I Really Don't Want to Be a Bitch Anymore

I went to my grandma's house during the Mid-Autumn Festival and found this book because I was bored. After that, I was restrained for 10 days. The biggest selling point of this book is the novel setting of dog-licking money. In the process of Jiang Chen pursuing Li Shurui and Pei Yunxi, Jiang Chen racked his brains to give the women money, and his own wealth gradually accumulated to several billions. But after the strategy targets Lan Peizhi and Ms. Cao, the method of raising money has been fixed as investing in projects of the Great Wall Group. Since Lan Peizhi and Ms. Cao are both shareholders of the group, they can also use licking money to spend money on the group. At this point, the currency system in the book begins to expand. Millions of luxury cars are bought at any time, projects of one or two billion are mentioned in the text, and the expenditures for licking the dog money are often in units of tens or hundreds of billions. Except for the licking dog gold setting, the author created many impressive characters in the early stage, such as Li Shurui and Shi Qianqian. Each of these characters has their own growth path, rather than serving the protagonist. By the time I read Chapter 1000, Shi Qianxi had already become a strong business woman. Looking back at the previous scenes where she and Jiang Chen were acting rogue when they first met, it was hard to imagine that they were the same person. The plot design of the author's novel is reasonable and the inner description of the characters is true. In the process of pursuing Li Shurui, Li Shurui's favorability towards Jiang Chen went from minus 80 to the success of the strategy, and many unforgettable stories happened in the process. What impressed me the most was the scene where Li Shurui slipped and fell off a cliff, and Jiang Chen risked his life to save others. At that time, Jiang Chen was still very poor, but with a sincere heart, he suddenly turned Li Shurui's favorability towards him from negative to positive. The plot is real and reasonable, and the favorability is increased steadily. Instead of spending a lot of money, it echoes the title and wins the beauty back by being a dog licker. This is why I think the first volume (Strategy of Li Shurui) is successful. But at the stage of conquering Lan Peizhi, the main theme of the novel no longer revolves around the word "dog licking". In fact, it can no longer be written like this. After all, Jiang Chen is a big boss, so what kind of woman does he want? When it comes to conquering Miss Cao, the main theme of the book has almost completely revolved around the expansion of the male protagonist's business territory. Although there are still a lot of descriptions of Jiang Chen's interaction and flirting with the opposite sex around him, it is difficult to feel as immersive as when he was pursuing Li Shurui before. After all, the opposite sex around Jiang Chen at this time are all worth hundreds of billions and stunningly beautiful, which is seriously separated from real life. In a nutshell. All in all, I have mixed feelings about this book so far. First of all, I admire it. As mentioned above, this book is indeed well written in many places. Just looking at the first three hundred chapters, it is undoubtedly an excellent romance novel. The second is regret. By the 1,000th chapter of the book, there is basically no convincing plot to increase the favorability. After all, the strengthening of a relationship requires the fuel of adversity. How can one fall in love with someone sincerely without experiencing challenges together? But in Mr. Jiang's eyes, is there such a thing as adversity? By the 1000th chapter, the male protagonist is already extremely powerful. No matter which country he goes to, everything goes smoothly. (Ps: Many readers have been scolding the book in the first two hundred chapters, saying that this is not a fun story, and that the male protagonist will not spend money. These book lovers should really read it patiently, because it will be so exciting later on.) What followed was the neglect of the setting of the dog-licking gold, and the male protagonist at this time has already focused on his own business territory. Even the male protagonist in the book clearly states that he hopes his favorability will increase slowly so that it does not affect his ability to use money to engage in business wars. You know, what most readers (well, at least I think so) want to see is a plot in which the male protagonist is forced to rack his brains to think of ways to improve and capture the target's relationship, driven by the licking gold system, and struggles in emotional whirlpools (this is what the author is good at writing). Instead of business wars, agent wars, revitalizing China, saving the world... The above are just my subjective opinions. Maybe the author never thought of "dog licking" as the theme of the novel from the beginning, otherwise it would be impossible for Jiang Chen's career to rise steadily. After all, the boss Jiang in Chapter 1000 has nothing to do with dog licking. It can be seen that the author wants to give this book a deeper core, rather than write a superficial and mindless article. But is the core of the story that the poor male protagonist accidentally obtains the system and uses the system to revitalize China too noble? Is this theme too heavy? Perhaps, there is no need for Jiang Chen to shoulder the entire burden on himself. He is not Miss Cao, the prince brother, or Uncle Sui. He is just an ordinary person. Best wishes, Jiang Chen Best wishes, the great pagoda

