Is It Hard to Chase the School Beauty? It Doesn't Matter, She Still Has Roommates

Did the author put too much effort into the arrangement of the plot? It's obviously a cool title, but it doesn't make me happy when I click on it. Is it just a stomachache? Brother, taking all the female protagonists does not mean that you can assign a "affectionate" character to the male protagonist. The female protagonist makes mistakes and then feels sorry for the male protagonist, and then the male protagonist can attack the next one with peace of mind. The first few female protagonists will lick the male protagonist even more humbly. Especially the comparison between Xu and Yao that you are arranging now. Compared with Yao, I even think that Xu has almost no mistakes. Yao only looks at behavior. Isn't this just arbitrarily manipulating the protagonist's bottom line? Don't tell her what her difficulties are. If she has her difficulties, why not tell her to the male protagonist? It's understandable that Xu's family has issues with her family of origin. Later, she immediately said it was her mother. How could your hero be so resolute in suppressing Xu? Later, when Yao pushed your boundaries, you still didn't break up? Isn't this a breakdown in character? Or is the "affectionate" character coming back? Author, no readers are willing to watch the female protagonist abuse the male protagonist in various ways, and then the male protagonist is emotionally hurt before going to the next one. What's the point of atonement in the end? You should not arrange for the male protagonist to be a scumbag, and then arrange it yourself for the female protagonist to misunderstand. In the end, the female protagonist "wronged" the male protagonist in anger, and the male protagonist borrowed the donkey from the slope to find the next one "Anyway, it was you who wronged me. If you had believed me earlier, I would only love you, but I can't go back now." > This is the only reasonable way for the male protagonist to start a harem. You come up and let the male protagonist be abused. Brother, I don't know if your editor has said something to you. Love stories are about the reader falling in love with the female protagonist, not the male protagonist falling in love with the female protagonist. The reader has to take the role. If you write like this, won't you just let a group of licking dogs take the role? At present, this seems to be salvageable... But the current plot is really bloody. Readers who take the role of the male protagonist do so for pleasure, not for being tortured. Author, I believe you should know whether this book is intellectually friendly or not. To be honest, it doesn't matter. It's okay to be intellectually addictive, but you have to make readers happy while reading it. Articles with strict logic but not intellectually intellectual can allow readers to think carefully and enjoy this kind of happiness, so you can "abuse" it appropriately. Brother, what you wrote is a refreshing article, it is intellectually addictive. Look at how many people said in the first chapter that the brain is stored?

After seeing the main character singing "The Queen" in Chapter 100, there is no need to read anymore...

After reading more than 190 chapters, I felt something was wrong with Yao Yanyan's line, and then I jumped to read the back and the title. Sure enough, when dy pushed it, I just wanted to read a cool article. Damn it, the author knives me. I was already thinking of ways to knife the author. I couldn't stand it. As expected, dy's comment about running as soon as he saw the starting point was absolutely correct.

I was really happy to see Yao Yanyan and the protagonist together sweetly in the early stage. Later, when Yao Yanyan was not right, I saw the real sword. Later, when I went back to the schedule, the protagonist sang a love song to Yao Yanyan, which made me untie my heart. Later, I untied the barrier. Even if it is a harem story, I hope Yao Yanyan can be the main harem and have more scenes. It is indeed a good book and affected my emotions.

It's a pity and a pain. I don't know how to describe my mood after watching it for a whole day. It felt like I was eating a plate of my favorite dishes. The chef came over and asked for some seasonings, and then put a bunch of my own freshly made orellies on top of the delicious dishes. This work reached its peak and climax from the chapter where the protagonist kisses Yanyan, which was revised by the author. I don't know if the author drifted away from the rest of the plot. I wanted to write it down, but the quality dropped significantly chapter by chapter. But when I saw the male protagonist and Yanyan getting together, I thought that the plot would follow the plot of a single female protagonist, and I immediately bought all the subscriptions. But now I really can't stand it anymore. After seeing the series of plots after the breakup and the male protagonist's honey operations, it made me sad. Goodbye, everyone, and Happy New Year.

