Once You Hear the Truth, Your Corpse Will Be Released and You Will Ascend to Immortality.

Although I can't write a book, but taking a hundred steps back, author, can't you update a hundred chapters at a time? Maybe people will say this is unreasonable, but I also said that I can't write a book.

I just said how could this book be so well written! After reading it, I found that the author's last book was about a clock imitating a wind pigeon. Although the plot of the previous book was a bit difficult, now it seems that he has perfected his writing skills. It's a great read! But I strongly recommend not to imitate that style anymore. Feng Gege's original "The Iron Throne" was very good, but it was not a Jiangnan-style bitter and feuding child... Now he can write any protagonist and make it look like "There is a Lu Mingfei in the Eyes of a Lion", although it is not impossible to watch - I I even read "Forecast of the Apocalypse" several times - but after the two sequels of Mr. Jiangnan, the man he imitated and a master of aesthetics for men and women's dressing, after "Dragon 3", let readers experience the pleasure of a continuous red stone, reading similar Jiangnan's writing is a bit unforgettable. As expected, Feng Gege's new work has changed from the protagonist of a high school student to a researcher. But I beg the author not to be like Jiangnan and Feng Gege when designing the plot 😵 The martial arts and Taoism (?) In this book are really well written, especially the various training methods (schools) that can be used to achieve supernatural powers are treated as one. The setting of the "path" of martial arts is actually closer to the practice in Taoist and Buddhist concepts in ancient China. For example, the Taoist inner alchemy method believes that "The Hinayana alchemy method consists of four methods: "matching yin and yang", "gathering and dispersing water and fire", "coupling dragons and tigers", and "burning elixirs". Those who succeed in it can become immortals who live in peace and longevity...", Compared to the advanced path of sequential job transfer (best friend) , obviously this self-assembled advancement path is more in line with the background setting of ancient martial arts and Taoism; in addition, the martial arts set by the author are not more powerful the older they are. For example, driving corpses is an old technology that has been eliminated by more advanced martial arts school systems, and it is also great to have Mr. Jing try to learn the essence of old technology to develop new things. It makes me It reminds me of Nobel Prize winner Ms. Tu's team using Chinese herbal medicine formulas to use modern technology to produce artemisinin purified from medicinal materials 👍 Overall, the current plot settings of this book are great and the pace is okay. The short-term main plot seems to be upgrading to a formal martial artist-level physique and opening up Taoist/spiritual abilities? The latest boss battle should involve fighting a snake or the organization behind it, or interspersed with some short sub-plots that provide rich settings or foreshadowing? Then the further long-term main line may be to discover the origin of Goldfinger, the background story of Ji Xiaocai, or the hidden planes and background settings of this world? In short, the author writes well, keep up the good work! Facts aside, I believe you can do five updates a day😃

