Time Is Great

The description is like a Western oil painting, showing the magnificence from a large perspective; the characters are full of literary youth, and have the same sadness as when they visited Jiangnan. Words are the carrier of stories. I believe that the world depicted in this writing must be colorful. ——I offer three monthly tickets for this common interest. 🤓

As of now, there are 157 chapters and 630,000 words, updating the watchmaker's system Watchmakers are also ordinary people at the beginning. After being in contact with clocks for a long time, they will develop a sensitivity to clocks and time that ordinary people do not have. ←This should be a direct sensitivity to time, but humans do not have the ability to directly feel time, so the physical object of the clock is used as a concrete expression of time. From this time on, the clocks designed by watchmakers can occasionally affect time. Currently known time operations include: time delay (cat's eye green), time suspension (platinum star), time lapse (heroic Chengren), Time deletion, jump (Crimson King), time escape (Loki) Future vision, past vision, time loop, timeline branch operation, etc. I can't even recognize the word time The current watchmaker is the first level. The watchmaker turns the operation "occasionally" and "unintentionally" into an active skill, which is the pseudo second level to the second level The watchmaker's skill has a distance limit and a limit of times per day, and the distance is within a small range. Time stop, the number of times is that if you use up today, you have to wait for the CD until tomorrow, but you can carry more watches with you. When the time delay is used up, use the time stop, and when the time stop is used up, delete the time. The more the clock maker plays with time, the more skilled he will become, and he will become more and more sensitive to time. Sense, and then use human senses to discover the concept of time that was originally unobservable, and upgraded to a master of level 2.9~Level 3 When the clock made by the master has no limit on the number of times per day, the distance limit seems to have been upgraded br> The latter is divided into the old school and the new school upgrade routes. The old school has been practicing time manipulation, getting stronger and stronger with practice, and has developed the skills of the clockmaker to be as "infinite" as the miracle The new school is based on the special creature such as the Beast of Time. Upgrade yourself from a human being, use time to make a cocoon, hatch in time, break out of the cocoon to complete the sublimation ceremony, and become an existence born from the time plane. From now on, you will be in the present. The past and the future are like the difference between the left and the right in the eyes of a clockmaker. Turn time manipulation into the instinct of creatures, as simple as breathing, and existence can cause time distortion The old school takes the long way around, the new school takes shortcuts, and Faust rides the beast of time to play around with time (bushi Watchmaker, the beast of time should be upgraded to the third or fourth level? 🤔 Thousand-year-old warrior has gone all the way to the top, and the clockwork in his hand can leverage the power of time. Is it the fourth to fifth level? 🤔 —— ———————————————————— 173 chapters and 700,000 words so far The new watchmaker route modified by Millennium Duke is divided into three parts, starting from the middle section, followed by the watch master The time level sublimation ritual New school time sublimation: Time operation technology becomes an instinct like breathing, transcending time, living in the present, the past and the future are like the left and right, existence can cause time distortion Old school master upgrade: Yes, practice, strengthen the concept of time, the body has not been sublimated by humans (unless you undergo psychic transformation or have the blessing of other systems), train the time operation technology to the same "infinite" as "miracle" Then Only then did I go back and change the early stage, making the early stage smoother and more efficient, mediocre people can also be recommended to masters, and geniuses become more powerful when exposed to this set The goal is to lower the threshold and popularize the field of watchmakers The new school does not consider the precision of previous time-operating technology. In the past, watchmakers had a set of hours, minutes, seconds, milliseconds, microseconds... By Planck time, watch masters later broke through the Planck time level, a level that falls within the scope of common sense, and advanced The stage of entering [forbidden knowledge] that cannot be touched by human intelligence The new route divides the skills of operating time into independent riding areas. It is not a necessity on the way to becoming a master in the