This novel is different from traditional divine novels. It has a bit of a traditional romance novel flavor, as well as a certain writing style and story core. But looking at it now, there are several shortcomings: 1. The lack of shaping of the heroine The problem lies in the character of Ai Qian, that is, her pitifulness exceeds the main heroine. It feels weird, right? Why are you talking about whether Ai Qian can be considered one of the heroines? Shouldn't the real comparison be between the other heroines and the main heroine? This is the problem. The other heroines almost overwhelmingly crush the main heroine. What does that mean? The main reason is that the heroine stopped growing after two or three hundred chapters. To put it bluntly, she died. As the chapter goes on, the other heroines become more and more valuable. Even Miss Lan, who failed to portray the most, overshadows the main heroine. This leads to a question, that is, the protagonist, who is the reader of the book, why should we like her? This detail is reflected in why should we have sex with her? Why can she be so different from other main heroines? When reading online articles, even if there are some romantic elements in the core, it is still inevitable to substitute "we". Why do you like her? In the end, all the reasons can only be attributed to her being the first to be conquered. But what happened to the first one? Are the protagonist and Ai Qian the first to fall in love without a golden finger? This is part of the reason for the popularity of Ai Qian's character, because she hates female protagonists. In the shaping of subsequent chapters, readers will be able to detect her personality charm. This is in contrast to the main heroine who will become more and more boring in the future and occupy a large number of chapters. This is the origin of the sentence: Ai Qian just met a protagonist with no money. The core reason is still the lack of shaping of the main heroine. When it comes to this problem, it actually comes up. As long as she had a little bit of Miss Lan's role in the plot, the problem wouldn't be so big. In fact, the author is also aware of this situation, so he arranged Ai Qian's story in more than 600 chapters. Although this character is written from the perspective of a tool man, even if he is a tool man, he still needs the reader's permission. She is a betrayer, and she has such huge difficulties that readers in online articles do not bother to pay attention to her. Even if she betrayed the protagonist to save the world and was a saint, readers of the online novel would not have any reason to invest in her. This is an irrational state and is human nature. That's it, the problem is that Ai Qian's cleanliness problem needs to be solved first. After all, even if a married young woman is written in an online article, she needs to remain chaste. I wish all the women who had a relationship with the protagonist would die alone. Even someone who had a crush on the male protagonist in elementary school would find it unacceptable to find a new partner. This is why there are more daughters as characters in novels than sons, and why something happening to a daughter can cause emotional fluctuations in readers. Human nature dictates. Ai Qian is portrayed as a villain at the beginning, which is more of a facial expression. Later, the writing is non-facial. But when it comes to illness, she still needs something to gain forgiveness from readers. After all, even if the protagonist goes to play with someone else's wife, if you ask the readers about this immoral incident, they will all criticize it, but if it is written, we will still go back and read it. You still need to pick out the protagonist first and cover his cute buns. What he did was completely a misunderstanding, and it was a misunderstanding by others. After he cleaned himself up and refused the three consecutive times, there was nothing he could do in the end. Then there is the description of how her husband is not a human being, how pitiful this wife is and is often subjected to domestic violence, etc. After creating the protagonist who must save her, he also created the image of the protagonist as a gentleman, instead of trampling on ethics and morals because of human nature. After all the conditions are met, she can then shape her "loyalty", such as sharing a bed with her husband for many years, or even more outrageous, her husband likes men so she is still clean, etc. Only after all this does the reader give permission, and then the wife becomes the protagonist's lover, or someone around her. Having said that, in the illness incident, Ai Qian was quite pitiful. At least we, the readers, would not say: Why did you save her? But why does the protagonist want to save? Are you unwilling? No regrets? This is a human life. These reasons are too weak to convince readers. In terms of the final result, it is neither a web novel nor a romance, nor a tool. The first thing that is annoying about online articles is that they do not satisfy the human nature of revenge. An ex-girlfriend is sick, and her ex-boyfriend, who was abandoned because he had no money, saves her. What a suitable and refreshing plot? But just skipped it. So the author doesn't want to write these things and doesn't want to continue hurting her. So what about romance? The two people who were once in love fell out because of money. Now she is sick and he saves her. The girl's regret and the protagonist's relief, etc. There is so much to write about, but I just stopped here. So is this article written purely as a tool? First of all, due to insufficient permission, when the matter is stretched into a length, the readers' irrationality will come to the fore. The second is the transformation of the main female protagonist created by this incident, because the shaping from the beginning was insufficient, which led to the fact that she should never get her permission. Or is it the result of insufficient portrayal of the heroine? Why should I ask you? Is the main female protagonist infecting people for the male protagonist's consent? Touching. Is it cute? Cute. Especially when your loved ones are together, do you feel a heavy burden? Serious. But the most fundamental question is still unanswered, that is, why readers like her. If this matter was not Ai Qian but someone else, maybe readers would like her, but it is Ai Qian who crushes the main heroine in terms of sense of substitution. Especially the comparison between the character Ai Qian and the main heroine, and the comparison between her first love and her current girlfriend. The only difference between the two is that the former did not have a golden finger when they were together, while the latter had a golden finger. This is a flaw in the character creation of this novel. In fact, there are many more various plots in the back. For example, after more than a thousand chapters, there are very few Shura fields, the plot is based on real life but the writing is very boring, etc. The space is limited and I will talk about it when I have a chance.