The first, second and third levels are familiar, but the martial artist system The basic physical attributes of a martial artist are [musculoskeletal strength, nerve reflex speed, limb coordination, heart and lungs and other internal organ functions] Ordinary people want to be a martial artist, they must achieve two achievements Improve physical attributes, train methods, strengthen the muscles and bones, strengthen the body, and achieve the physical standard [four upright and eight pillars], the basics A ton of strength [Qi Jin Guan Fa] Basic understanding of the most correct power, 100% perfect use of power without any loss, ordinary people can also play thunder, and continued upgrading can exponentially increase the power to exert power Physique [Four Upright Eight Pillars], Skill [Qi Jin Guan Fa] If you achieve these two points, you can be recognized by the Martial Arts Association as an official martial artist There is another standard for martial artists is [ Martial Arts Will], a party with strong martial arts will can completely overwhelm those with weak martial arts will with just one look, allowing the weak to affect their performance and unable to show their strength. Upgraded martial arts will can deal real damage to the soul, and it also brings persistence But [Martial Arts Will] is too demanding and is not regarded as a necessary condition for a formal martial artist A formal martial artist obviously corresponds to the first stage. Continuing to level up can normally upgrade physical fitness. [Four Upright Eight Pillars], strengthen the technique [Qi Jin Guanfa], and fill [Martial Arts Will] You can also follow the "practice path" developed by the sect, or focus on martial arts practice until you have "achievements" in martial arts A summary of the practice paths that have appeared so far: The way of martial arts, after practicing a martial arts to a small success, you can [change shape], [ [Change Root Bones], after easily obtaining hundreds of shapes, you can be considered to have completed this path of cultivation. If you continue to roll, you can also roll out the Taoist of Ten Thousand Shapes. I go, isn't this the plot of the Black Whale Hammer? Remember to mark the source next time 🤗 [Transforming light and dark energy into Jin], at a glance, the flow of Chinese martial arts, it does not need to be introduced too much to transform bright Jin and dark Jin into Jin Gang Jin [The way of golden elixir], one body of energy and blood can refine the golden elixir, warm and nourish the body, experience [Seven Returns and Nine The practice of still] is considered to be a pass [Ninth Level Breaking Limits], breaking through the limit nine times, reaching the limit of the human body, and successfully reaching the ninth level is considered to be a pass [Qi and Blood Furnace], the demon disintegrates and burns Qi and blood to ignite the furnace fire. The "furnace fire" is a kind of extraordinary energy that martial artists can easily come into contact with in this world. However, this way burns too much Qi and blood, and ordinary people can easily burn themselves to death. To use sea A large amount of resources can be used to make up for the shortfall instead of using energy and blood as firewood to burn the fire. Once you practice it to [Proficiency], it will be considered a success Now I have added a set of methods to transform the Hong Furnace. Hold the furnace fire and the furnace cauldron with both hands. If you master it, it will be higher than other ways. Level one and a half [Acquired Innateness], practice the twelve main meridians and eight meridians to open up the Rendu and Du meridians, take a look at Jin Yong's Gulong martial arts system, and practice [Return to Innate Innateness], you can consider this path of practice [Train skin, muscles, muscles, bones and viscera], the leader is more familiar, he knows what it is without any introduction [True Dragon Thirteen Chapters], there was a martial artist who compiled his own system of all the ways on the path of a martial artist. The inheritance left behind, the bone training method in it is more powerful than the [bone training] system itself. If you copy it and practice it, you can fight ten at the level of [bone training]. When it comes to the extraordinary energy of "Dragon Qi", achieving the achievement of [Transforming Dragon] is regarded as having passed this path of cultivation The "Transforming Dragon" in Chapter 13 of True Dragon is obviously one level higher than other single cultivation paths. Half level, it is not clear who is higher than the [Qi-Blood Flood Furnace] which has completed the method of transforming the Flood Furnace [Dragon and Elephant Powerful], Li Yuanba's "power of four elephants cannot be surpassed", Niu Power, Tiger Power, Elephant Power, Dragon Power System , I don't know whether "the power of one dragon" counts as a path to success or [Ten Dragons and Ten Elephants], or whether it is [Thirteen Dragons and Elephants] that can lead to this path of practice, to overwhelm people and prove the Tao Martial artist achievement system: The "four major exercises" of physical body polishing achieve [Golden Muscles and Jade Luo], [Mercury Blood and Silver Marrow], [Water and Fire Immortal Clothes], and [Zhoutian Qi Collection]. They are four achievements, in no particular order, but putting together the four major exercises is almost the same as taking a path of cultivation The physical body polishing [Vajra] and [Indestructible] achievements include external and silent exercises. The two together form [Vajra Indestructible], which is approximately equivalent to gathering the four major exercises. , Which is equivalent to walking through a path of cultivation Controlling [Sense of Distance] can be upgraded to [Close to the End of the World], this high-level achievement is approximately equivalent to [Indestructible Diamond] Controlling [Tingjin] can be upgraded to [Destroying Force], hey, it turns out to be the Emperor of the Sea! There are relatively few achievements in the weapon system. The basics are [arms and fingers], and then the matching [lifting weight as if it is light] + [lifting as light as if it is heavy] is considered a path of practice Being able to complete a path of practice is considered a master of martial arts, and it corresponds to the second stage at a glance , those who can combine all the ways and follow several paths of practice are considered to be the pinnacle of the second level A first-generation grandmaster, martial arts master, and martial arts master, at first glance, they are the ether corresponding to the third stage The supreme grandmaster, at a glance, the fourth level infinite, looks so familiar🤗 Once he hears the Tao, he will become an immortal! The deceased is the greatest? Time is great! 😤

Qiuqiu, please give me a new book to read. I can do anything.

Brief review after reading the first twenty chapters: The male protagonist was involved in a fight between warriors. The limiter between life and death is broken, and the origin is awakened. Although he didn't open the Death Eye, he became a magician. Accepting the "magic" flowing from the source: Taiyin Refining and Corpse Explanation Chapter. The secret of heaven was naturally refined. From then on, not only did he return to life from death, but he also formed a cycle of life and death. Moreover, it can also steal the secret of the true meaning of martial arts, which can be achieved without learning once it is refined. You can achieve advanced levels in the blink of an eye without practicing, and you don't even need to add points. But the body cannot violate the law of conservation of matter and instantly become a superman.

