The Flower-Cherishing Sword

The First Emperor was so right in unifying weights and measures. It is a headache to memorize thirty types of cultivation for the tenth level.

If I change it to a traditional three-character or four-five-character book title, please help me think about it.

After reading two hundred chapters, I was immediately persuaded to quit. I was being chased, injured, and fighting all the time, and I didn't even have time to breathe. I read novels to relieve stress. After reading what you wrote, I felt even more stressed. I suggest the author change the beginning quickly, otherwise no one will read it. Reading a novel makes me feel so uncomfortable.

I had the patience to read the Holy City chapter, and couldn't help but want to comment on it. In my opinion, this is a book with outstanding advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the author's writing style is above average, and the fighting and various descriptions can give people a good sense of immersion, and it can be called a fascinating sentence. This is the reason why I keep reading. The world view and setting design are quite complete, at least there is no problem with the self-consistency of the logic, but it has not been fully explained. There are many shortcomings. First of all, the atmosphere is very depressing and tense from the beginning. As we all know, a better arrangement is to raise and suppress. However, the author has always made the plot design very heavy, and the parts that should be "raised" are often missing from the beginning. Male The protagonist is about to run away in a hurry like a rat crossing the street. The most uncomfortable thing is that no matter how much the hero's strength is improved, there is not much difference. He is either suffering from depression or on the way to suffer from depression. I can accept that it is not a cool novel, but I can't stand the abuse of the protagonist. There is really no positive feedback at all. The author has always said that the Holy City chapter will be relaxing. In fact, I am not being hunted, but I can't read the relaxed atmosphere at all, because there are still enemies on all sides, and the male protagonist basically has no hiding, the disguise is too fake, and his behavior is very high-profile. Here I want to talk about the second shortcoming, which is the collapse of the character or the character design. It's very unpleasant, and the first one to bear the brunt is the male protagonist. If the inconsistency of the male protagonist's behavior is regarded as part of the character, then the male protagonist in my case is an idiot who acts without thinking at all. Sometimes he kills without blinking, and sometimes he lets his enemy go without any reason. He is moody and his actions are driven entirely by his mood. Not only did the author fail to reflect the personality charm of the male protagonist, but he made it very disgusting. If this was the original purpose, I can only say that it was a success. The male protagonist's handling of the emotional line is completely different from the same person. In the first part, he is obviously an innocent boy who also cares about his reputation, but in the second part, he turns into a stud who doesn't care. The same goes for Lin Xi. It was obvious that they liked each other before, and they were forced to leave. However, when they reunited, they didn't dare to say hello. Her fiancé didn't dare to say a word next to her. Uh-huh, it was obvious that her character was still too reckless before, and now she doesn't even dare to say a word secretly. It really lowers her IQ, or it seems that the male protagonist is a fool. The character design of the heroine is relatively better. Miss Gao's character design is probably my favorite because her change of attitude is in line with the direction of the plot, she has a very obvious character arc, and she uses both desire and restraint very well. To be honest, Lin Xi's character design is a bit of a vase. Apart from her face, she doesn't really have any character charm in the plot. Of course, the suspension bridge effect is acceptable, but it's really not likable. On the contrary, the female brother's writing is pretty good, maybe because there are more plots, and a lot of time is spent living and dying together, so the writing is still more interesting than Lin Xi's. Lao Yun feels like a bit of a passer-by (until Chapter 400). She has a strong presence at the beginning but has always been labeled as a witch, which is a bit boring. Other plots are relatively small or unimportant, such as Du Juan and the little girl. The writing feels not as good as Tutu. I don't quite understand why I keep staying around, which feels a bit tacky. The plot is a bit incomprehensible. Many character events are deus ex machina without any foreshadowing. The combat power system is also very messy. The meaning of several levels is not that great. It feels like having more people is sometimes useful and sometimes not, which is confusing. To sum up, my experience is actually quite Akaashi, but maybe I have a bit of M, but I have been watching it. Actually, I don't have any big requirements. The emotional scene with the heroine should be better. The one with Lin Xi is really stiff, which ruins such a good writing style. Also, either stop pretending. Pretending half and then being deflated is really more disgusting than being deflated all the time. There is a kind of finger-fingered beauty, I can't say. After scolding for a long time, I hope the author doesn't take it too seriously. These are all personal opinions. Just write at your own pace. Although I feel that this style has no hope of becoming popular, but after hearing the readers' feedback, I will continue to scold and read at the same time.