past. If you want to roll, you can practice it yourself. If you don't roll, it doesn't mean you can't level up. Level As long as you can escort the master, and then seamlessly connect the sublimation of time, the technology of operating time will become instinctive. You have to feed yourself to this extent. Just take care of yourself. The Millennium Master has tried his best. It is your business to repay the favor. Don't leave it to the clockmaker. People Appear in Eyes The third part of the new school is the reference to [The Lost Time], which holds the lost time. This set has been proven to be feasible. Even people who are not clockmakers can use this to gain power and become the Lost Time. Watchmakers play this The set will be updated 6 But it seems to be just a prototype. It is already known that the results are still in the process of derivation, and the details have not been released yet I feel that the new school is not as good as... Leveraging the power of time🤗 ———— —————————————————— As of now, there are 233 chapters and 940,000 words, Compilation of new-school watchmaker paths: Thousand-year journey of old-school watchmaker system all the way to the top, pure watchmaking The watchmaker system has advanced to the fourth stage, [Infinite], and he has designed clockworks that can leverage the power of time. He is the first person in the field of watchmakers. He went back to organize members of the Millennium Faction and watch masters from other factions to study together, and put the entire watchmaker system in its original form. A new set of watchmaker pathways was made based on The new watchmaker path: Ordinary people → Level 1 has just entered the field of watchmakers → Mastered time operations at the second level → Touched the concept of time at the third level The basis of the new watchmaker path is based on some of the watchmaker techniques of the [Millennium Faction], combined with the insights of masters from other factions, to sort out a set of techniques from the [Reverse Trace Faction], covering the stages from ordinary people getting started to touching the concept of time For people with good talents, You can enroll in extracurricular classes on the basis of the [Reverse Mark Faction], and minor in other old school techniques [Reverse Mark Faction] technology is similar to elementary and junior high school mathematics for new watchmakers, and the old faction can be a Mathematical Olympiad class In the new-school watchmaker path, touching the concept of time is also called the first fulcrum. If you become a master, you will be equivalent to a master of the old-school watchmaker system. The Millennium Equation is based on the standards of the new school. It is to practice the pure first fulcrum to super-diversity and infinity After lighting up the field of the first fulcrum, the next step is the time sublimation ceremony of the second fulcrum and the control of the time trajectory of the third fulcrum The second fulcrum and the third fulcrum are not in order. It doesn't matter which branch you want to light first. The more fulcrums you light up, the more comprehensive the time level will be, and you will be further away from the fourth stage of the [Infinity] field In the beginning, there was only the second fulcrum created with reference to the existence of the beast of time. The time sublimation ceremony made the clock Learned from humans and sublimated into creatures born from the time plane, located in the 'now', the past and the future are like the left and right to the beast of time. The technology to manipulate time is instinct like breathing, and its existence can cause time distortion But the time required for the time sublimation ceremony is different for everyone. It can be long or short, and a short one will be enough, and a long one will not know how long it will take In order to solve this problem, the Millennium Duke on the sacred timeline of the main world refers to [The Time Lost] The existence of the third fulcrum has been studied The [Time Legacy] plundered the time of all things from the time base, and used the time trajectories they held to construct the [Dark Side of Time]. Millennium Duke did not follow this route of only forty-nine positions to occupy pits and upgrades, and created a time passage trajectory beyond forty-nine hours that can be used infinitely, [Fifty O'clock] The third fulcrum was created from scratch. The path created by Nian Gong can light up the field of the third fulcrum by designing his own [Fifty O'clock] watch work Lighting up the third fulcrum can promote the ritual process of the second fulcrum. Lighting up the second fulcrum also has a bonus to the third fulcrum. The three major pivots complement each other and become less and less short-circuited in the time level The new watchmaker path can lead people all over the world to ascend collectively Pull a simple table

