A Magical Journey That Begins in Azkaban

I just finished reading the free part To be honest, the first chapter that requires a subscription was quite attractive to me at first But I saw the content of the trailer In order to hide the old principal bee, the protagonist pretended that what he saw in the magic mirror was a materialistic life I was disappointed, I didn't feel like it To the point in my heart Although the author's arrangement here is quite reasonable, it just feels a little bit wrong, so I didn't continue reading, so I quit and read the book circle But the book circle is really too chaotic and smoky, and a group of extremely subjective posts really make me feel uncomfortable. They feel that they have lost the most basic respect for an author and his carefully crafted works on the Internet I just say why I don't like this book for whatever reason But they also understand subconsciously that the plot of this book is well grasped, the material is drawn and the characters are created. The creation is very novel and unique, and the writing style makes people very comfortable Someone said that there is simulation in the book, and he doesn't like it very much But he did not admit that the simulation part is only a little bit, and is only used in important plot twists I really like this description of multiple consequences. Because I can see the author's grasp and understanding of the plot, and also see the many possibilities of the story Some people say that the protagonist is still alive after living in Azkaban for so long before being discovered, which is too bizarre and difficult for people to accept. Then I just want to say that in the original book, Harry Potter survived under the curse of eating a big melon, which is also a miracle of some kind of fact, or the bizarreness in your words As for him being able to survive in Azkaban, I believe that after reading the first half of the novel , everyone can see the reasonable explanation given by the author Novel itself is a process of creating coincidences We cannot criticize the coincidences that the author has painstakingly arranged because we are accustomed to the plainness of reality, otherwise it will really be meaningless.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, there are too many minor points. 1 An adult traveled to Azkaban and lived for 11 years, still thinking like a child 2 The pure-blood ancestral home was robbed and left in ruins, as if it was a joke. Black's house was robbed? 3 Dumbledore is too dark, why Hermione went to Gryffindor because Lao Deng was too manipulative 4 The most unbearable thing is that he always tells people who are not familiar with him little secrets that only a few people know, such as the blood alliance between Dumbledore and Grindelwald, Snape's patron saint, etc. Others, such as making 10 billion by shorting the former Soviet Union, and being able to make trouble in the Muggle financial system just after being released from prison, just ignore it. If you don't write that the protagonist is a prophet, you can explain everything, but it won't be interesting.

Another one with a blue bar on HP, and you just go for it, but the magic power is 2.3. One magic consumes a little, and the two magics of the protagonist will wither. You are not a natural squib as the protagonist, not even as good as Filch, you are right.

To be honest, in this book, people around me say that the protagonist is humble and polite, but in the previous part I only saw a brat with low emotional intelligence and rudeness who is more stupid and stubborn than Gryffindor. So I can't stand it anymore. Shouting to the conservatives that we should learn from Magua. We never deal with things softly. Instead, we pick up troubles in various ways, treat others with rude names, have a harsh tone, and use inappropriate communication strategies. . .

I went to a second-hand bookstore to negotiate the price for half a day when buying textbooks, and saved 2 Galleons, Then I bought an owl for 100 Galleons 😅😅😅😅😅😅

The game started with a bang. Uncle Harry didn't know about wizards so he didn't let Harry read the letter. You, an Azkaban warden, still hid the letter from him. You're more awesome than Dumbledore.

You can sleep short on Russia. Do you think Soros's quantitative fund has never succeeded in raising rubles for so many years? Did he not want to? Do you know what Russia did when Soros shorted the ruble in 1997? It was announced that all bonds and stocks purchased by foreign investors would stop being redeemed, and all fixed assets of the Russian military industry would be used to offset them. Soros lost at least 3 billion in the first war. The Soviet Union disintegrated on December 26, 1991, and the Russian Foreign Exchange Exchange was established in January 1992. In the same year, Russia promulgated the "Foreign Exchange Regulation and Foreign Exchange Control Law." Do you think that if you short the ruble at this time, what you will get in the end is more money than you can spend in a lifetime, a military factory that has not been started in twenty years, or more potatoes than you can eat in ten lifetimes?

What I don't understand the most is why the author wanted to write about Dumbledore plotting against Hermione. Harry was the one he cared about from the beginning to the end. If it weren't for the Horcruxes, Voldemort would have just done it alone.

