Legend of the Immortal Sword: Shushan Xuantian Lu

I have read a few chapters, first of all, it is divided into paragraphs. Large paragraphs of text fill up the mobile phone, and it is very difficult to read. If you look at the paragraphs of other novels, the writing is quite smooth, but there are too many useless dialogues in large paragraphs. It is not concise enough, not enough interesting points and routines, and there is not enough foreshadowing. I need to study more.

Sir's article reminds me of that youthful night, as if the boy named Dong put on the Chengdu gay shirt again