Devouring the Stars: Reboot, Serpent of Eternity!

Understand?

No wonder the grades are not up to par. The original writing was okay, but it was mixed with his own personal belongings. The author wrote that Hong deliberately sold the interests of his fellow earthmen in exchange for glory and wealth. This means that the author thought that he knew that the earth was special before entering the sea of ​​​​illusion, so he deliberately sold it in exchange for profits. However, Hong did not know that the earth was special before he entered the sea of ​​​​illusion. Can you do less private stuff?

The story is so poorly written that the protagonist basically works alone behind closed doors until he dies. The improvement in the protagonist's paper strength is indeed good, but it would be boring to keep writing about it.

Yes, there is an obvious mistake. The virtual world was created by the original ancestors to seize the universe. Other races do not have such a thing as the virtual world, and they cannot log in. Only the human race can do it, and the human race cannot seize the body. They can only log in by enslaving the human race, and the slave is a human race.

Another nanny Luo Feng who can't have children. I didn't see how kind he is to his relatives.

In my opinion, if you have enough strength, you can directly wipe out the monsters and unify the earth, and use resources to cultivate talents. The earth is as small as dust and the small planets are still fighting each other. With so many fanfics being devoured, is there no one who thinks the same as me?

The setting of opportunities is too complicated, and the realm of cultivation is vague. It is always introduced but still difficult to understand. I couldn't put it down even after watching it twice.

He is a strong man of some level. He can be careless with his words and carelessly. But everything the protagonist does is clearly arranged by his family? It's so frustrating, it's better not to read it, keep going high and low, the more you write, the worse it gets.

It's fine for the author to arrange for Qian Shui Ai Chen to be the heroine, but it's very awkward to rush into the heroine's lineage. . Forcing the protagonist to arrange a future training path and instructor may seem to be of great help to the protagonist, but in fact, these protagonists can achieve it by relying on their own talents. Even if they are close, it will not have much impact. After all, the protagonist's own skills are powerful enough. And this way of forcibly binding a relationship is very unpleasant. The relationship between the camps is very awkward, not to mention the relationship between men and women. It is like taking the protagonist directly to the mountain to be the wife of the village, and waiting for the protagonist to get used to it. What kind of god-king potential is meaningless at all? The top ten talents in the genius battle plus the protagonist's teaching talent are enough to prepare the master of the universe. Can this book be written as a god-king?

I've read a lot of fanfics, but I really can't stand this one. In addition to borrowing from the Devouring System and some characters. Are the others related to Devouring? The protagonist of Devouring is Luo Feng. Even if the fandom is not, Luo Feng has not been mentioned once in dozens of chapters. Do you really think I'm here to see you having fun? What kind of fanfic is Devouring fanfic without Luo Feng?

If the original ancestor knew a little secret, the human race in this era would not be so miserable. Star Tower? If I can't accept my master, I'll keep it and wait for my human genius to get it. The tomb boat? What's wrong with me just guarding the door and not letting you in? Siege? Find out more about the tenth level soul attack sweep. The world of Jin? The same door is blocked. Luo Feng just needs to grow up step by step. No pressure? Let me put a few aliens in there to put some pressure on you.

The protagonist was clearly arranged... With no room for speech...

If the update is discontinued, a lot of people will no longer want to read it, and then subscriptions will drop, and the author's mentality will explode, creating a vicious cycle. This book is dead. It's either a eunuch or a bad book.

Drive high and go low, the more you write, the worse it gets.

I won't watch Swallowing Starry Sky without a female protagonist, but I'll only read fanfics of Swallowing Starry Sky with multiple female protagonists.

The early stage is quite good, the author is very detailed, he has reasonably created a second version of the original work and expanded the copy experience, but there are no faults to be found. In the later period, it became more and more confusing. When I saw "Peng Demon King" come out in these few chapters, and even in many previous chapters, it could be clearly explained in three or four chapters, but it happened to be written in chapter eight or nine, and a lot of calculation settings were filled in. It was all fair and square. We also need to list out the calculation process of combat power and defense. It will be clear after dozens of chapters when the character card is displayed, but the result will be calculated once after a few chapters. Maybe I, a Chongqing native, went to a Guangdong home as a guest and said that I would show off my skills by using the chicken prepared by the host to make spicy chicken. The host was watching my mood.