1. I'm a bit malicious towards Dumbledore 2. No matter how bad the original author's economic system is, you can't inflate it like this. The income and expenditure can easily reach hundreds of thousands or millions of galleons. 3. The eleven-year-old protagonist led others to exchange galleons for pounds and used leverage to earn more than 10 billion when the Soviet Union collapsed in 1991. This was just a matter of time and passed without seeing it. What the hell was it that he could later exchange three million galleons from Gringotts and the black market? 4. What is the operation of going to the former Soviet Union to snatch 30 million books (this is what I saw). Also, what impresses me most about the magical world is not the magic that destroys the world at every turn, but the magic of the Weasleys' mothers when they cook. The kind of world where people enjoy the convenience of magic all the time, and can solve all the little troubles with a wave of their hands, which shows the foundation of a normal world. Although nuclear bombs are powerful, smart homes such as sweeping robots obviously better reflect the convenience of technology.

Chapter seventy-seven, the reason for abandoning the book, I always like to change the names of some HP knowledge. For example, the Floating Curse can also be called the Suspension Curse, but it was changed to the Flying Feather Curse, which directly cultivates immortality; Another example is the Blood Curse Orc, a common name that everyone who has read the original book or movie knows, has to be changed to the Blood Curse Orc. If you have a reason, forget it. Changing the word will not do any good except making people laugh.

No Hermione, please. Having a good relationship with Hermione in the early stage will not only do no good, but will also lead the protagonist to a dangerous place.

Just a little bit, how could a child come out of a place like Azkaban without any incident after eleven years, and then continue to attend Hogwarts? Um?

There are so many flaws that it's hard to describe them in one sentence. From the name of the characters, what are the little so-and-so, the professors in the school call the students, they are all Mr. So-and-so, Miss So-and-so, foreigners, most of the children even call their own parents by their first names, and then the mudblood Muggle Squib and other original works The unique vocabulary and pronouns are often confusing, and there are also common sense issues about magic. I won't list them all. Then, the protagonist is set to be a descendant of a pure-blood family. As a result, he has to borrow money to study. Gringotts withdraws money without looking at your appearance or ID card. If you have Polyjuice Potion, can it still give you facial recognition? People only recognize the keys to the vault. The pure-blood family almost controlled the Ministry of Magic's absolute hegemony at its peak. How can the ancestral home be so stretched? A small shabby house? Other people's houses are all luxurious and large, and there are a lot of magic protection spells inside. Not even a red loyalty spell is a disgrace to the background set by the protagonist, not to mention his family background. How can the house not have a house elf or two to look after the house? A reader commented on the title issue in the book, and the author responded immediately, but did not change it. If I can't hold on any longer, I'll take the first step and wish the author better and better as he writes

When reading a book, you have to read it yourself. Don't just listen to the book reviews. The reviews are useless, but you can still read this novel.

If you really want to write about purebloods, don't talk about learning about Muggles. For the stubborn conservative forces, if you say you want to learn from Muggles, it is equivalent to saying that you want to learn from Japan in front of the deep pinks. No matter how reasonable you are, there will always be people who continue to argue with you. Communication is a skill. If you want to express your suggestions to the other party, you must try to say it in a way that the other party can accept. Therefore, instead of talking about learning from Muggles, it is better to state what you want to achieve and avoid saying that you are learning from XXX. In this way, the other party will naturally think about the benefits and harms, instead of arguing with you right away.

Innocently imprisoned for eleven years, he was released after eleven years and went to first grade with Harry, 666

I don't recommend watching it. I want to write about pure blood, but I don't have the money. I want to write a story, but it just doesn't follow the plot. . . Don't get along with each other before and after

Shouldn't pureblood wizards have a family legacy?

Baby? Azkaban? Dementors? Growing up smoothly? So, author, how much do you think highly of the protagonist (baby form) How much do you think less of Azkaban How much do you think less of the Dementors

It feels like this protagonist is showing off his superiority and stinking shit all the time.

What I wrote earlier is that you are very capable and mature, but you immediately changed when you met Hermione. And I am a little curious, how can you, a child who has been in Azkaban since birth, understand the Muggle world so well that others will not find it a problem?

You can read it or not, so I left after chapter 15. The current situation is not very promising. Adding personal settings randomly is contrary to the original work. The character's personality is polarized. One moment he is mature and steady, and the other he is childlike.

