The Mountain Kingdom

Finished reading. . . It's a very bland narrative. In the barbaric Viking age, I think such people would have a hard time living. Alas, not attractive.

The beginning was very speechless. You are ready to go to the wilderness to survive alone and build your own home there. In the end, I didn't buy anything else, but just bought a female slave? We are not saying that you cannot buy female slaves, but it is outrageous if you only buy female slaves without buying anything else. Don't buy a knife or an ax? If there is no Andrew, the protagonist is going to chop down the tree with his head? This is away from Dapu. If you really want to open up in a mountain forest and build your own home. At the very least, you need to buy an ax or knife, some salt, some oil, prepare a few cooking utensils, and buy some rope. These are the most basic things. Try to buy them when you can buy them in the city. As a result, the protagonist didn't seem to have prepared anything, so he took his female slave and walked for ten and a half months to a strange mountain to settle down. I was speechless. If you really don't understand, it won't take much time to read more about wilderness survival.

After eating too much big fish and meat, it's good to try a clear soup with little water.

Complete body?

The composition is like a running account. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't see the key points, and there were dozens of chapters that opened up wasteland. The second son of the baron also wanted to find someone else to learn swordsmanship. Even if you are educated, you still have to go out to hang out, even though you are short of food and clothing. You're here to write a travel article, but the underlying logic doesn't make sense. Knowledge is the basis of survivability in times of war and famine. You go out alone to hang out, haven't you heard that it's good to enjoy the shade under a big tree? The first pot of gold is either bloody or dirty. If you say he is the protagonist, it does not exist. Talking about the lack of weapons, come on, if you are a modern person who travels back in time and doesn't know how to make weapons or metal, I will look down on you. What time travel are you writing about? First of all, I wanted to write about the protagonist standing aloofly on the shoulders of civilization and looking down at the barbarians, and the two stars pretending to slap each other in the face to establish a modern civilized country. Overall it doesn't look good, looks like a eunuch

For other protagonists of the farming style, I can always summarize for them a set of reasons why they are successful and successful, including specific operations and supporting theories. But in your book, I am so confused that I can't sum it up. I couldn't sleep anyway, and in the middle of the night, I saw two big words in the book, "Better than worse"!

Traveling to a barbaric society where human life is worthless, and experiencing a life and death crisis, the protagonist still works as a tourist. I don't have anything. After my father-in-law left, the protagonist started to harm his father-in-law's family property. He didn't feel bad if he used things that were not his. Because I wanted to drink sugar water, I asked my fiancée for it, but she didn't have it either. I can't drink sugar water, and there's no foreshadowing. For example, I miss my hometown, so I just emo 🤔. It's really a huge sensory experience. Then the protagonist's mind turned directly to keeping bees. His fiancée asked him if he could keep bees, and he confidently said no. Then when he kept bees, his fiancée's family provided resources to support him. As a result, his fiancee admired him even more when she heard that the protagonist didn't know how to keep bees and directly supported him 🤔. Long Aotian was not so outrageous. In my sense, he was afraid that his father-in-law was gone, so he started to make faces, exposing the protagonist's giant baby nature and a stupid heroine who has no ability to think independently. In addition, the protagonist wants to drink sugar water and then turns directly to wanting to keep bees. The plot is too abrupt. If you don't think about fruits, birch trees, maples, and maltose first, there will be no foreshadowing. I didn't think about where to find the queen bee, how to make the queen bee settle down, and I won't mention the rest. You didn't even see the shadow of the queen bee, how did you suddenly think of raising bees? I still agree with the author's writing style of this book, a non-hurried farming flow, but the plot twists and foreshadowing are rather blunt, as well as the problem of characterization. I think Chapter 70 is the concentrated expression of these problems.

After looking at it, the author is a city man and lacks common sense about rural life.

It's pretty good, just keep writing according to your ideas, it won't be bad

Very poisonous, very poisonous. What I like to see are people who usually feel good about themselves.