So far, there are 112 chapters with 450,000 words. Let's briefly sort out the various systems that have appeared in the book Psychic power, miracles, skills, transformation, stigmata, and blessings Ranked from high to low appearance, based on personal feeling, it may not be accurate There are many power structure systems, but they are generally divided into several general levels. The first stage, the second stage, and so on, the first, second, and third levels, what are the bells and whistles? They can all be incorporated into it. The highest level of the currently played characters is level three, and the rest are still on the background board 1. Psionics are abilities that everyone has a chance to awaken. The specific probability of awakening is almost one in ten thousand. Abilities derived from the soul are called psionics. There are many types of powers, all of which are various powers. As long as they are awakened, they will grow automatically even if they lie down and mess around. It looks quite idealistic To use a saying in the book, "The future of psychic energy is unlimited" Always use psychic energy, and psychic energy will grow during use As time goes by, the longer the awakening time, the stronger the psychic energy will become According to the performance of psychic energy, follow the interpretation of psychic energy, acting method Psychic energy imitates "miracles" and can leave [traces] , these traces are regarded as small psychic powers, which can be distributed to others to help you with your psychic progress (Yuhabach?), Trace method Explaining your abilities to others during battle is a kind of affirmation of yourself. Talking your soul to your mouth can temporarily increase the strength of your psychic characteristics, but looking at the following statement, it seems that you can always be sure that you can also grow continuously. Believe it first, then believe it! There is no need for a reason to believe it! If the spirit of self-hypnosis succeeds, you can continue to become stronger. Hypnosis The cultivation of psychic energy relies on the five cultivation methods mentioned above. I don't know if any of them have been ignored and forgotten to sort out. Welcome to add The first, second and third levels are used in the classification of psykers, the first stage·[Awakening], the second stage·[Control] , the third stage · [Ether] The first stage has just been awakened, so it is called [Awakening], which is a change from scratch The second stage is very general, as long as there is improvement after awakening, it can be regarded as the second stage. It is temporarily called the pseudo second stage The official organization of the Demon Subduing Bureau recognizes the true second stage. The standard is to master a characteristic, such as [disintegrate into parts], the overwhelming beast tide of multiple shadow clones, and [unique] collectibles to use as remote spring blood packs for yourself There is a clear gap in the hazard level between mastering a characteristic and not mastering it. As you continue to level up, you will have more and more characteristics. The more characteristics, the more combat power you will have. The reason is that Theoretically, the characteristics and combat power can be as high as the second level and the third level of gossamer, but the realm cannot be upgraded The third level is named after the element "ether" in alchemy that does not exist in this world. It is a metaphor that the number of third level people is sparse and they also need to possess an element that does not exist in this world. Should they find it from an independent plane like the underground world? The third level that comes out now is Sir Apple's [Golden Apple]. Golden Apple is an element that does not exist in the main world. Opening the third level on the main world map too hard will cause [Aether] to affect the world and interfere with people's understanding of the world. Therefore, you have to open a separate world map as a battlefield. Does it feel like using nuclear weapons in the main world? The ether of the previous generation of executive officers is not mentioned. I think Faust's stasis magic eye should also be an ether. There was no magic eye in the world that passed through. The magic eye in the atrium world after awakening is also considered a kind of ether, but it is not considered until it is clearly stated what the settings are. Although the third level is played with ether, which gives people a feeling that it is not in the same system as the second level spiritual energy, the ether will stimulate the improvement of spiritual energy. Entering a period of rapid improvement, the improvement of spiritual energy will increase exponentially. It has been recorded that the person who rose to the third level has the least improvement of ten times in ten minutes, and then Later, he was forcibly killed by the enemy before he could continue to grow. This is an example of breaking through on the battlefield but failing to counterattack Sir Apple's second-level psionic power can make people die of old age instantly. The output level of psionic power is a small-scale time aging of tens of millions of years as a unit. It is to use golden apples to grow and stack them up. It has been said that there are examples of psykers relying on ether to superimpose the second-level psionic power into infinity, but it has not officially appeared yet The executive officer of the Demon Subduing Bureau is benchmarked against the third level, or must one have third-level combat power to become an executive officer. The chief executive officer looks obviously different from other executive officers. It is suspected to be the fourth level? 