Tokyo: Picking up the Big Sister Next Door at the Beginning

There may be some things that don't satisfy everyone, but I just want to write a book seriously, and life is not easy Please everyone.

Although many readers have talked about it, I still want to leave a book review, just as a light to the majority of readers who are hesitant to read it, so they can avoid walking at night... First of all, the author's writing style is really special. It is not a typical problem such as poor plot or character creation, or even "Ah, you can tell at a glance that it is a book written by a college student with insufficient experience, and that this is a book written by an adult, it is too real." Such preconceptions that can quickly determine likes and dislikes. If the author lived in ancient times, the general impression would be that "when everyone is using classical Chinese, he is using vernacular Chinese" and "everyone wears uniforms and leather clothes, but he wears sportswear and leather shoes to go to school every day." There is a feeling that is completely different from the current trend. Although it is not illegal, it is very unconventional in the eyes of ordinary people. So some people may wonder if it is an AI ghostwriter, and some people may feel that the book feels broken when reading it. In short, there are only three words, and something is wrong. When this happens, it is not difficult to solve it. You can change it to the first person, so that readers can increase their sense of involvement and resonate; you can also make the author more friendly to the people and write more plainly in a way that ordinary people can read and feel comfortable; of course, you can continue the current writing style and take this more special path. I like the character very much. I would give it 91 points out of 100. The plot is okay, all kinds of small events are put together. If I insist on the main plot, it is to get all the female characters' favorability points to unlock the author's next book🤣 Evaluation: It can be stored on the bookshelf. When you don't want to read ordinary online novels, this book can make your brain soak into... A bit of icy magma (?

I hope this book can match your pen name😌😌😌

I think it is normal to write from a boy's perspective, without deliberately suppressing emotions, without deliberately beating around the bush, it happens naturally. This book focuses on the seven emotions and six desires of the male protagonist. A person normally encounters a beautiful senior sister to get along with, difficulties, grow together, and face life I have read several books, but I feel that the author's writing is very different It is completely different from other books

How beautiful this book is: 99.9999999 pljj How beautiful it is: 99.9999999

Either write about Liu Bei or write about feelings. Liu Bei is not Liu Bei. There is no emotion in feelings. This is a crappy book and looks awkward.

The author did not clarify the primary and secondary aspects. The more I read the plot, the more it resembled the youth pain literature I had read before, which involved misunderstandings, car accidents, miscarriages, jumping into rivers, and suicide in love. The more clever ones include Bai Xueqingmei being defeated by the sky, the latecomer coming to the fore, and the villain turning around and gaining sympathy. But what I want to read is male harem stories, not female harem stories about stomach medicine, pulling, misunderstandings, reversals and minotaurs...

Giving away someone who likes you is really a mysterious operation

The hero must always be with the emperor. 😁 It's a pity that there are three thousand beauties in the harem.

I read dozens of chapters. I feel like this book is quite good, but the favorability panel number is a bit outrageous, too low. It's impossible to do something like that in a light novel with such a low favorability rating. If you don't write "high", it's really better not to write "favorability".

The favorability level is ridiculous. You can cosplay with a boy in a love hotel with more than ten favorability points, right?

To be honest, I still hope that the male protagonist will not be a bitch and stand up

Um, I don't really like the scene where the senior wears a bunny girl to show off to others. Maybe it's because I'm a mysophobic person. After all, the novel pursues beauty, so pay attention to lightning protection. It's a pretty good book.

I just saw Chapter 80, what should I say? Is the plot a little too slow? Slowness is not unacceptable. After all, slow work results in careful work, but the main reason is that this "fineness" is not visible. Well, when I say this, you may not understand it. What I mean is pretty much this: When you ride a bicycle, you can feel the bike moving forward every time you step on it. However, this novel gives you the feeling that your wheels are square and you are basically not moving.

It's beautiful, but it's like a dream. You can't dream of it. It's so dreamy 😭 Five-star praise!

I don't quite understand. Where did I learn these fancy tricks from the author? The more I think about it, the more mistakes I make. When we meet for the first time, none of them are acquaintances. The women don't refuse, they are all invited. You want to play with me, Liu Xiahui? Reasonable? Is the Imperial Book different from the Imperial Book? A typical fantasy of Xiao Chulan

After reading the comment section, I feel that I am doing pretty well. I was born in 1993 and started my own business. I have a Range Rover of 1.46 Million and a city house of 72 million. As long as I work hard, I can type any word.

What an awesome protagonist! Like a pervert!

I really don't know how the author can let the male protagonist have a harem. This kind of plot is a bit stomach-ache.

I won't mention the typos. The sentences are so fluent that the compositions written by junior high school students are not as good as AI machine translation, right?

Come on, keep writing, the writing is good, at least there is a lot of room for imagination, I am afraid of eunuchs

I love and hate harem stories. What I like is that in harem stories, female characters with different appearances, different personalities, and different clothing can clearly show each other's charms and the love-hate relationship with the male protagonist. What I hate is the kind of stallion novels where the male protagonist likes one after another, and then the female character is transparently marginalized. I specially read this novel from a pirated version and then downloaded the Qidian app and spent money to read it. Come on, author! Your writing touches me!

Big sister's best friend Sannomiya Rin wrote this about Beaker, don't let it go

It feels pretty good and the writing is awesome. 😍😍😍

From 8 a. M. To 6 a. M. Every morning, it will be updated as soon as 8 a. M. To ensure that everyone can read it as soon as possible. Those who like to sleep late can also read it before going to bed. The new book issue is guaranteed to be updated twice a day, sometimes in advance, because now I have no job, plus I have to support a family, and I don't have a day off. I don't dare to sleep too much every day. The new book is a seedling 🌱. Please take care of it. Because I have always been strict about the detailed descriptions of beauties, so basically everyone likes the female characters in the book. The speed is also fast. I insist on reading the latest chapter every day. I am very grateful.

There are currently three updates. Some book friends said that the pace is a bit slow. The main reason is that I want to be fast and the update speed must keep up, so now there are two to three updates a day. But if the data is not good, it will be more uncomfortable. Please read the latest chapters every day. I am currently working half-time, starting a business, and paying monthly mortgage payments. It is quite stressful. Please support me. Attachment: Yuko Mikami

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