I see that the protagonist is unwilling to use bloodline essence. Isn't this thing the same as bloodline potion and blood crystal? I can't see through this and can't accept it. It's too pretentious.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit petty. The protagonist's current talents and abilities will definitely be the core training of the human race in the future. As a result, the protagonist still limited his sights to the earth. The protagonist should focus on the entire human race. Many of the problems he is struggling with now will not be a problem in the future. The simplest thing is to leave a bloodline that can be passed down. The protagonist is a golden human bloodline with a high genetic level that can be inherited without loss. The human race spends money and resources to select beauties from the peak human race and beg the protagonist to have children. Get resources while surviving. Moreover, in the future, when the special characteristics of the earth are discovered, it will definitely be under the control of the protagonist, so that the protagonist's descendants can multiply on the earth. This is the best for the human race. As a result, the protagonist is now invincible on the earth. These abilities will also be in the palm of the human race in the future, and even the top leaders of the human race are reluctant to let them go out to practice. Why do you work as a nanny and take care of children for major families on Earth? Why teach children? Are you even planning to find a woman to keep your bloodline? In the future, if you show your genetic talent, it won't be a problem for the most beautiful human race, Ai Chen, and the entire Mengluo Wing clan to become your harem. The Lord of the Universe will take the initiative to make this decision and let you choose the harem to reproduce with the strongest bloodline of the human race. Even using time to accelerate reproduction. So I can't understand what the protagonist is doing on earth now, it's petty and meaningless. The protagonist makes whatever plans he has on earth to create offspring. The most important thing in the earth stage is to improve his own strength. In the future, he will stand out in the genius battle, become famous, and then wait to receive tasks and get paid to fuck women. Everything else is imaginary, and it is meaningless for you to deal with these future cosmic stages. No matter how much you deal with, it is not as good as the cosmic stage, which can be solved with a wave of your hand and one sentence.

Goldfinger is too big and too complicated, and the more I write, the less enjoyable it becomes. I always want to write about the opportunity that I got when I was young, and I keep getting it for a lifetime. Too cluttered. As you all know from playing games, you can get powerful props by charging money, and then they will become outdated within a short time of playing. I want you to recharge more money. Get new props, new feeling. Eliminate the previous props. What else should I write (as we all know this word)? Don't bring the reader's perspective into the novel. The protagonist's perspective is the most important.

I can't understand more than 100 chapters. What is it about?

You also deleted my comments and canceled the bookshelf. Goodbye.

To be honest, the two wives of the protagonist are not as good as Xu Xin. Luo Feng and Xu Xin are in love with each other. The protagonist's wife rushed to give birth to the protagonist's baby. There is no sign of liking at all. It is just the sense of moral kidnapping that I like you and have to marry you after waiting for so long. Moreover, if the protagonist's wife wants to give birth to an offspring for the protagonist, she must increase her genetic level to 3 times. I wonder if the wine can increase the genetic level, otherwise she will not be able to give birth at all. Luo Feng and Xu Xin's son was conceived when they were still on earth before they took over. The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist directly told his two wives and children the biggest secret of spiritual practice. Is this allowed to be told? He trusts his wife and children too much, and he is such a driven wife. It is true that she only cares about her feelings and laughs to death for her own interests. To be honest, there is really no need for the protagonist of the time traveler to embarrass himself if there is no woman who can definitely attract him. Apart from Anna, I don't think anyone in the whole story is worthy of having a heart-to-heart relationship with the protagonist. It's better to become a true god in the future and then consider reproduction.

Come on! Overall good, please order more. The only poisonous point is the description of Hong. Personally, I feel that Hong's image is quite positive. Even if the author's speculation conforms to a certain logic, there is no need to write it out. I personally think that most people who watch Swallowed will not dislike Hong. This part is a bit discouraging.

It's hard to describe in one word! I read this book because I had a monthly subscription of 10,000 yuan. I have read many excellent Devouring fandoms. I have read dozens of chapters of this book, but I just can't stand it! To sum up, the plot is too nonsensical and confusing. As you write, you will pull out inexplicable things. There are pieces here and there that cannot be connected. It feels very uncomfortable for me to watch. Many of them are skipping. There are too many hooks, too super and too complicated! Just do a little bit of everything in the early stage, give some talents, and give a clone. Warrior weapons, spiritual masters, domain rules, and mind cultivation clones are enough for you to practice!

I am also cutting down trees.

One update a day is too little.

There are too many cheats, too many secrets, and too many clones. There is a god-king-level treasure at the universe level, and the domain master's kills are close to being invincible. Outrageous, outrageous

There are so many ink stains and a bunch of explanations, it's so annoying that I can't tell the difference.

Is it better to promise me more🥺

Why don't you kowtow to me?