2. The awakening template of Miracle is similar to Jojo's stand-in. It is randomly obtained, born, affected by blood, and has a certain skill that makes it as good as the chef in Jo4 The protagonist comes through and is resurrected, just right It corresponds to the miracle of resurrection from the dead Miracles and miracles will attract each other, and substitute messengers and substitute messengers will also attract each other In terms of intensity, miracles are higher than psychic energy, and the level is close to level three, which is almost level 2.9 At the beginning? To reach infinity, a psyker needs to stack three levels of ether brush to grow, and it takes an unknown amount of time to reach infinity. The starting point of miracles is infinity directly. The miracle of resurrection from the dead is as infinite as a demi-human in the protagonist The miracle of predicting the future was lost to the Millennium Duke who also holds time-type miracles. The two time miracles compete for each other's world line, and the winner is determined only if one of them loses. Otherwise, ordinary people can't catch it. The Holder of Miracles The Miracle Master who knows everything holds the author's set book. There is infinite "correct" knowledge and information in the Sea of Omniscience. The only difficulty is that the set set is too thick to turn through, and it takes time to read page by page In addition to resurrection, time, and omniscient miracles, there is also a creation type miracle of void creation. It is still a background board, but it seems to be related to the craftsman profession Miracles of the same type will be transferred after the duel. If you take all the miracles of this type, you will be a complete miracle of this type. Holding a complete miracle is considered a saint in the Apocalypse Church. The saint should be at level three or above "Miracles" will leave [traces], a derivative power "The miracle of resurrection from the dead" will leave [traces of immortality] (the traces of the protagonist are the demi-human Xiao Hei, and the traces of the dead river are Blood River, Kamaitachi stole the traces of the dead river (the traces on the body are super-fast regenerated), and the "miracle that predicts the future" will leave [traces of the future], which are used by the protagonist to modify the pocket watch to make the Crimson King The traces can be recycled by the church as a resource exchange, or they can be absorbed and enhanced by holders of the same type of miracles. Others can only tame the power of traces with master-level skills, or have a strong perception of time and forcibly modify it like the protagonist. According to the book, if the traces are not cleaned up quickly, the scope will expand and evolve into a large-scale accident and disaster 3. Skills, professions, the specific professions that appear include watchmakers, martial artists, architectural designers, craftsmen, and other professions, but they don't seem to show any extraordinary characteristics, or I didn't notice that they were ignored Martial artists can be regarded as enhanced versions The character in Fist Wishes: Atomic Samurai can be seen as a Bangu atomic warrior in one punch. The body shield machine penetrates from the mountain to the underground subway station, and strikes in the subway tunnel to cause earthquakes It seems that there is no energy pool of internal energy or Qi. The panel of a martial artist is physical fitness, musculoskeletal strength, limb coordination, nerve reflex speed, cardiopulmonary and internal organ function, and the breathing method is similar to an enhanced version of Demon Slayer Tsukuni Enichi? Architectural designers seem to be intensifying construction and space operations. The real area of the designed house will be larger than it looks from the outside. A large elevator shaft and subway passage can be inserted into a crack in the wall. The extra space can also be controlled by the architect at will. Part of the space can be directly inserted or part of the space can be reduced. The distance of one centimeter can be stretched to tens of thousands of kilometers. The telescopic space can make people look like meteorites. Smash it down like this and isolate everything from the outside world to form an independent field Clockmakers have an occupational disease that is very sensitive to clocks and time. The clocks they designed are Platinum Star (time stop), Crimson King (time deletion), Loser Eats Dust (time loading), Man's World (time rewind), Heroic Chengren (time aging), Made in Heaven (time acceleration) There is also a cat's eye green that slows down time, but there is no substitute. I top this position ( Currently, it seems that the props designed by the clockmaker have a limit on the number of times they can be used in a day. Those who can use them indefinitely should only be master clockmakers, or the Millennium Duke, who has the power to leverage time. They give up the miracle of time type, but push the clockmaker's skills to infinite The craftsman is to make psychic weapons and sew the seven alchemical kingdoms of Xinlongsi Watchmakers and craftsmen The props made must be maintained after the battle, so I am not a producer, and I don't have a huge logistics system, which is a bit difficult to play The characters in these professions can basically participate in high-level combat. Although it is not stated clearly, they are at least second level. Among them, the level of master level skills corresponds to about 2.9Th to third level 4. Transformation, psychic transformation is A large-scale engineering surgery was performed on the body, and the extremely complete psychic transformation even changed the head into something other than a human. There were animals, plants, dragons, and monsters, and some had their heads replaced with objects such as