Some immature comments (currently around Chapter 170) 1. The combat power collapses too quickly One time, the high-level players can kill the low-level players instantly without any pressure, and the other time, the high-level players can't defeat several low-level players who have joined forces (at least it's very laborious and costly to kill). The third one is that it's not clear which one is stronger or weaker in professional combat. There is no specific introduction to the different training systems. There is only a name for people to imagine. 2. Some of the characters are very strange It's not that certain characters are poorly portrayed, but that for almost every character, as soon as they get a role, you can tell whether the author has used it or not. When the number of appearances was small, it could be covered up with a more eye-catching writing style, but once there are more roles, it is easy to see. Once a problem appears repeatedly in a character that readers care about, it is easy to make people think about it. Why hasn't this person grown? It's always like this (for example, Miss Lin seems to be in control of the overall situation in the front, but she is like a novice in the back. Another example is that the protagonist is not close to Lin (later, Lin's life-saving grace in the Xue Mansion is not counted, and almost all counts are the protagonist saving Lin). Another example is that Lin Mingming has already fallen in love with the protagonist (if she doesn't like it, the divination predicts that the two of them will have a good relationship) should not blush), but in the end, under such circumstances, they were brought together even though their strength was clearly disadvantageous to the protagonist. At this time, the bet was > the protagonist's life. Later, when the Peach Blossom Assassin made it clear, he took a group of people to send it off. The bet > everyone's life. Later, he would rather die than obey the protagonist in his dream. The soul left the body in the city to explore the place where the Yin Qi gathers and was manipulated to touch it. The safety of ordinary people > I am innocent (because she was embarrassed when the protagonist put the beads earlier). This reads very strange. If you can't overcome this trivial matter, then the so-called Taoist perseverance in this world is all bullshit.) 3. The protagonist's purpose is unknown Although the bet between the two eldest ladies is outrageous, at least there is a reason, but the protagonist feels that he exists just to exist. In other novels, the protagonist is doing tasks and slowly establishing a character. Here it is like not knowing what to do, and doing things with a character (and some characters are really set up for a certain scene and thrown away after use) 4. Although it feels like the author is deliberately controlling the content, the content is still there. It started to gallop uncontrollably (regardless of the feelings of the women towards the protagonist, the realm of the protagonist, or the advancement of the plot, they encountered enemies from outside the territory in just over a hundred chapters, and they came with the purpose of destroying this world). It feels like the author wrote the plot just to make up a certain scene. The intermittent feeling is too uncomfortable 5. I can't see the character's mental growth Including the killing of Song Yiyi, it was just an improvement in strength and cultivation, but no improvement in character or state of mind. He even emphasized his fantasies when having an affair with Lin later. This performance was not even as good as the tease of the Peach Blossom Assassin in the early stage, and other characters could not see growth. Whether it was Miss Gao who had experienced the test of life and death or the villain Jing Feng, they had survived for so many years and ended up having to deal with a person who had only disadvantages after winning. That's all I thought about for the time being.

How many harems will be collected? This is not a Shura field? ?

The author is talented and can still write so many chapters even though his grades are not good.

Let me tell you something, the cover is very nice

To be honest, after reading 500 chapters, I didn't understand the logic of the protagonist's behavior. His character is capricious. Sometimes he kills decisively, and sometimes he refuses to kill. I can't see much affection for Lin Fei. I want someone else's body but I'm still so unfamiliar with him. I don't explain the misunderstanding and I'm secretive. It's clear that there's nothing serious about it, but I feel like I'm having a ghost in my heart. Someone revealed earlier that he was romantically involved in order to leave an heir, a person who traveled through the past and reproduced such heavy offspring. Also, the main character is a bit too useless. A martial arts contestant has to go through the back door. If he is weak and refuses to listen to the arrangements, he still complains about it. This is embarrassing. The protagonist's childhood and parents were not able to travel through time at all. They were always about revenge and revenge. It was really tiring to watch. I originally thought that I could relax in the academy, but then I met the Blood Emperor and was half-dead, and it would take a long time to recover. This feeling is really uncomfortable. Xiao also made a scene about resurrection after death. I really can't stop it. Can't I arrange some daily emotional scenes? It's all jealousy and quarrels, can we put some heartwarming plot into it? The protagonist doesn't have a heart-to-heart relationship with anyone, and is too lazy to even do basic confessions and clarifications. Do I really doubt that there is love between the protagonist and the heroine? Another point, I am a defensive reader when reading serious online articles, and I really mind the heroine's flirting with others. I hope the author can pay attention to this aspect. For example, Lin is always being supported by others, and I am not sure whether the Zhou City Lord will accept it. I heard that he was also in love with others before. I really can't accept it. Doing a good job in this aspect can attract more people. Some of the things written by the author are too cryptic, and then unclear later. For example, there was a fight after receiving a letter, and it was not clear what was written, and why they got together to fight. If the author reveals it later, it is indeed a bit too late. This kind of writing will put the reader in a depressing environment throughout the article. There are too few plots to reveal the saint in front of others. He is still in a state of being suppressed even after reaching the ninth level. Ksitigarbha has already been killed. How can a Ming King track down and suppress the protagonist from such a distance? I don't understand. But one thing to say, the writing is still good, and the scene rendering and various fights are quite attractive. This is also the reason why I pursued this. It would be better if the character creation could be more likable.

Slightly mature girlish atmosphere