As I read along, I won't mention some of the poisonous points. After more than 500 chapters, I really couldn't keep going. I can only say that it is a romance novel. There are a few female characters that are well portrayed, but the male protagonist is really difficult to describe. In the early stage, I kept convincing myself that the author may want to portray a growth process. But in fact, most of the time, the protagonist seems to be brainless and has no idea what he should do. After reading more than 500 chapters, he still feels like a little loser. I don't know if the author doesn't have an outline, or maybe he just writes whatever comes to mind and mixes everything into it. There are too many mechanical things. You can have a lot of things you want to write, but why do you have to add them all into one book? It's like watching Fenghuo's works many years ago. From my current point of view, I can't say it's not possible at all. I can only say that when I was eighteen years old, I may have thought it was very good. After ten years of experience, I really can't stand it. Let me talk about the specific things. The first female protagonist wrote about the protagonist's initial purpose. It was just to get money from her, but in the end, she got stuck. But in fact, I never thought about getting money or using the system. I just wrote as much as the plot required. There were too many bugs and too many forced intelligence. I bought a house quietly with someone's ID card. So why can't you buy 10 houses and 100 houses? At first, my father had a heart attack and it took him almost a month to die. You gave him a few million symbolically and then expressed your inability to do anything. Then in less than half a year, you showed others that you had at least hundreds of billions. Wouldn't people doubt you? Is it forcibly reducing intelligence? The same goes for buying stocks in the name of the second heroine. How many billions did you spend out of 10 trillion? Obviously you can cash out ten times, a hundred times or even a thousand times, but you just don't do it, just keep your head down and the system prompts you which heroine it is, and just lick it like a little brat. From this perspective, I want to criticize the author. But from another perspective, I don't think about this system directly, treat it as if it doesn't exist, and filter out some more sb-like plots (like the third heroine) The existence of the Lord, forcibly involved in gangs, bro, what age are we in, and a woman who kills without batting an eyelid will be the king of Shanghai. I really don't know how to complain. I almost thought the author was going to turn to fantasy.) The last thing I want to say is that if you read this article simply as a romance article, and filter out a lot of noob plots, there are still a lot of merits