guns. They looked like the protagonists of Gun Demon Chainsaw Man or Life Without Guns Those who had transformed themselves into dragons before would have hybrids in their inherited bloodline, and would have a chance of getting golden pupils and spirit spirits In addition to head replacement, the magic eyes were transplanted It is also a kind of spiritual transformation with a very high degree of completion. The ordinary transformation should be from the first level to the pseudo second level. The extremely high degree of completion is considered to be the true second level. The Kamaitachi that used to be at the military level is probably from level 2.9 To level 3? The basic performance is that it can set off a super typhoon of level 16 or above, thanks to the awesome architect, otherwise the city would be blown away 5. Stigmata, the exclusive power system of the Apocalypse Church, does not appear much, it seems to be related to the color. In the past, the priests in the church held black stigmata, but they were discontinued after sending them all. Now they are equipped with red stigmata The red stigmata can control all concepts related to red, Tianke and blood-related abilities, unless the blood is not red The first time Xiaolu used it, he failed to control it and brushed away the color of the red maple forest in the mountainous area around the city. It seems that the person who used it did not realize the impact of brushing off the red color. If Realizing that he had brushed away the red blood, the whole city would lose all their blood in an instant When the stigmata was activated, it seemed that psychic energy could not be prevented. At least the telekinesis expert next to him could not prevent it. It may be that Xiaolu and Danzhuchi are special, and other priests are not so cool 6. Blessings, [Hundred-Eyed One] provides benefits to the dependents, allowing the dependents to control the matters related to the 'eye' at will. Su, all the people who saw and felt the dependents had to bear the same curse as the blessing without special defense, and turned into polluted monsters. They cleared the magic skills but never won the high-end game. Is it probably at the second level? No one can reach the third level. There is a feeling of tuna energy shark light, which is identified as pure flying🤗 ----------------- As of Chapter 201, 81w words, update the system This paragraph is mostly to improve the main system of the Clockmaker. The Clockmaker system has been compiled separately, so there is relatively little update content here The focus is on the third level and beyond, the fourth stage·[Infinity] At present, it is clear that in the psionic system, only the Chief Executive Officer, the strongest psyker in the world, is the fourth-level Infinite, and the infinity of other systems (such as the Clockmaker's Miraculous Stigmata, the Relic of Time, etc. ) Also exists, but it is not a psychic system and will not be compared together Infinity is divided into the infinity of the single universe and the infinity of the multiverse, first regarded as the pseudo-fourth order and the true fourth-order A clockmaker can stop when it starts, and it can stop the whole world from time to time, and it can pause time forever. The timeline of the universe is stopped, and the same is true for others. The number of activations is unlimited and the duration is unlimited. This is a multi-dimensional infinite, true fourth level Many miracles focus on one aspect, and some are simply purely auxiliary functions without lethality. Infinite's frontal combat effectiveness is not strong, unlike the Chief Executive Psyker Level 4 True Infinite, who is too strong to dare to activate his own psychic powers. The sacred timeline of the main world will be shattered by psychic powers if it leaks out even slightly If you want to take action, you can only open a space battlefield on the earth. Even if you open a battlefield map, you can only use a prop that seals your own spiritual energy as a weapon to hit people for the time being. If you accidentally use too much force, you can ask the Millennium Duke to help you rewind time and correct the world before destroying the world. Become a sign There is one more way to improve your spiritual power. Hunt yourself in other parallel universe timelines. After defeating the alien community, you can obtain the other party's spiritual power. The overlap of souls can multiply exponentially without side effects. The only drawback is whether you can beat yourself in other world lines, and whether you will be hunted by the other self as prey "Miracle" is in the infinite field from the beginning, with unlimited resurrection and unlimited time. Stop, infinite information knowledge, etc., But it only focuses on a certain aspect of infinity. It can be used as an auxiliary, but the conversion into frontal combat capability will be discounted. In addition to the attached [Traces], it is better to treat it as level 2.9 And not adjust it The essence of [Stigmata] is the trauma of the apocalypse, which is equivalent to "miracle". It is also essentially in the infinite field from the beginning, but it depends more on the individual's idealism Speciality is the need for great existence. Special attack can also be used as an auxiliary to stack other abilities with high compatibility. [Black Stigma] stacks the previous executive's [Black] to infinity at once, directly blackening a great being, and sealing him in the form of the Hundred-Eyed One. Now The main attribute of the stigmata is determination, spiritual will, and pure idealism. The level of performance varies randomly from level one to level four. If you rush in and open the stigmata with shouts of love, bond, friendship, etc., You should be able to reach infinity (