Why do you call a bunch of trainees not good-looking? 😥 I think it's quite good-looking. Tiantian said it goes against the original work. Since you like the original work, shouldn't you read the original work? Fans are all looking at private settings. Fans first read the private design, then read the plot, and then divided themselves into different groups. Those who like mindless and cool writing, those who like dark and dark stories, those who like strategizing, those who like leveling up and changing pictures, and those who like side stories. Isn't this normal? This book is privately designed, so there won't be much problem with the plot. Wizards control force. People in HP's original books think that Muggle secrecy is normal, but when we are used to reading various novels and real-life things, it is not normal. Muggles are not all good people. Isn't it strange that wizards who master magic are still fighting for power and profit in one-third of an acre? Muggles can study Muggles, but wizards can't? Does being the protagonist have to be Wei Guangzheng?

What a great write up! Come on, author! Don't worry about some comments After reading so many fan novels, this is one of the few novels that has its own world view.

New readers should be careful. This novel is extremely poisonous. The author is a Death Eater. I wrote it right. He is the author. The protagonist has distorted views and despicable character.

Every time I read a story about the protagonist of Slytherin, even if I am one of them, I can't help but feel disgusted with this house. Smart ambition represents pure blood, nobility, and politics, but facts have proven that it can't even make friends with many friends and enemies with few enemies. The root cause can be seen from the exclusion of Slytherin himself, so it is actually short-sighted. Only focusing on short-term interests, while the so-called illusory and even hypocritical love, friendship, justice, and other moral qualities are essentially related to longer-term interests. Short-sighted people think they are smart enough and think they are cunning enough, but how sad it is. This is essentially because in the wizarding world, academia and politics are closely related. The stronger the academic ability, the greater the power, which is different from reality, and Slytherin's shrewd ambition is based on the template of real politicians. Politics is not magic at all. The difference between the charm of Harry Potter and those cool wizard novels is that it does not have such a cold and rational structure, and there are more emotional factors, so the uncertainty is greater. But this is also the true beauty of magic. Watching the fight for power and gaining wealth, there is no need to use the fairy tale background of Harry Potter. The painting style is very inconsistent. The character of Slytherin, regardless of his moral character, can be summed up in one word: boring. They are separated from magic and represent the most realistic and least romantic group of people in human society. So it has nothing to do with Old Bee. This level of setting determines that Slytherin is destined to be the villain. Even if they have some merits, if you wash them forcefully, you will only feel awkward. Look at the background of the protagonist, the son of a Death Eater. Not to mention being forced to join, being wronged, etc., I prefer to put pity on more innocent people. Even if purebloods are wronged and have a lot of helplessness, then the extravagant enjoyment and overwhelming power they used to have are worth dying. No matter how many problems Weasley has, his foundation is still clean. We should not find fault with honest people too much.

Don't read what comes later, the currency here is really ruined. They cost tens of millions of gold galleons. In the global college Quidditch finals, Sirius won 10 million gold galleons. Hogwarts spends up to 1 million gold galleons every year, and all the men in the Weasley family are hacked, and Arthur is expelled. Then I washed the Slytherins, the Malfoy family, and the Death Eaters. Washed Snape until he was too white, and then put all the blame on James

In addition, the ending of this book is unfinished. Harry Potter was killed randomly and the story ended hastily.

This writing style is very similar to the original work, okay? It's well written. You've enjoyed reading those Witcher series with brainless cool writing and frustrating writing. Why are you giving random orders? If there is anything anti-human, get out of here. Who among the highest ranking people out there doesn't treat ordinary humans as chickens? Wizards are human beings too, and there is no such thing in this world. Secondly, this is not China. Why don't you just use your brain to comment? You guys who are good at writing are very particular about the details. Do you know how difficult it is to find good new writers who have put their heart into their work? I have planted a few with good writing and good plots. After half a year, only three of them are still there, and the rest have been wiped out by the new fans. Guidance is gone, the popular ones next door are all lame. If you can't get out of porn, you can just read the Yin-Yang novel of "Ku Kui". I would say you people have problems in your heart. You should read the "Kuu Kui" and "Brainless" novels every day to show yourself the synchronization, right?

The writing is off-the-wall, and a lot of the content is stream of consciousness. I just write whatever comes to my mind, scenes jump around, and I understand it by default...