This book is very well-written, with well-connected plots and well-drawn characters. I've done it three times. Different from other people's opinions, I think the early stage of writing is the best. When I was chasing Li Shurui, I didn't throw money around like other novice novels. Although the plot was clichéd, it was reasonable, and the emotional rise was in line with the facts. Although Shi Qianqian forced to write about Stockholm at the beginning is a bit nonsense, her character is the best portrayed, better than Li Du, and I personally feel that she can be regarded as the first heroine. But later on, the emotional lines and character portrayal became just so-so. Pei Yunxi's writing is quite embarrassing, and Lan's writing is completely unreasonable. How can a beautiful woman from a rural area become a famous and prestigious figure like Xue Guanyin at such a young age by virtue of being an old Taoist priest? Fang Nafa's use of lowercase letters also conflicts greatly with the character design. In the later period, he tended to talk about economics and politics. The author has lost his original intention. In this article, you can either write about emotions honestly and write more emotional lines in the Shura field, such as the meeting between Shi Qianqian and other female protagonists. Or you can simply write it as an economic article, and write about the business and political struggles in a wonderful and realistic way. Although it is not impossible to write the two together, the readers they prefer are different. If they are mixed together and the writing is not good, both sides will criticize them.

I don't know why the author would write a novel with so many subjective comments on social issues, including new energy vehicles, food safety, etc. It's unprofessional, one-sided, and has low awareness.

I see that many of the comments are from apprentices, so I won't say what their nature is, but just talk about my personal feelings. The front part is pretty good, and the back part is okay too. I don't think the bad things those apprentices say are bad, but I just can't stand it anymore, maybe because of the update. There is also water. This is inevitable. If you follow the update, you will feel water. There is nothing to say. I don't like the character description a bit (mainly referring to the later changes in Pig's Knuckle), and the system forces me to select people I don't like. That's it, I wish you a bright future and see you in the world!

When I saw the creation of a credit company, I have to say that the trajectory of this book made me even more confused. In the chapter 🇰🇷, the male protagonist killed a group of anti-gangster government personnel for the sake of antique women. I won't say whether the male protagonist's decision was wrong. I just want to ask, does the loss of these lives really have nothing to do with your male protagonist? When the relatives questioned the prosecutor, it seemed that all the mistakes were the prosecutor's fault, but wasn't the real murderer you, the male protagonist? A group of evil forces should have been brought to justice. Is it possible that you should continue to get away with it? .... It's a pity that she is the protagonist, isn't it? So what if your hero starts a loan with low interest rates? So what if I spend a lot of money to make a beautiful woman smile? In the final analysis, your hero has changed from a law-abiding young man to a criminal who deserves to be shot. Another question extends from this. The male protagonist went to conquer Li Shurui and Pei Yunxi just for money and body. No matter how fancy he said afterwards, his original intention was just for money. In my opinion, Xia Qing's feelings are the purest and most beautiful. Ai Qian has flaws, so let's talk about Miss Shi. She is arbitrary and arbitrary. Not to mention Miss Shi is stupid, I can only say that she is too stupid to be a male protagonist... I still hope that I can stop after conquering the antique girl. I am too petty and too caring. The money in this article is just money after all. For the sake of money, you will wantonly trample on the law, morality and even emotions... If nothing else, are you worthy of Li Shurui, the male protagonist? 😱😱😱

At first I thought it was an urban pretentious novel, but I didn't expect that the rest of it would not be an old-fashioned pretentious novel. I was moved by the plot until the end.