This is what I prayed for, let's wait and see first.

The power system of this book: 1. Psionics: The more common psychic modifications can enhance physical fitness and add certain special functions. Self-awakened psychic powers possess special abilities that vary from person to person. (To be added) 2. Skills: At present, the skills of this world are powerful. Watchmakers can touch the power of time through clock technology, such as making clocks that can stop time, and craftsmen can create psychic weapons. Others need to be added. 3. Miracles are an incredible power that is different from spiritual energy. It can predict the future, come back to life (doubtful) and other miraculous things. It seems to be related to the church. Different people have it, and miracles of the same type can complete each other. 4. Martial artists, using martial arts, seem to strengthen themselves by exercising their bodies and mastering their energy. The above is just what I have collected so far, everyone is welcome to correct or complete it.

I came here from Qi Miao. The writing was very good, but the part about fighting the hounds was a little dizzy.

You Lushou teacher is so awesome. How did he die at the hands of a small organization with such a low power level? How does this logic make sense? ? ?

I already understand everything 😋

This is from Mr. Ko Shingen, and the cover is also a picture I like very much. I have saved it.

The description techniques are not new at first glance, but I can't last more than six chapters... It feels like a competitive game has two hundred professions, and each profession needs two hundred skills. It will directly discourage new players.

Well, it ended successfully anyway? Just do it. I feel that in the final stage, the author obviously lost the ability to control the article. It feels like it comes out as soon as it comes up. In other words, after thinking about the ending, there is only a vague idea of ​​how to get there. It looks very messy. There are also a lot of foreshadowings that have not been recycled, such as what happened to Faust's subhuman physique, Zuo Yu's second life and death enemy, the great existence that gained fifty hours, the object of Zuo Yu's sacrifice, etc. In the final plot stage, there are also some units that look very useless at the end, such as the Memory Hunter. The author obviously wrote it too strong and couldn't handle it, so in the end he was directly beaten to death by the mechanical deity. But this role doesn't seem to have much effect. The only effect seems to be to allow Faust to obtain the Blue Stigmata. But then he couldn't leave the show because of the memory disc. Oh, by the way, there are also Faust's eyes. From the beginning, they emphasized how special the eyes are, and even strengthened them specifically for this purpose. But in the end, it seemed that they were just used as tools to lose stillness. Why are they so strong? What exactly are eyes? No one knows. However, in the end, I still relied on my senses to ascend to the gods, as if the outline had been changed midway. The God of Time is the big hit point of the deer-headed father, and I have already mentioned it in one stroke. By the way, is there any hint in the previous article? Never noticed it at all. In short, this book ends with a happy ending. I hope the author can carefully consider the ending and the way to reach the ending in the next book. In other words, for this kind of short novel, it is recommended to think about "what kind of story I want to tell" from the beginning.

