Sacrificing a Million Zombies: I Become a Demonic Cultivator in the Apocalypse

It's a pretty good book, but unfortunately, it's full of repetitive, rambling talk. I usually don't criticize authors for writing sloppy material, as many things are worth introducing, but this book is frankly too sloppy. It's frustrating to read. A single sentence is broken into ten, and then a few more are picked out and repeated. I don't care about the few coins spent, but it was genuinely annoying to read.

The cultivation level was suppressed too much; there was no sign of the supposedly fast cultivation speed of demonic cultivators. No matter how many resources were poured in, it was all bark and no bite.

I feel like this cultivation novel portrays the Foundation Establishment stage as incredibly difficult as becoming an immortal.

If you're at the Foundation Establishment stage, you'll be mired in a sea of ​​blood and a river of darkness. But by the Core Formation stage, you'll be capable of creating heaven and earth! It's unbearable!

No, have you ever considered whether good deeds can be used across the world? They're all governed by different laws. Would your good deeds awards in China have any effect in the United States?

You have to repeat the same thing over and over again, which affects the reading experience! Especially for those of us who come in later and want to read it all at once! Can't you be a little more concise? I don't mind updating less each day!

The chapters I've read these past few days feel like I haven't read them at all. There's so much repetitive description; it's all too padded.

The early part was a pretty good novel. But starting around chapter 200, the protagonist's supernatural abilities and techniques became increasingly absurd. He cultivated so many powerful techniques, yet his combat strength remained trash. All sorts of physiques, powerful weapons, and techniques were given to him, and yet even his clones were stronger than him.

There are too many unnecessary modifiers; the plot hardly progresses at all.

The latest chapter is really weak; I've rewritten it two or three times.