Alternate World City: Five Accounts

The recent chapters are too disjointed. The settings are that all the accounts belong to the same person, but they are presented as different people. The thief account is so reckless, while the main account is a complete coward. Maybe the author went back to the past character settings as he wrote. It is a bit like the male protagonist settings in Power Brother's previous works, but this kind of cowardly character setting is very disjointed here.

Author, please focus your energy on the mountains and forests first.

What I admire most about the book is that many of its bizarre logical fallacies can be explained within this bizarre worldview. The author is truly a genius; ordinary people simply couldn't conceive of such an absurd yet logical world.

In your diary, you mentioned that you always finished writing about mountains and forests right on time. How can that be good?

After the guild war ended, things got increasingly boring. All I did was talk about Zhong's private affairs and Dong's insecure and sensitive inner thoughts. I'm outta here.

The characters in the novel keep saying that Zhong Mingsheng is disgusting, but what exactly makes him disgusting? The logic is nonsensical. Zhong Mingsheng did not oppress others with his high rank, nor did he commit arson, murder, or looting. He only fights back when he's been bullied to the point of being bullied himself; it's really absurd to keep calling him bad.

What have you been writing lately? Can't you add some conflict? Is it really interesting to just keep describing Zhong Mingsheng playing around with women? 😥

I saw everyone praising it in the comments, so I thought it was a really good book. I read 10 chapters, and honestly, it's not bad. But unfortunately, you just can't get into it. I genuinely don't understand why a level 3 rogue has only 31 points in Agility, and all other stats are allocated to one point? What's the point of that?

Your writing is getting increasingly boring. The recent plots are too repetitive and clichéd. Go back to urban fiction; protagonists like Ginji are what you excel at!

I like the author's novels that are not bound by women and allow the author to do things their own way.