I just finished my monthly pass and have read 535 chapters. Personally, I feel that what attracted me in the early stage was the gold-licking setting, solid romance novel writing, and realistic storyline. The author's character portrayal is very successful, and every supporting character in the book is more three-dimensional. Some plots in the book that have nothing to do with the main plot and are foreshadowing (such as the section about returning home for the New Year) are also very attractive to readers. The occasional philosophical dialogues in the book are even more thought-provoking. However,,, after more than 500 chapters, perhaps the improvement in the circle of protagonists caused the author's writing power to begin to fail, or perhaps Lan Peizhi's character portrayal (young and beautiful, strong in martial arts, a fairy master, worth hundreds of billions) was too unrealistic. The development of the story begins to no longer be realistic, and the monetary system begins to expand. For readers with some experience, they may need more tolerance to continue reading. Starting from the plot where the protagonist and Lan Pei return to their hometown, I have been reading for thirty consecutive chapters with the tolerant mentality of "barely making sense". Here are two poisonous points: 1. How could a ruthless strong woman like Lan lead a young man whom she had only met a few times? After returning home and a series of stories that happened in her hometown, Lan's attitude of turning a blind eye to the male protagonist's courtship was too smart; 2. Lan introduced the protagonist to the old Taoist priest and completely exposed his life experience to a casual acquaintance. For a veteran like Lan who is decisive in killing and cautious in his words and deeds, this writing is not appropriate. Moreover, the part where the old Taoist priest looks at fortunes is too unrealistic. From then on, the novel begins to involve "fantasy" elements, which conflicts with the realistic style of the previous article. In short, the overall shortcomings of this novel are not hidden. Regarding the subsequent plot development, I looked at the table of contents and it seems that it is indeed heading in the direction of cultivating immortality. If this is the case, I hope the author can write the story well. It doesn't matter whether he is a cultivator or not, but the plot should not be too poisonous. Except for the imaginary part about cultivating immortality, if the basic storyline is seriously inconsistent with real life, it will be difficult to be motivated to read it. I will put this novel away for a while to sort out my mentality, and then read it again in a few days. If I still can't get into it, I will have to give up. However, I really admire the author's writing style. I will read other works if I have the opportunity.

Originally it was free, so I decided to order it all because of Cultural Victory. The five thousand years of Chinese culture cannot be compared to the barbarians. Congratulations to me, China. Come on, the author is great

The characters are well drawn, not the kind of mindless NC novel with hundreds of chapters full of women throwing money at them. Please support me.

Feels like Nongfu Spring wholesaler😎

The author will not abandon the first heroine, right? I remember your secret plan of leaving the heroine and her to go to her hometown. Will there be a 100% favorability score, and then a routine of super doubling the reward for the licking gold 😰 Do you think this idea of ​​mine is powerful?

As for the one on the 18th, it's okay to stabilize two chapters a day without requiring more updates. After saving for several days and ten minutes, I solved it.

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I thought, there are a lot of female researchers and scientists. Find someone who studies nuclear fusion or military industry and make money from it. Why do I donate tens of billions to a woman's research project just to please her? I asked whether it's romantic or not. I have money and am willful.

Although some people criticized it before, the author's writing style is good, and he really wrote it with his heart. And it's not just about spending money to create feelings, but he has gone through a lot of things. But after the first heroine was tortured, yes, it was torture. The heroine ran away twice while lying on his bed, which was poisonous. Basically, this book can definitely be a eunuch novel. No one likes eunuch novels nowadays, and it is also unrealistic. There will be no such people in reality. The heroine likes the protagonist very much, but the protagonist still doesn't like the heroine. This is where the problem arises. The main character doesn't sleep because he doesn't want to be a scumbag. But if you deceived someone's feelings and found a second heroine, wouldn't you be a scumbag? I can't understand eunuch stories anyway. Anyway, you can read this book in the early stages. It's old and poison-resistant, but after I was sure it was a eunuch story, I really couldn't bear it.

