Dog Licking Counterattack Diary

There is a bit too much gray, and a school is written in a smoky atmosphere, just like the harem of an ancient emperor. I almost thought I was reading a palace fight novel or a gray palace fight novel. The protagonist in the novel is all kinds of aggrieved and powerless. The school is full of evils and unfairness, and it is like the rich second generation's back garden. The protagonist's brother even ran away. The heroine's character design is not good either. She is a scumbag, a disobedient naughty child, and a girl who is given for free. There is too little description, whether it is the reason why she stalks the protagonist or enriching her character. When the heroine was first added, the drama started. First, her roommate left, and then there were all kinds of unfair treatment at the school. The school arrested people without any evidence. The protagonist is like a weakling, unable to do anything to face the rich second generation, and it does not reflect the charm of the Golden Finger novel. The plot is very old-fashioned and unoriginal It is written about modern society that ignores the people's police. The rich second generation causes all kinds of troubles. A follower can yell at a female student on the playground and make her serve him.

How could there be such a random book? It's a hammer in one thing or a hammer in the west. The writing is not good, there is no imagination, and the plot is average. It is only suitable for reading without thinking.

I just read Chapter 50. Looking at the character list again, why is the scumbag the heroine? Did the author make a mistake? I thought it was a minor villain, but it turned out to be a heroine?

I really don't want to say it's too poisonous. Anyone with more than 11 cards is considered Shennong. You can test it yourself.

Forget it, how old is the author? Why are college students talking more stupidly than junior high school students? Some words are innocent when spoken by children, but stupid when spoken by adults. So what if you win basketball? Pat your chest and feel confident? Chu Xiaofan is indeed a giant baby among dog lickers. Did the author refer to himself when he wrote this paragraph? Or do you treat readers as fools and write something that would have been rubbish 20 years ago?

This school is too rubbish. The three views follow the five senses. Is it true that the police inside are fw? They have already said it was a homicide but they still don't investigate. The same goes for the hospital. Cremation doesn't have to be so expensive. It only costs more than 2,000 at most. The people here are not very smart.

Author, look at this, first of all, let's look at the memory of the male protagonist before his rebirth. If Keiko doesn't say what kind of wrq, he is at least a brz, right? Judging from the current situation after rebirth, there are at least 3+ suspected candidates who have had a relationship with her. Is positioning her as the heroine a bit poisoned by NTR? If we could forcibly clear her name later and implement a bit of tragedy to make people feel sorry for her, but her current idea of ​​"love is like the taste of food" is completely impossible to feel sorry for. On the contrary, people who watch it will scold her more. Secondly, even if this kind of thing is stopped, her thought will be green. For this character, she is either a semi-tool and is sent to the other side with a boat ticket, or she is turned into a tool and turned into a bitch. All in all, you can play it, but it's best if you don't charge it. Besides, the protagonist really feels like a virgin bitch. He doesn't say anything nice to people who are good to him (Zheng), but he still says he is a good person, and he forces himself to understand his betrayal (Lazi). Of course you say he does it for his family, but wrong is wrong. I understood once, but what about next time? It is enough that there is no forced understanding here. This is still a reborn person. No matter how young he is, even if he is 30 years old, he cannot be as low-income as he is. The character of this protagonist really needs to be evolved. There is also the protagonist, who has at least four years of worldview in the superbook world. A nerd should also know the development trajectory of some things, right? Can you definitely arrange some self-improvement plans? Not to mention that he is ranked in the world, but it is okay for him to have tens of millions of dollars for this plan. Is it okay to keep relying on the system's capital?

1: The characters are flat, all based on stacking. I haven't seen any three-dimensional character in Chapter 45. Even Keiko just has various characters stacked up, and the same goes for the protagonist. 2: The transition is a disaster. Nowadays, the novels are basically running accounts and don't require much writing, but at least it has to be read smoothly. I don't know at least the transition in the back of this book is a disaster. One second, I was playing games on my mobile phone, and the next second, it switched to Keiko. I have read a lot of novels recently, but this is the first time that the transition is so outrageous. It gives people a split reading experience. You can understand it, but you have to rely on the reader to make up for it. This is very outrageous. 3: In addition to the flattening of the characters, which is the biggest problem in this book, another point is that the plot development is like thinking of one element and writing one. Here I write a few chapters to beat the king. In the next chapter, I write a song and intersperse retro plots. If there is any basketball game ahead, you can at least string it together and have an interlude. When I see it now, it gives me the feeling of a running account, and the plot is very poisonous and outrageous. It cannot be said to be a good arrangement. 4: I feel like the author must have read that mining novel. I remember it was written by My Sister's Bride. The rhythm of his earlier book was pretty good. Now that I have read and borrowed the rhythm of that book, I don't have the fragmented character rhythm that I have now. It's very strange. 5: If the author really wants to write a character like a high-end scumbag who is difficult to portray and requires certain cultural literacy, I suggest the author read Jiang Wen's Let the Bullets Fly and The Evil Will Not Suppress the Righteous, and taste the interpersonal relationships and speaking art in it, especially in the second part, a few lines of the Evil Cannot Suppress the Righteous One can enrich the character at once, 4 people, father A series of factors such as dang war, good women, etc. Are expressed. It can be said that among the movies I have watched, Jiang Wen's movie is the only one that made me feel the art of speaking and emotional intelligence. I can taste how he created the characters. 6: I recommend the author to read the love system book. The character creation in that book is quite interesting, but the plot development in the middle is very strange, but it is good to skip that section. Whether it is the rhythm or the description of multiple heroines, I remember the book "Cute World War II" has a heroine who is a fox, and the character is portrayed very well by high-end green tea. 7: It is recommended that authors improve their writing techniques. Zhihu has someone who specializes in teaching this. I suggest you take a look. 8: I didn't read any further, I just couldn't watch anymore. The plot was very toxic and the interpersonal relationships were also very toxic. I thought Keiko and the protagonist were a highlight, but it didn't describe Keiko's emotional intelligence and three-dimensional character as a high-level scumbag, nor did it describe the intertwined battle between the protagonist and him. It even became almost dispensable after about 50 chapters. If the author plans to make a living from this, he really needs to make good preparations.

