstanding is because you wrote the human world chapter well and accumulated a large number of readers. The spiritual world and fairy world that follow are impossible to read. The family stories in the same period are either unfinished or short and weak. They simply do not have the energy to persevere like you, so you have achieved success. But look at the two new books you wrote. They are just following the trend. They are nothing new and have no sense of reading at all.

You're already a eunuch, so why are you still exempt?

The books written by this guy are all bad, and cutting leeks is its only purpose.

Don't make it difficult for yourself, let yourself go, it is better than building a seven-level pagoda.

This book needs to be scrapped, there is so much bullshit. Several chapters are full of family gossip.

I came here just for family stories, I just want to see the family flow, as long as it's not a system flow! Even if it's a little watery, as long as the map is big enough and the plot is good enough! The end of Qinglian was too "hurried"! After Daluo Jinxian, all kinds of battleships, demon guards, and immortal armor armies were over before they even came on stage! Especially those dozens of demon guard regiments, only revealed their faces twice, and they were just mentioned in one stroke, which is really a pity! You can write about a beast-controlling family, the establishment of a family by casual cultivators, the son of Daluo Jinxian missing the mortal world, and a bunch of other topics! Where do I need to write a system article? ? Even if you write about the Mortal stream ➕ Sect stream, I can accept it, but you, a family stream author with a collection of 200,000, really can't understand it when you come to write about the system!

I couldn't stand the first one. With three spiritual roots, an adult's thinking and cognition, and a somewhat big golden finger (the author said it himself), even the inner disciples were kicked to the outer gate! This is no longer a waste stream, this is simply mindless.