Immortality Begins with Conquering Fairies
长生从攻略仙子开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 572k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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🍟A Happy Bookstore of Comics and Food! 🍟
If there are any books on male channels that I miss or want to read, I think the only ones left are the two-dimensional channel and the food channel. The two-dimensional channel is the most energetic channel. There is a full body of cuteness and a strong youthful atmosphere. Food Channel, as a girl who often sweats in her dreams, she cannot let it go!
The World of Kanazun Sake Tasting!
The most rare thing in this life is to have a book on hand to read. I have been beating myself up, not to slack off on any book, which makes me read more seriously and slowly. Cooking wine to talk about heroes, cooking wine to explore the journey to the west, cooking wine to taste life, the only book that can cover it all. Below I recommend a few good articles worth reading. I hope you all will like them too.
Relaxed, Pleasant
Recommend some books suitable for reading after dinner. Cheerful books must be suitable for reading after work. Brings a good mood!
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In fact, I think the pace is too fast. When I read fairy romance novels, I must still read them for love. Otherwise, why not read traditional fairy romance novels? However, I feel that most of the first 100,000 words are devoted to promoting the plot and supplementing the setting. The interaction with the heroine and the description of emotions are not enough. Moreover, the recent plot has a sense of stiffness, and some conflicts are not very necessary. Of course I still like this book very much, and I hope the author will write better and better.
I just read the beginning... The writing is indeed worthy of this score In the first chapter, the protagonist's parents sacrificed for the sect, but the protagonist is treated like this? Moreover, the protagonist also plays games all day long. When he is free, he does not practice or practice alchemy, but just plays games. After completing one game, he still has to play two games. He deserves to be squeezed. Then there are the plug-ins, which are too complicated. The second game is a favorability system, and the first game seems to be real. There is also a bond system, and it is all foreshadowing. The readers are confused. If there is so much that I can't understand at the beginning, then I will definitely abandon the book. ，（），，，，，， For another woman, the protagonist suddenly asked her to practice sword practice. As a result, she was forced to practice sword practice while she was dreaming. If she didn't practice, she would be killed and resurrected. The plot is a bit difficult to describe...😥
If you think the writing is okay, please be sure to read to the end!
The collection is very small, the data is very poor, and there is almost no follow-up reading... But the author really wants to continue writing and finish telling the story. Please, dear readers, give the author a chance and click to read it! Thank you everyone
It's really good up front, but I can't act awkwardly in the ring. It's too awkward and makes me feel uncomfortable.
Although what I wrote above is okay and quite arresting, why did you write that fighting scene? I can't fucking understand it. Your writing is very poor. In a place where there is no life or death if you lose in a ring fight, you have to write about the feeling of life and death. Please tell me why your writing routine is definitely not the way it is now? Just write about your daily work and the sweetness of the heroine's love relationship, and you can easily get a contract. Occasionally, I will write about a few Shura fields. Well, then I will write about the difficulties encountered by some villagers when they were experiencing it, and they had no choice but to fight. Then, wouldn't it be enough to write a few paragraphs about your own breakthroughs?
The author could change the beginning. It's too confusing. I don't think many people will be able to read the first chapter.
After watching the sweet relationship between the protagonist and Luo Yubing, I thought this was a harem novel. As a pure lover, I felt a little uncomfortable.
The first few pictures feel like the author must have read the artist's manual and then made certain changes, but it's okay. They just look a bit similar, but in fact they don't have much to do with each other.
I've watched more than half of it, and there's no over-the-top plot. . Finally give up! No matter how much you talk, it's better to do well!
After reading a few chapters, I found them new and interesting. Good luck, author!
The theme is well written, and the multiple plot lines develop together.
It feels okay, it's a bit more cheerful, and there are a lot of interesting jokes.
Brother, you are a bit different from others of the same type.
When I read it, I felt like it was too fragmented.
Isn't the exposure of the waistcoat a bit too casual... The large and small sizes share the waistcoat, for fear that the owner will not be able to find it
Author, if the results of this book are still not very good later, and then you can't write it anymore, just cut it off decisively. Anyway, the first time you write it, it is just a practice.