Chased twice. Every time I read dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was so frustrating. I spent money on the anchor anonymously, and was humiliated by my love rival and classmates A, B, C, and D. The protagonist didn't care at all. You should write about cuckolds cultivating immortality, not about heroes.

How to describe this book Just like playing DNF and finally revealing the graduation epic, please give me a link. The link is broken. It's very interesting. I know you wrote the book at the starting point, but I thought you were filming a harem anime in Japan. No wonder there are few comments in the book. Do current authors like to force readers to abandon their books?

The reason why this book is not popular is because the system was not explained clearly in the first few chapters. Only after seeing it later did I understand: 1. There can only be one strategy object, and it is replaced one by one. Only when the previous one is completed, the next one will be opened 2. It does not mean that the strategy is successful when it is knocked down, but the favorability. And favorability in this system = true love. Maybe many couples who are passionately in love cannot reach 90 favorability points. 3. There is a limit to the favorability bonus brought by wealth. If the protagonist's massive wealth is basically discovered by the target of the strategy, but the favorability is still not up to standard, there may be an embarrassing situation where the system becomes stuck after living together for a lifetime and being unable to complete the strategy. So, in this system's strategy, mindlessly throwing money away is a very risky type of gambling and is not advisable. On the contrary, the safest way is to first use daily strategies to increase your favorability, and to complete the strategies with a layer of mystery and unique charm without even exposing your wealth. The author didn't make it clear before, so he persuaded a large number of people to quit. I was almost persuaded to quit at that time. In fact, the book shortage has returned, so I suggest revising the first few pictures.

I couldn't help but feel unhappy after watching most of it. The author was trying to seem drunk even if he didn't have a harem. The ambiguous plot has been laid out well enough. The two of them are already an obvious couple. It's the first time that a girl sleeps with you in her underwear, and you lie on top of him and you don't even get to do it in the end. You also find various excuses to show that you respect others. The second time in the bathroom, the girl was obviously trying to seduce you while she was wet, so much so that her hood broke off and she ran away again, worried about offending someone. If the other party is in a normal relationship and just wants to seduce you, but you are actually a couple, it is most reasonable to have sex at this time. Are all the excuses you are looking for just to show that you are not a harem novel? Then you should not write such extreme scenes, just write a little ambiguous. If you don't do it under those circumstances, there is only one explanation in reality, and that is that men can't do it. It makes me angry to see

This book... I can only say it is extremely poisonous.

Mother's Day is here. Isn't it too much to buy some funds, buy a few buildings, and give hundreds of millions of red envelopes to your mother? Buying dozens of cars for your mother is not too much, right? Why do you have to spend it on others?

He's as good as the school beauty's personal eunuch.

I don't know what the plot is about. The protagonist is like a supporting character. He can't spend money and his abilities are not good. He throws a hammer here and there. After reading 400 chapters, he spent money on rewards, buying a house, buying a necklace, auctioning, and investing in a movie. The system is just a decoration. If it doesn't work, why don't you upgrade the system? ?

Before it was released, there were a lot of bad points and criticisms, but considering that most people in the comment area said it was good, I endured and continued to read it. As a result, it was completely finished in less than eighty chapters. The first heroine went to a meeting alone and the young man got drunk and then helped him to get a room. The author also wants to add that the young man didn't touch him for the sake of his grace. Isn't this nonsense? Are you doing this kind of cuckoldry in an urban harem?