From all aspects The plot is okay (although it is a bit old-fashioned, but after all, the dog-licking system is understandable. There is a problem with the setting. Since you can rebind the character and don't want to be a dog-licking at the beginning, you can change it. You fucking licked it for three months??? The loving father in the back just calls the roommate and it's so troublesome??? Others are okay, I suggest you don't watch it with your brain, it will really break down if you watch it with your brain. ) Character creation: From the daily life in the female dormitory to the interaction and speech with the male protagonist, the main character creation is quite successful Written writing: It is not difficult to see that the author's writing style is quite good, whether it is the scenery, the character's mood and the description of the scene, it is very good. Although the words used when describing the female character may be a bit repetitive, but compared to other books from beginning to end Words like "beautiful eyes, beautiful eyes" are much better. Personally, I think they are at least at the level of the upper echelons of the Internet literary circle The only drawback is that after doing the task, he licked Xu Ke until he fell in love with it. The protagonist only licked for three months to complete the dog-licking character. Since he went with the mentality of doing the task (maintaining the character and receiving money every day), it is impossible to have true feelings. After licking every day, he What you expect to reward yourself should be the money given by the system. As for Xu Ke's heart, you go there with the mentality of doing a task. You ask for nothing, so... You fucking designed the scene where the male protagonist has true feelings for Xu Ke, it's three little friends Xu Ke, you are really gnashing your teeth next to me, regretting it, just create a sense of satisfaction for the readers

The breaking point was during the summer vacation when I returned from the Imperial Capital to the Magic City and rented a house to live together. The following plot feels like the author has been changed, and the loving father system is not even mentioned. Whenever something happens, the supporting characters and passers-by will have various mental descriptions, but the male and female protagonists will vaguely mention it. There is nothing exciting about it. It even claims to not write a mentally retarded villain. The conflicts and conflicts in the co-writing are all completed by the female protagonist acting as a monster and the male protagonist being mute. The male protagonist holds the system in his hand, constantly creating the feeling that everything is under control. As a result, apart from copying songs, I also bought groceries, cooked and worked as a driver. He could stare at his phone and lose sleep for two days when Yanyan was on a business trip, and he wouldn't even fart after being broken up with. Abandoned!

Dear author, I will record the audio of your book soon. Don't give me a eunuch! ! ! Did you hear that? ? ! ! Available in mid-December! ! ! !

To be honest, as a passerby, I saw someone recommending the author's book on the Internet and took a look. I decided not to miss it and read it. When I saw Chapter 54, I was a little confused as to why it had to be Xu Ke. I felt that everyone else was better than him. Or maybe the author had portrayed Xu Ke's image too badly. It's like everyone owes him this. I really can't stand it. Moreover, the author only describes Xu Ke's mother being hurt by a man's affection. As a mother, she doesn't want her daughter to do the same, so she instills an overly extreme way of thinking into him, which leads to insufficient description for readers. I hate this heroine because I can't watch it anymore. Although some people will continue to read it, it will also lead to the loss of fans and the decline of traffic. I hope the author can change it later. Anyway, I am not optimistic about the current trend, and I think that although Tao Yanyan loves acting, she may also want to be angry. Ke, but it's definitely not that I don't feel it at all, otherwise the author wouldn't have written the word "little deer bumping into each other". I hope the author can see it. It doesn't matter if he scolds me, I can vent my anger. Anyway, if you really say it, I feel better. If you continue reading, it's a bit uncomfortable not to see the ending.

A sadistic article covered in cool articles, brothers, run away

Personal opinion: Haha, it's a bit cool, but there's no logic, and understanding of women is all about labeling. Come on

I hope the author can continue writing

Maybe I haven't read enough. I think the author's articles are still very good 😭😭

Is the author going to adopt the pure love style?

What a scumbag, so awesome, take notes!

It's a romance novel with a cool system, and it also abuses the protagonist. To be honest, most of the people who read this book came here because of the harem label. It turned out to be so innocent, I don't know what to do. The system only has a sense of existence in the first ten or twenty chapters, but the writing in the back actually disappeared, and there is no sense of existence at all. It is purely a romance novel, and it is also the kind of stomachache to torture the protagonist The character design is okay, and the changes in the relationship and psychological journey between Xu and the male protagonist are very well written, but it would be much better to make it a female channel romance. Moreover, when I first obtained the system, I said that I wanted to become better and stronger. As a result, I saw that it was almost 300 chapters before the male protagonist had the idea of ​​starting a business. I laughed to death. No matter what the author's intentions were when he wrote this book, I think it was very successful. The success made me sick. I don't know if there are any book friends who think the same as me. The more I read this book, the more I feel stomachache, the more I read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes, and the more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes. This book should not appear on my bookshelf. Delete it after writing this comment. It's so fucking disgusting Book friends who come here for cool articles should not read it. Seriously, you will feel like your eyes have been polluted after reading it. It's so disgusting.