When it's over, I'm going to feel irritated, cow. If you love it, just order it if you have the money. I hope to make Keiko a little less scumbag. I feel that it will be easier to accept in the later stage. It's okay to shake the s

How to say nickname: Well... Just as I came quietly and left cursing

1. No matter who is holding you in your arms, as long as you are happy 2. Remember to wear a condom 3. Except for not sleeping together, they look like a couple 4. Can't read back 5. As long as I lick fast enough, the goddess's rejection can't catch up with me... For the rest, everyone can post freely This thread has been there Remember to read.

Isn't it true that some people think that a green cross watch can clear their name? Isn't it true that some people think that if they don't have sex, it's not cheating? There can't really be such a slavish licker, right? No, no, right?

Bounce Skill Pack jumps 7 centimeters on the spot and others are still surprised. Is this Lilliputian?

How many people were brought in by the daily drug guide? The drug didn't take effect until chapter 10. There was a sense of disconnection in reading, and the plot was not smooth.

Let me tell you, if this fat man is cleared up later, I will definitely stop watching it. I believe many people will be like me. Is there anything wrong with this fat man's brain? My friend doesn't like a girl he likes right there, kid? Is this because he likes someone so much that he doesn't allow others to hate the person he likes? ! It was okay for him to be a kid there before, but now he wants to change dormitories? The reason turned out to be that the male protagonist refused to be with this Keiko? I was really convinced, so I would only ask the male lead why he was still doing it even though they were together? How many years of brotherhood have you fed the dog? Don't want to believe that the male protagonist is in trouble? The male protagonist made it so obvious that she was acting. Is this fat man really ignorant or pretending not to understand? Also, it is really a forced intelligence. Every character has become SB. What kind of challenge is there these days? I really don't want to believe that no one criticized this book. Although there is indeed no need to criticize this score, is it a review control?

This author describes how his family is a dog licker.

The heroine has already had a relationship with someone else. What's so interesting about such green writing? The heroine is either having an affair with someone else, or she is walking on an ambiguous road... It really doesn't feel good, she looks green.

There are no scumbag people in the world. This is determined by our genes. Men always want to pass on their genes to more people, and women want to get better genes There are only two people in the world who are not "scum". The first type tasted all kinds of delicacies and finally chose pasta. The second type is ruthless. Knowing that I can't resist the temptation, I stop just when I'm about to start. If you want to be the first type of person, you don't have a rich family background or a handsome face. People who turn around and do the second type find that they don't have enough concentration. The result is a "licker"

Well, the author seems to be enjoying himself

I don't really want to watch the plots of other characters recently, but Keiko seems more attractive from the beginning for free. At first, I was attracted by the protagonist's various counterattacks against this scumbag. I don't understand the plot development of Wu Jiani. With the system conditions, it can actually be replaced by forging the protagonist's past. One of the lickers (replacing the identity of one of the lickers) will fight back. Maybe the plot is better written down, and there is no need to explain too much. What is important is to fight back. Let a pure boy like me see the tricks of a scumbag, and then the plot will have a big melee with scumbags, etc. It may not be too much. Thanks

The scum-removal boy

The author tells the truth, how many trustees did you ask for?

A world where the light of socialism does not shine

As long as you are brave, you can let the scumbag take maternity leave

You are as good as the author who wrote the Taishang Talisman

Can anyone who has read it tell me how good this book is? As long as it's physical contact that's super friendly, I won't watch it.

I'm not trying to discourage you. What you wrote is really not interesting.

Just by looking at the title and introduction of the book, readers may guess that recalling the past or the early plot will make them feel humble and aggrieved. But there is also a certain reversal, and this contrast is very strong. The image of Miss Keiko Green Tea is indeed lifelike. If you change your gender, you will be a scumbag. If you don't change your gender, you will be White Lotus + Green Tea Super

It's a shame the author was able to finish such a bad book.

Tsk tsk, come on, author. Anyway, I don't think it's good-looking or outstanding. There are no highs or lows. As plain as water. Not interesting