This book is destined to be a dud, as this post proves

First of all, the subject matter is novel, but the plot is very messy. For example, relatives want to divide the property or Mr. And Mrs. Lu die and only Xiaolu is left. To be honest, it is very vulgar and cliched. The author has a huge world view, but his writing style is not enough to control it. Just like you can't directly write about someone who is sad, you need to write about ordinary life and tears at night, so that we can feel it ourselves, write about relatives' flattery for money and inadvertent contempt, write about Xiaolu who is strong during the day and hides in the protagonist's arms to cry at night, so that we can feel that they are living people, design some conflicts and add some coincidences, I think it is a perfect novel 🌹

Psychic Transformation

I, the time traveler, have come back from the dead. I have just been blinded. The enemy will no longer care about me! I, the time traveler, even if the strength of the enemy is unknown, I only know what kind of group, poacher, or giant beast, but I am the protagonist, I can definitely take revenge alone! I, the time traveler, will never cooperate with the authorities. What if I am treated as a guinea pig? It is better to investigate the clues myself, bayonet with the enemy, solve the hidden dangers, and cannot expose the special information, otherwise the information of my four eyes will be leaked... I, the time traveler, is like this, awesome, even if I have just traveled through time, even if I have just come back from the dead, I am confident! Because I am a time traveler and I am the protagonist! ! ! ! I don't need to grow!

In just five chapters, the elements include accidents, identities, demon-conquering bureaus, younger sisters, psychic powers, sources of antlers, clock repairs, relatives, debt compensation, protagonist's abilities, green-eyed setting, elders and old friends. The amount of information is overwhelming but at the same time, it is not understood. The writing is not poisonous but makes me dizzy. The dismissal rate in online novels, such impetuous time-killing products, is really high. The last time I encountered this situation was when I found 200 trophies in one night in Arkham🏆, and the result was "The Riddler gets out of Gotham!" 🥵🥵🥵

It's such a novel subject, but it's a pity that the author's writing skills are limited. The author likes the writing style of pinching off the tail directly. Although it is understandable, the cutting is very unnatural and strange. Many times, especially the climax, the ending is not done properly. Generally speaking, the writing of this novel is very concise. There are not too many words that are not full, but there are also many places that should be full. There are a few battles that are inexplicable and sudden, and it feels like it is imposed. Suddenly, three back-ends left by the boss appeared out of nowhere. The first two were solved quickly, but the difficulty of the third one soared to a big level. Then the first two back-ends appeared again, saying that they had not been dealt with completely. This was done more than once. It was disgusting. The plot was too thin, and the branch lines were not clearly written. They were mentioned occasionally to create suspense, but there was not even a story, no content at all, and it was very empty.

Good news: I found an interesting book in the book shortage Bad news: I found it too early

Xiaolu

Suddenly I realized that the title of this book is not a homophony of "The Dead Is Big" 🙂

It's a messy read. It starts with the protagonist using his abilities for no apparent reason, then chasing the enemy, and then he keeps confiding information to the villain. He's not calm at all. Also, the clocks sold by his master, I thought they were just decorations at the front, but they actually have so many superpowers behind them. This is completely unjustified by the status of a clockmaker. It is obviously a superpower object, but he allows others to buy it at ordinary prices. It seems that no one except the protagonist found out that it is a superpower item.

At first glance, the title of the book looks like an elbow is too big 😅

Author, when will there be a new book? It's a pity to finish it in a hurry

Stream of consciousness, a bit abstract, see if you can match the author's brainwaves

The last few chapters have become increasingly difficult to understand, especially the plot after Kong Wu's appearance. First, the dark side calls each other's names, and then the protagonist somehow knows their names? Then the void can erase its own existence and cannot be sensed by the protagonist. It seems extremely awesome. The first two memories of Hunter were still in the state of "I fight Su Nuo", but this suddenly turned into a black flash Su Nuo? ? ?

At the beginning of the first chapter, I thought the author was writing a dragon clan fanfic 😰

A dialysis needle is used to expose the baby, Lulu baby is exposed after a dialysis injection

After watching it for a long time, I still didn't understand the miracle of the protagonist? Shouldn't it be resurrection through time?

After reading more than 100 chapters, I felt that the protagonist was made too special. He was originally able to walk Aether, but it feels like the author felt that walking a few was too strong, so he cut him, but then felt that he couldn't cut him too hard, so that the protagonist had the characteristics of Aether.

I have ideas and the writing is good. I hope the plot can be more serious. The conflict creation still feels like ten years ago. It's too old.