It's not worth it just to stand up for Xu Ke, with such a sb male protagonist. If it were me, after learning about Xu Ke's life experience and experience, she would still criticize me, and I would only feel sorry for her even more. What the hell is this author writing like a primary school student?

Made a few AI as character covers

I want to know the ending of Xu Ke right now. So if she wrote it badly and said she didn't understand it, she didn't do anything wrong? Shouldn't be treated like this! Isn't it disgusting that the male protagonist pretends to be a loving person, but he doesn't show his sincerity at all, yet he pretends to be a victim? That's why my attitude towards Xu Ke was very bland, and I didn't know why I was pretending to be hurt! I downloaded it specifically because of the comic commentary of this novel, but now it seems so unbearable that Xu Ke stopped reading because it didn't have a happy ending.

It feels weird A school beauty with a personality problem caused by family reasons Purposefully licked her for three months (system task) [Near] System task (scumbag), gave up licking [far] Goed to tease her roommate to stab her To excite her, the school beauty shows her kindness by first ignoring her, and then gives her a little sweetness (holding hands in the theater, photo) [Near] The protagonist gives out photos, pretending to be affectionate and uses the photos as tokens of love, but what the school beauty wants is just a chance to have a normal relationship. The school beauty mother is worried that her daughter will be tricked into dating after college and stay away from the male protagonist. This way she will be more mature and avoid her daughter's studies being delayed due to pregnancy. Moreover, the school beauty male protagonist has basically never gotten along normally (the two have not even communicated well or had dinner together), so the male protagonist peeps into other people's thoughts and accuses the school beauty from the moral high ground in his mind because he doesn't know anything about him and doesn't like him. This is used as a reason to make the school beauty embarrass himself in public. [Far] The protagonist is moved by himself and then plaudits the school beauty (give him favors, blame him for trivial things, keep his friends away from him, give him favors, blame him for trivial things) It goes even further later, his girlfriend puts all the self-esteem, love and self-respect of the school belle under her feet, wearing a dog leash and a sexy maid outfit. The complete pua chain, so scary. At this stage, she is willing to ask the school beauty to kill her biological mother who has raised her for twenty years And this is just to get to know a man for seven or eight months (two and a half mission periods) Three views exploded

I hope the author will directly say that it's okay to lick the dog. The first task is to lick the dog. There are a lot of people in the comment area who don't even know what affection is. You must know that affection is just a fig leaf for many brothers who can't lick it. What is the real affection? It's the kind of young widowed person who only loves one person in his whole life and never marries, and stays with him until he grows old with a photo and a ring. This kind of thing is called deep love. How can the protagonist be so affectionate?

All the female protagonists in the whole book are asking for it, but Xu Ke is the only one who is giving to Qin, and he gives everything. Obviously for the sake of the male protagonist, even the original proud, narcissistic and overbearing character has changed. For the male protagonist, I have improved my cooking skills. For the male protagonist, I have to dress up as a maid and call myself master. For the male protagonist, I have buried all my jealousy. And what did you get in exchange? It's Yao's sentence "Your ex-boyfriend is awesome" and Qin's sentence "If you jump, you'll have to rent a house again😄This author is simply the best🥰 What's her ending in the end? There is no climactic scene like Yao Yanyan's at the award ceremony. Instead, she just relies on Yao's strategy to give herself to the male lead. It's like a bonus! Can the male protagonist be so tolerant of Yao and behave like a child to Xu, but break up just because she doesn't admit their relationship in front of the public? I'm not that fragile, okay? I really want to tell Xu that this world is not worth it! If I had the ability to make people forget their emotions, I would rush over immediately and make her forget all her feelings for Qin! Obviously you have paid the most, but in the end you are like scraps hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

The level of song selection... It's really not good to refer to some of the songs on Bilibili's ten-year gold list to see what the public likes. It's too difficult to call an Internet celebrity song a classic, and Douban doesn't even want to rate it.