This is my first review, and I feel sorry for the performance of this book. But I can only blame the author for committing suicide. He deserves it. He played a good hand with hope. First of all, the author's writing is very good and the story has a great layout. However, the book is very messy and there are no links between the front and back. So after reading it, I feel like I want to abandon the book. Generally speaking, the beginning is not good at the beginning, but it is OK at the later stage. Secondly, I strongly doubt that the author is a eunuch, Qianqianjun. Zi Ye is too modest, and observing etiquette is not the law. The heroine Shi Xixi has come to you countless times, and she is still pretending to be pure. Since it is clear that there are multiple heroines in the story, please do not let the protagonist become a eunuch. This is not in line with human nature. In the story with multiple heroines, you are still here to guard the integrity in Chapter 800. Thirdly, the growth of the protagonist's power requires the addition of reasonable supporting characters to protect him. Can he not afford bodyguards? Fourth, it's not that exciting. When you're pretending to be cool and slapped in the face, you let the protagonist watch the show. The story is too delayed and the rhythm is too confusing. The author has too many problems. He has master-level writing, detailed descriptions, and emotional descriptions, but there are too many bad points, and the beginning is very poor. It is not worthy of the later writing style, and the character of the protagonist is too perfect, like a saint, and cannot resonate with readers. The reason why I have followed it for so long is that the descriptions of the female protagonists are too good, but I have to say that the overall pacing, the character of the male protagonist, and the beginning are very poor.

Not happy without vomiting

I couldn't help but want to complain. I've read a lot of plots, but luckily I stopped in time to read the comments section after finishing half of it. The first is the system characterization. Not much was written in the early stage, resulting in incomplete usage conditions. There are a lot of bugs later, and some pitfalls cannot be buried. However, it is written later that the strategy object is bound by the system and is not allowed to be changed before completing the strategy. The money spent is determined by the intention of the strategy object and can only be used if you are willing. Then there is the portrayal of the male protagonist. I really like the early character image. First of all, the male protagonist has already hinted at the use of the money. It is not something that the male protagonist can use casually if he wants, so he will only come forward at specific plot and key points. Echoing his own personality, he is very calm, tough, and tolerant. He is not like a fool who just spends his money and becomes invincible. But the problem is quite big. The problem is mainly about infatuation, childhood sweetheart, and first love. Everyone has to portray it. These secondary characters can only be used to advance the plot. They don't need to be used too much to portray the emotional line with the male protagonist. The same goes for the male protagonist. He always stands up for it, which is difficult to understand. And in the middle of the plot of Lan Peizhi, it was simply that I didn't know anything about it. I was inexplicably paired with a mercenary. I was able to fight with n without any trouble. I remember correctly that I mentioned the mercenary before. The physical exercise was only one egg. The plot was seriously out of touch with the facts. It was quite random Finally, in terms of the portrayal of the heroine, the two heroines Li and Shi in the early stage were well portrayed, with twists and turns and fascinating. Li's portrayal Paintings are not just about throwing money at them, but about using your purest love to impress them, using money to help them, and attracting each other, which makes me excited to watch. The portrayal of Shi is also very good, and the contrast is very strong, but the problem is that it is too slow. The pace of the strategy is quite slow, but the plot is a bit slow, and your relationship has reached that level and you can't bear to start, even if you forget it once, it will be like this every time. Another major question is whether the plot and plot of sacrificing one's life to protect the heroine is a bit deliberate. When fighting Li, there was a bang during the game. When conquering Pei, there was a life-and-death fight with Mr. Ye. When conquering Lan, it was quite outrageous. Another problem is that the interconnection between the links is a bit too deliberate. One layer knows the higher layer, and the relationship between one layer and the upper layer is like a little king. On the line of Lanpei, it is even more inexplicable. Can one fight n and still be outstanding? Beauty and strength are opposite words. To be as strong as a dozen n, you must have a body full of tendons. How can a girl with a body full of tendons be comparable to Pei. And the portrayal of Lan is almost zero. Her inner activities, expressions, and actions are quite casual. I didn't even bother to read the rest. Just watching the first part of the plot, my rating is 10 points. After watching half of it, my rating is 5 points. The writing is quite good, but there is a lot of room for improvement.

I was convinced, and saw that 2e bought a house for Li, and then was made things difficult for him... I guess the author doesn't know the concept of paying 200 million in cash... But one thing can be proved, the author is an ordinary person like us, writing hundreds of millions is the same as a few dollars, there is a kind of beauty of sitting on a nuclear bomb and being threatened by a gangster with a toy gun