The King of Destruction from Zhutian Film and Television

Unorthodox astronomy is a cover-up of chronological and military literature, because it involves a lot of sensitive information, in order to facilitate the review. So before you watch it, you should adjust your expectations, otherwise you may feel that the pace is slow and slow. As for Shennong's evaluation, a good book is not the kind of superficial anecdote or short article. The professional depth and writing skills are obvious to all. Don't pay attention to those who say nothing in the comment area. Read the content and make your own judgment.

I say it again, don't be fooled by the negative comments in the comment section. The business and intelligence lines of this book are well written, and the plot is laid out at a good pace. The plot constructed with data and logic is extremely reasonable. This is the quality that can get you started in a high-end game. Don't miss out on a good book because of those bad reviews. Also, it is recommended that authors set a comment threshold and control the comment area! Or get a disciplinary assistant! You haven't consumed much traffic yet, don't let passerby readers scare you away!

This book is really great. The level of knowledge, rhythm, characterization, emotions, etc. Are all very good. There are occasional small flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. I think if the environment is good, it has the potential to spread and be well-written.

For an unlikable female character like Zhou Rong, don't offend Wen Qing, clean her up, and challenge your own writing skills. She has no other charm in your portrayal. A character you don't even want to see in a harem. You spend time interacting with her, cleaning her up, and maybe even accepting her. Apart from disgusting readers and screening readers, it doesn't make much sense! This is an online article after all, and you have to balance the conflict between readers' perception and creative freedom. Of course, despite its shortcomings, this book is still of good quality, otherwise I would be too lazy to say so much.

Why is my experience different from yours? I think the military line looks good, except that the technical terms are too professional and boring. I think the emotional line that many people complain about is much stronger than the emotional line in the artillery arc. The rhythm is also better than artillery. The analysis of the global situation, intelligence lines, technological upgrades, etc. Are all very well written. The protagonist is indeed helping the country to avoid some problems in advance. The combination of the general trend and personal destiny is very exciting. When you get promoted later, you will have more power, you can do more things, and you will have more fun. The author just needs to maintain a good rhythm and quality, and write a high-level military article.

It's well written, but it's not satisfying enough. The protagonist's upgrade is too slow. As the comment downstairs said, the protagonist is fighting on the front lines and doing technology research and development. His level is not as fast as that of Zhou, who was directly promoted to platoon leader without doing anything. The protagonist finally managed to upgrade with technology, but was reported again. It feels like suppressing the protagonist.

The best rhythm for Zhu Tianwen is to create a world in 50 chapters, and write less plots about original characters. For example, the original owner's own miscellaneous relatives have nothing to do with the original work. If you create original characters in fan fiction, others will not be interested.

The protagonist is very sensible and pays for what he wants, what he does, and what he thinks. He does not go back to the past and act recklessly. He operates cautiously. Although he wants the time traveler to change some things, it is only a small amount, and the protagonist of the story is not forcibly reduced to wisdom. There is no forced love. The female protagonists all have high IQs. I saw someone commenting on how the protagonist was reported and suppressed. Please read the article clearly before commenting. Lao Zhou can quickly mention it. The article has stated that it is not happy to be the secretary of a high-level boss.

Ready to abandon the book. Not to mention water. The pace is slow, let alone slow, and not passionate at all. If you don't have passion, let's not talk about it. If you want to write more female protagonists, then follow through to the end. If you flirt with someone and run away, you can't handle it responsibly and coldly. It's fucking disgusting.

Don't brag, even if you look at the text at that time, it's not up to standard. The previous ones were okay. What did you write recently? Don't lie here

I marked it, and after reading 3 chapters, I felt that it was a literary youth. Don't dare to look. Read the comments. Found out I was right.

The protagonist climbed to the deputy camp because of his inventions and military exploits. Compared with a report written by Zhou Bingyi, he jumped directly to the deputy camp. The author himself can't explain it. The protagonist just doesn't have enough years and his merit can be discounted. Bingyi is promoted without merit. If you say he has a background, forget it. There is no problem.

This is a chronicle covered with astronomy, and there is no golden finger in the whole process, not until the latest chapter. The writing of this article is quite restrained, and the feeling is seriously lacking. In the chronicle, it can be regarded as food and grass, and the others are average! Zheng Juan, whom she flirted with in the early days, is no longer in the picture. Now she is with Hao Dongmei and has a child! The character image has changed significantly. Starting from more than 100 chapters, it has changed from a period novel to a period➕political novel. Now it is involved in business. The characterization of the protagonist is very sparse. From the early 1972 Zheng Juan to the current 83 years, there is no plot, and there is no plot with Hao Dongmei! Having separated from the plot of the human world, the direction of the text has been towards promoting the rise of the country's technological economy. The image of the protagonist in the early stage and the middle and late stages is seriously separated! You can take a look and score 6 points

She also kissed Zheng Juan. Logically speaking, she is a heroine, right? As a result, Shen Yin was directly hidden in the later stage, without mentioning it at all. No one looks down on scumbags in reality. The author deliberately shaped the protagonist into such a scumbag. It's okay if you just talk and don't make any ambiguous moves. But you've written it all down, you've even touched the ambiguous parts, and once you've finished touching them, they'll be gone in the post-production process. I have been reading this book for many years, and I am still treading on this obvious minefield and poisonous area. Alas, I really don't understand what the author is thinking.

The novel is quite well written, but it is a bit too slow in the later part I started serving as a soldier in 1969 and reached the deputy battalion in two years In 1971, the protagonist was the youngest deputy battalion of the Corps. Zhou Bingyi was the chief company at this time Then in 1972, Zhou Bingyi reported that he was favored and was transferred to the military region secretary and deputy regiment, but he did not go The protagonist worked until the end of 1979 before he was promoted to the deputy regiment? This is still making meritorious deeds along the way. What? I have been promoted twice in 8 years. In real life, it can't be considered very fast, right?

Are you planning to fight this world to the end? You might as well change your name and be reborn in the human world. What kind of astronomy is this?

The main character speaks like a psycho, speechless

The title of the book is "Wreck-It-Aid", which brings me to the heavens. The plot is still mixed in the military camp. The more I read, the more tired I am. ε=(´ο｀*))) Oh

There are hints of masterpieces in the past. After it was released, the emotional drama was so bad that I started to persuade me to quit.

Let me tell you a joke, astronomy, a world written in a smelly and long way

Isn't this Zhu Tianwen? Why are you still dawdling in this world after almost two hundred chapters?

Let's not talk about scum. The key is that you, a technical officer, will go abroad to inspect the rebels?

The title of the book is Zhutian Film and Television, and he wrote 700,000 words in a human world? Just change the title of the book to "The bloody storm in the human world" can be used as a string.

Does it have anything to do with the human world? Isn't this just a military article written in the human world? It's better to just write a military article and sell it as dog meat.

Zhutian Film and Television turned it into a military theory article, selling dog meat as a sheep's head. The donkey's lips are not the same as the horse's, and I am speechless. I am not going to watch it because I am enjoying myself to no end.

The phenomenon of AI writing is too serious. It's always the most and the most wrong. I can't stand it anymore.

The title of the book should just say "I am in the human world"

Three women hanging around without a choice is disgusting

Does it deserve the title of the book? What rubbish is written?

It's getting more and more boring. What about the period novel you advertise? Where is the plot you wrote? It's all about work. Except for the names of people, the other contents can be applied to any military-industrial novel~