Writing a female protagonist who is too hysterical will result in only one female protagonist! Following the logic, other female protagonists will stay away even if they like the male protagonist. The final result is either to abandon the heroine, or to have only one heroine. I really don't understand whether the author wants to write a pleasure story or a sad story. I think most people don't like to read sad stories, and it was so obvious at the beginning that she wanted to use the heroine as a cushion. In the end, because she gave up on the other four more distinctive heroines, the book lost its flavor. It would be too cruel to give up this for the other four, and the protagonist is approaching someone just to complete the task, and he cannot be devoted to the protagonist after chasing him for three months. When most people confess their love to their partner, girls will more or less not know whether they like it or not. This is human nature. You can't say that I licked you for three months and you agreed to try it with me, but you couldn't like it very much, so you made a big mistake, right? I've almost finished reading, is it possible that the author is going to come up with a pua later, and the heroine is willing to share it with others in order to be with the protagonist? Hiss, This is the only way to go. To be honest, the previous reading made me feel very pua, don't you think about the author? It's not easy to write about the twins alone. They are rich and good-looking. Their family can agree that their two daughters marry the same boy, and there are three other girls who are not emperors. It's too difficult, so I can only force it. So I'm really not optimistic about the following content.

The character design of this book is quite a failure... First of all, the male protagonist, he feels like an empty shell without a soul, a pure system jinchuriki (the pretentious song selection is too...) Secondly, Xu Ke, if you want to make her a girl with double defects in family and personality to be redeemed, then she should not be used as the character. The initial villain positioning is to be developed. Even if it is this positioning, you cannot increase the drama of other supporting characters and then forcefully turn around and whitewash it. Because you did not arrange character foreshadowing for readers in the early stage, so every time you write more Xu Ke's scenes, readers will leave more. This is not redeeming Xu Ke, this is forcing readers to eat up. Especially the inexplicable development in the middle of you. The male protagonist suddenly reached an agreement with Xu Ke and was intercepted by her mother. Why? Before you came here, you didn't have any serious love lines at all except for mentioning a bit of emotion. And you mentioned it and you still wrote it with her as the villain. I deeply suspect that you made up the male protagonist and Xu Ke in your mind. The plot is written, but the readers can't see it in their minds, they can only see what you wrote (you can only see the male protagonist licking the dog and licking the sheep out of emotion), which really lowers the grade of the book. This is also the part where the book starts high and goes low. And the other female characters, think about it, after the quarrel was like this, you inexplicably asked them to agree to Xu Ke's request to help chase the male protagonist with just one sentence. I really don't understand it. Especially Yao, who obviously has a good impression, how can he help? I really wonder if the writer was changed after it was released. So in this book, when the character was still unclear, the plot was a bit exciting, the characters complained sharply, and the jokes were appropriate. However, you forced Xu Ke back to write as the female lead, which directly destroyed all the advantages of your book. I don't know if your editor has advised you, but this book is a typical failed product of the interaction between character and story line. It is a pity. It is Tianhu who played a bad hand. I didn't read the back part, I only saw more than ninety chapters, so I'll end it here.

