Alternate World City: Five Accounts

The last few chapters have been too fragmented. Several accounts are set up with the same person, but they appear to be different people. The thief account is so reckless, and the main account is a complete loser. Maybe the author wrote about the character design that went back to the past, a bit like the male protagonist design of the previous works of Brother Li, but this kind of loser character is very fragmented here.

Author, please focus on the mountains and forests first.

What I admire the most is that a lot of the weird logic in the book makes sense in this weird world view. The author is really a genius. Ordinary people can't think of such an absurd and logical world.

. You said in your book and diary that you were stuck writing about mountains and forests. Is this okay?

After the guild war ended, it became more and more boring. The whole day was just about Zhong's crotch and Dong's low self-esteem and sensitive psychological activities, slipping away.

In the novel, characters keep saying that Zhong Mingsheng is disgusting. Where is the disgusting thing? The logic is baffling. Zhong Mingsheng did not bully others at a high level, nor burned, killed or looted. I always fight back after being bullied to the point of being bullied. It makes no sense to always say he is bad. The only thing about messing up the relationship between men and women is that in this context, it doesn't even count. He is not a man who is strong, it is all done voluntarily by others. The novel says that the atmosphere in the novel is that men and women do not matter, while also saying that others find Zhong Mingsheng disgusting. Are the people inside schizophrenic?

What have you been writing recently? Can you add some conflict plots? Is it interesting to describe Zhong Mingsheng playing with women all day long?😥

I saw everyone in the comment section was praising it, thinking how good this book was. After reading 10 chapters, I can honestly say that the writing is not bad. But you really can't see it. I really don't understand why level 3 thieves have nothing but agility 31? What's the point of adding this point?

Your writing is becoming more and more boring. The recent plots are too repetitive and cliche. Bring your talent back to urban writing. Ginji-boy paper-type protagonists are what you are best at.

I like this kind of novel about the author who is not bound by women and goes his own way.