You have spent too much energy building a huge spiritual practice system, but are not willing to let it hide behind the story as a background board, resulting in too many words describing the protagonist's spiritual path. This will cause a problem: you are using the protagonist to explain the practice system you set instead of writing a story. At present, it feels like the practice system is the main content, and the story only exists to show your settings. Using stories to show settings is essentially a method of "writing secrets", just like the Buddhist scriptures show Buddhism and Taoism through some stories. The story is not the core, Buddhism and Taoism are the core. A novel written by Liu Cixin, a science student, even though there are many hard-core settings, his settings are all about building a worldview, and the content of the story is still the main focus. Using stories to introduce settings is really the opposite of Tiangang.

After reading it, I hope that the author can grasp the strength iteration well, and don't find that the enemy's strength cannot be maintained after upgrading. (So ​​the metaphysical description begins, such as the metaphysical memory hunter in this book)

The setting is very enjoyable to watch, but if the setting is more than the story content, it is a waste of paper. After telling most of the story, I have risen to so many realms and achieved so many achievements. Looking back, I am still fighting against the original enemy. It's like you ran the quest line for three days and three nights, got seventy-eight quest rewards, and ended up having a good fight with the monsters in Novice Village. Even if you directly write the current enemies to death, improve the settings you have not made for future enemies, and have a satisfactory plot advancement, it will be fine.

The author has a lot of ideas in his mind, but he just can't present them well. There is no sense of narration. Storytelling is not about throwing away settings. Settings must serve the plot so that people can accept the setting and remember the plot.

Your book is a bit outrageous. It goes on for ten chapters without even introducing the background. For example, what kind of world is this? You just wrote that it is a world of martial arts training and then disappeared. It's a mess.

At first glance, the title of your introductory book was thought to be about the classic fairy tale, Zhijie Xian, but then I saw that it was about martial arts training. There is a big gap.

Although Zhong Zu said that the Corpse Solution Immortal was a low-ranking immortal, he did not die at all. He transformed into plants, trees, snakes, insects and other alien species. He did not know when he would become an adult again. The protagonist plans to become the kind of corpse-removing immortal

After reading a few chapters, the main character is dead at the beginning of the book. He is just the author's walking zombie. There will be no surprises, surprises or frustrations. No matter what changes occur, they will automatically become harmonious and natural. It is really tragic.

The protagonist's strength is amazing! Well, it looks strong! But it doesn't seem to show much, it seems like it is hit casually, and it feels cold if you are not careful! The boundaries are blurred! Like the protagonist seems to be strong, but also seems to be weak? Approaching the Grandmaster, his realm is unknown and his combat power is unknown! The enemies seem to have a mysterious self-confidence, and each one is more confident than the last! It's as if as soon as he takes action, the protagonist and everything else will become an ant! It's like you can crush him to death at any time, what a weird mentality? The protagonist's strength is infinitely close to that of a master! The enemy is not a master, so how can he have such strong confidence? ? ? Weird! Anyway, the more I look at it now, the more I feel a little confused...

It's more like a setting collection than a novel. Couldn't there be more daily interactions between the characters?

How should I put it? It feels like expository writing mixed with fiction.

When I saw Chapter 34, how should I put it, there were too many things that were similar to the Taoist Scriptures. I skipped through chapter after chapter, all of which were introduced. You wouldn't think that readers are reading this book to understand Taoism, right? . . Too many things are introduced and the plot stays put.

Isn't the title "Zi Jie Xian"? Why are the comments all about martial artists, masters, etc.?

The first 10 chapters are all empty words, vague and confusing, with all kinds of lofty names at every turn, but no actual content at all This is not how novels are written.

It's too watery, half of the chapter is just setting, and there is no plot advancement.

After reading the first two chapters, I found it somewhat interesting. After reading Chapter 5, I started skipping through it. I felt that there were a lot of words written, but the amount of information was not large or that there was not much useful information. It was not pretentious and felt very bland.

Master Nan, you were a grandmaster back then. From the text, it feels like the people around the protagonist don't pay much attention to him. After all, it only takes more than half a month to grow into a character below a grandmaster. Most people can't beat him. Shouldn't he be respected more if he is on the same level as Hime Myaki? Just add more

🤔🤔🤔No, after only 10 chapters, why has it been suspended for four days?🤔

Eunuch, sad

Wc, I watched the update on the 19th, and I thought about it, and my crotch stretched out.

Don't tell me it's all over now. If you ask for leave, please make a statement.

A eunuch? No update for half a month

Just finished reading and stopped updating? Don't be too outrageous

Why is this book not as easy to understand as the previous one? The writing is too confusing. It feels like the direction is off. This is not as clear as what I wrote in the early stages of the previous book. I generally dislike white writing, but I didn't expect that there would be times when I would be persuaded the other way around. . .

No, why did it stop again? Is the leave request stuck again?