Diaosi Fantasy Diary

Let me first talk about my understanding of the next plot development: Judging from the plot of Xu Ke and Yao Yanyan, there is a high probability that the male protagonist will be abused repeatedly. Tang Yu and the Chu sisters should also slowly enter his heart for the first time and be hurt again, and there may still be a double injury in the fleeting time, but Xu Ke's return shows that they will come back after the injury. Now I have sorted out the following possibilities for the conflicts of each heroine Xu Ke: Her mother instilled wrong ideas in her Yao Yanyan: When her father abandoned her when she became famous, she wanted revenge, but failed and she was ruined. She didn't want to take Qin Luo and take this risk Tang Yu: The oppression at home, although it lasted for a year, did not mean that she would succeed. After gaining some strength, we will obtain the consent of the family. As mentioned before, the Wang family is very powerful. This kind of marriage is not decided casually, so there should be threatening scenes to make Tang Yu break up after being together with him. Being broken up again for other reasons should be that the poisoned party may take action against Qin Luo, but she found out in advance, so she broke up to protect him Chu Liunian: Her multiple personalities are the biggest problem. She said to herself before, "Now is not the time for you to show up. After all, I don't necessarily like you after seeing you once." If you are not "Chu" "Fleeting Years" is probably the question mark in "Chu Fleeting Years/? ?", Maybe Qin Luo will conquer both later, but as I said, Chu Sijin's problem will also extend here, because it turns out that if one of the two sisters has an abnormal diet and the other has a defective character, a large family will not allow the heir to be abnormal, but what if they are both normal? This was also the most dangerous moment for Qin Luo. He had already appeared in the eyes of the Tang family and the Wang family with whom he was married. Now that the Chu family of equal strength is involved, his situation will definitely not be good. But at this time, the help from the front of the system is useful. At the same time, from the return of Xu Ke after Yao Yanyan left, I can see that the author's idea may be that when the new one leaves, the previous one will come back but not get back together, so Yao Yanyan, Tang Yu, and the others may also be back at that time and have strong strength to help Qin Luo solve the problem. After the question is the issue of ownership that we are most concerned about 1. Xu Ke wins alone: Some people will say that I am talking nonsense because she was the first to hurt him, but she is also the first to come back. After that, Qin Luo will definitely experience various blows and she will always accompany him. So just imagine what status Xu Ke will have in Qin Luo's heart at this time? 2. Classic harem: In the end, all the girls came back and explained all the problems. In the end, the five of them had traces in Qin Luo's heart, and all of them had high status and were not afraid of the so-called rumors. The five of them stayed with Qin Luo. (Some people say that this is a cool article. Who doesn't read the cool article first when the joke starts? 🤓🤓) 3. BE finale: None of the five succeeded, but Xu Ke's factor makes it impossible, so only Qin Luo died. Only by dying can he achieve this kind of ending, so if his final ending is this, there is a high probability that he is not far from death 4. The most disgusting ending, the dream ending: all stories are just a dream 5. Switching to cultivating immortality: all book friends must be familiar with this kind of ending Routine 🙂 PS: The reason why I didn't mention the individual endings of others except Xu Ke is because Xu Ke is the first and the author likes to tell the endings in advance. Don't forget that the endings of Xu Ke and Yao Yanyan are told in advance in stories, then He may cater to the fact that everyone else has a crush on him at the beginning (especially what Liu Nian said, if he really has multiple personalities, it would be love at first sight), but they all help Xu Ke pursue him again, so in the end only Xu Ke will be in this situation. But the ending ultimately depends on how the author writes it. The general plot of this book is based on the crematorium of the husband, so maybe this guy will disgust us when the time comes. After all, he said it was a cool article and it turned out to be uncomfortable for us. He profoundly wrote the sentence "The so-called tragedy is when beautiful things are destroyed in front of you to become a tragedy", so this possibility cannot be ruled out. In fact, I wanted to have a harem because each girl's dedication and feelings were genuine, but they were all ruined due to various factors. No matter who I chose at the end, I would have regrets, so the harem is the most satisfactory ending. But now there is the biggest question before the author. Since you have written that Qin Luo has emotional rifts in his heart, how can you make the Chu sisters naturally like him? Tang Yu's rift is not big at this time, but when she leaves, it will make him resist feelings. How should you deal with it? Moreover, the characters will most likely be changed again soon. Xu Ke cannot recognize emotions, so he gave her a "scumbag" to help her understand her own heart. Yao Yanyan gave her a "loving father" to make up for the shadow she had on her father when she was a child. So I am very curious about your next response. I have high expectations for this work, so I am looking forward to your thoughts. {"NickName":"Chunliangbenliang","UserId":398257591}

AI made a few pictures, namely Yao Yanyan, Tang Yu, and Chu Sijin. The AI pictures are still flawed. I will wait until I make money to find an artist to make a few pictures. Or if there is an artist among the readers, you can also contact me. I will open the fan group after it is put on the shelves. After all, I don't have money to open a VIP now and can't build a large group. 😭

Plant a seed...

I haven't read it yet. The name is okay, but the introduction is too strong.