Farmer Who Is a Mortal Cultivating Immortality

Lei Wanpeng, a member of the Yuanying Sect's golden elixir, has been searching for more than ten years but has not been able to find a five-hundred-year-old elixir. If you dare to sell the thousand-year-old elixir, it won't be long before a large group of golden elixirs and Yuanyings arrest you to search for your soul.

Even if the wealth is not revealed, the readers will be devastated by what the author wrote. He sells elixirs wantonly without even establishing a foundation. There is no foundation-building monk to take action. Do you really think that Wanbao Tower is a charity?

There is no sense of crisis in the world of underworld cultivators! There is a space for cultivating medicine and practicing diligently! It's just fucking messy to attract other people's attention. It doesn't smell like a mortal cultivating immortality at all. In the middle stage of foundation building, you can use magic weapons and randomly change settings! The author just writes some messy plots according to the original timeline.

When I saw the chapter about the academic talisman, I felt like it wasn't just my IQ that was being rubbed, but the entire original book was being rubbed, crunching.

With your intelligence, isn't the first thing you should do to determine your spiritual roots?

The problem is huge, there are many mistakes and omissions in it, For example, when the sect accepts disciples, it only accepts the Tianling Root and the younger Second Spiritual Root. The third Spiritual Root requires a special physique. I don't know where the author saw this Ask Han Li to help open the storage bag and choose something for Han Li. In the end, except for the talisman, most of the things were given to Han Li. Then when they met again, they blamed the protagonist for not mentioning the talisman. Did Han Li want to choose the talisman? I can't even enter the sect after choosing it After that, I went to fight the blood jade spider. It can kill a person who has just established a foundation. Has the author read the original story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality?

It's quite outrageous that the protagonist "sneaks" into the Qixuanmen's team easily. The protector must have a grudge against the sect. The original Qixuanmen recruits people with "innocent wealth", such as Han Li, whose third uncle is a member of the Qixuanmen. For example, Wu Yan, he is a related household

Are you sure the ten thousand years elixir will cure the fracture? Instead of you getting a broken bone? In modern terms, How many times do you want to be shot in the back?

The part about asking Han Li to help is too blunt. He helps to open a storage bag and pick out things for nothing. You can use common sense in the world of immortality instead. It feels like this plot is just to deliver the Order of Ascension to Immortality to Han Li. The writing is too rough...

This novel will make you want to lick Han Li at first glance. If you don't like this kind of thing, you can stop reading it.

Not bad😄Come on! I wish you better and better as you write!

Fortunately, there were no old actors, Changchun Kung, or Qing Yuan Sword Jue.

Cultivation is about living alone, so I couldn't read the introduction. It would be nice if I changed the introductory text, it would be similar to, see how I use the thousand-year-old elixir as a guide to become "...". Ten Thousand Years Medicinal Fruit (spiritual grass, or the names of the elixirs in cultivating immortality and other whimsical ideas. Or you can post an introduction that the author has modified himself. This is my taste. Others don't know. It would feel much better if I changed it. Personal opinion, I hope the author doesn't mind. I still prefer the theme of cultivating immortality.

The title of the book is good, and the introduction is really hard to describe in one sentence. It is recommended that the author come up with a more attractive introduction.

A monthly ticket encourages authors to write more. I think it's okay, but the details are a bit lacking. It feels like something out of place.

Can there be more calligraphy lessons? One chapter is too few words!