Immortality in the Fantasy World of Mortals Cultivating Immortality

If you can do whatever you want in the fantasy world, why do you want to find a woman in the real world? Let's talk about it as a pretty boy looking for a rich woman.

I've only written a few chapters and now I'm here to confirm my relationship? Are you so horny? The fairy has not cultivated any women, but Xin Ruyin is the one... You saved me. Qi Yunxiao and Xin Ruyin are a good couple. The original novel was miserable enough, but now you have to worry about it when you write a fanfic... Han Laomo is even worse. He stole the love of his wife's old sweetheart in nine of the ten mortal fanfics.

I don't know how to evaluate it. The characteristic of this novel is that it is mediocre. Compared with other mortal novels, it has no special features, nothing surprising, and nothing objectionable. The biggest characteristic of the original work "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" is that it is selfish, selfish and does not give wisdom to everyone. If Han Li had to choose between his path of cultivating immortality and his wife, he would choose to give up his wife without hesitation. There are also people in the legend of mortal cultivation of immortality. Each person is smarter than the other. Han Li's success in it is entirely because of his little green bottle and his righteousness. Without these, he would not even be able to pass the test of Mr. Mo. And now many mortal fans who follow the trend simply do not have the essence of the original work. Give it a random hook (such as the system, a small bottle with the same time-accelerating function as the small green bottle, etc.) And then pretend to be B like crazy, treating the people inside as fools, and do whatever you want. Or just grab the little green bottle and replace the two characters "Han Li" in the original work with so-and-so, and copy everything else. I personally think it's best to write about a female protagonist, not just because you are a time traveler, so you just think you are great, and just use modern methods to win over other women's hearts. Understand the situation. Your modern behavior may be seen as hooliganism or a conspiracy in the eyes of others. It's just that the author insisted on writing a heroine and didn't have any brains, so he agreed directly. It's best if the two have a direct interest relationship and they don't have any feelings for each other in the early stage, but they come together after going through some things together in the later stage. This is more real.

Find a spiritual stone mine, and then retreat to the fantasy world for ten thousand years.

Okay, write it carefully, no need for eunuchs

Chapter 5: Let's not talk about the bad things in the fantasy world. Even the most rubbish foundation building can kill the Qi training period instantly without a single look. It can't even be moved during the light pressure and spiritual consciousness training period. Cultivation means ascending the dimension. The levels of life are all different. You also have to lock the target to fight monsters beyond the level. The strength of the spiritual consciousness during the Qi training period and the distance to capture the movement speed during the foundation building period during battle are both issues.

I guess I'll give up writing it halfway, and I won't even get to 100 chapters before I start to stop updating it. I estimate that I will write up to 700,000 to 800,000 words, and then I'll end it.

I can briefly describe the fantasy world, but after all, it is more interesting outside the fantasy world. Focus on writing outside the fantasy world (the reality in the book)

Do you think it's better to use Mo Jiao to exchange for resources, or keep it as a spiritual beast?

This skill is equivalent to cultivating immortality with immortal respect and birth-flow techniques. So don't slow down the protagonist's cultivation speed. If pressed, it is extremely poisonous.

Isn't this just another way of saying the simulator? In reality, we don't dare to force Han Li, and the simulator won't grab 🙂, which is a bit of a loophole.

The heroine could be Senior Sister Chen, or Nie Ying who rescued Brother Lei Linggen from Senior Brother Lu in Huang Maple Valley. This Nie Ying is actually more suitable to be a Taoist companion than Senior Sister Chen. Senior Sister Chen also has the stain of Senior Brother Lu, and her qualifications are as good as the Foundation Stage. Not only is Nie Ying's beauty and personality no worse than Nangong Wan, her qualifications are also good. In the original work, she can form elixirs, and Zi Ling is also good.

The golden finger of the protagonist feels so awesome, but it has no sense of existence. If you use it, you can have unlimited free prostitution. Can't you have unlimited free prostitution in forbidden areas, various markets, auction houses, or various sect techniques?

Chapter 45: The passage about being too old to break through the Foundation Establishment Stage is too harsh. In the original work, as long as you are still alive, you can break through the Foundation Establishment Stage. For immortal cultivators, it doesn't matter what age they are, their blood, body, and spirit, because they can take away their body and change to a younger body.

I want to change Wang Chan into a person with double spiritual roots, a special physique, and a Xuanyin body. Do you think it's okay? The light and dark spiritual roots are purely lies and random writing. In the original work, Wang Chan only has the dark spiritual roots, while no one has the light spiritual roots at all. This doesn't go with the style of cultivating immortals. I plan to let the protagonist have all the spiritual roots later. I want to simply let these two spiritual roots disappear. What do you think?

Regarding whether to accept Nangong Wan Because I will be a full-time author soon and I have to cater to readers' preferences. So Nangong Wan may be included in this book later, and I will ask again in the paid chapter after it is released. Next time in the Bloody Forbidden Land, Han Li will not have a relationship with Nangong Wan. How these two develop in the future depends on your votes.