Crown of Embers

It's really poisonous. A place where personal power dominates the world. Even if a person of this level does anything, the most he can do is to create a scapegoat. The protagonist is now an ordinary child who has no ability and dares not to shoot and threaten others. This is a male channel, not a female channel. Others can slap you to death.

. . . . I don't know what to say, it looks so fascinating, The protagonist's golden finger is briefly explained at the beginning, and then the plot is advanced. However, the plot is written in a hurry and sloppily Not to mention that the police in this era will be so dedicated? So stubborn? Let alone a child, with a big mantra, it would be enough to directly convict him Besides, if it is really dangerous and it is clear that the survivor is the protagonist, then why not put it in the church, and the church will bear the responsibility if something goes wrong.

The garbage in the garbage is the same as shit

He has no principles and no bottom line, and can change at any time. Yesterday he was a murderous and tortured pervert, and today he is a ruthless person. If you ignore this nonsense, there are people who want to torture you at any time to show your kindness. They are always ready to throw you out to feed the dogs. If you give them some bones, you will become the most loyal dog. I won't talk about other things that force you to show off your IQ, such as supporting roles that you collaborated with yesterday and butchered today. If you write a novel, don't write about selfishness, not about the Virgin Mary, and write about a protagonist who licks a dog and abuses herself. You still think it's normal. You really can't complain.

The whole article was confusing and incomprehensible to read. Sometimes I simply can't understand why it is written this way. The author's brain circuitry seems to be inconsistent with that of normal people. I strongly suspect it is an AI writing product.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

The writing is smooth, the narrative is clear, the plot is compact, and the content is dark. I like this setting.

Not bad, but the presence of Gold Finger is a bit low

It looks good, why don't you update it? Every character is very unique.

Can the author continue to write your Harry Potter fanfic? You have many holes to fill, so why not continue writing the second one?