Battle Through the Heavens: I Made Zhang Daxian from the Chat Group Cry with My Acting

The first three chapters are like a torrential downpour of poison. 1. A family is not a sect. A servant is a servant. There is no such thing as a disciple. 2. The protagonist's parents died, so how did he grow up? He grew up relying on the support of his clan, which, in the protagonist's eyes, was not even as good as a dilapidated house.

The writing was originally quite good, but unfortunately, Xun'er and Xiao Yan were written terribly, and the group owner deliberately belittled it.

The plot is so awkward it's almost embarrassing. The Xiao family is a clan, not a sect, so where would they get menial disciples?

In Douluo Continent, a god's heart can be destroyed by a hidden weapon. Here, you're comparing a Title Douluo to a Dou Wang, where even a Limit Douluo can't lift a 108,000-pound floor tile. In Douluo Continent I, Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing, both Title Douluos, only managed to eliminate a few thousand soldiers before running out of soul power using the Netherworld White Tiger. Your novel's combat power levels are inconsistent.

Aren't you afraid of getting in trouble for writing Xiao Yan like this?

Author, your latest chapter is ridiculous! It's absurd that you didn't kill them off. You're fantasizing about the female lead and provoking the protagonist. You wrote the Seven Devils so disgustingly before, but then you just let them go so easily? That's not how you advance the plot!

If you design a plot like this, and then later on Little Fairy Doctor forgives Yun Yun and Nalan Yanran, and even gets taken in by the protagonist, I'd find it disgusting.

Um, is a 15-year-old with a ninth-dan Dou Qi skill really that impressive? Did someone absorb your Dou Qi? 😰🥵

Reading so many fanfictions featuring the main character's ex-girlfriends is disgusting. It used to be interesting, but now it's as repulsive as having affairs. Frankly, it's poison.

I haven't read it. I've seen a lot of fanfiction about "Battle Through the Heavens," with characters stealing the protagonist's wives and opportunities. Even worse, some openly mock the protagonist, acting like he's inhuman for doing anything wrong, as if they want to kill him. That kind of writing is inhuman. It's fine to pursue beautiful women, but constantly targeting them is disgusting.