Gou Adds Some Points in the World of Cultivating Immortals to Become an Immortal

I feel that the plot of the new chapter is inexplicable. Does anyone really think that immortal cultivators have equal status with mortals?

The protagonist's natal flying sword is too random and rubbish. Just any sword is his natal sword. What kind of heavenly material and earthly treasure is it made of? Or is it an innate treasure?

In Chapter 55, it starts to change between two worlds. It can travel back and forth between the earth and the world of immortality. Do you think it is a poisonous point?

A novel about cultivating immortals, from chapter 15 to about 40 and close to 50 chapters are all about the mortal world. Is this why you read novels about cultivating immortals? It's not the Immortal Cultivation style. If something goes wrong in the Immortal World, you can go to the mortal world and try to survive. Even if you want to write, you should start by writing and then transition to the Immortal World. Why do you spend more space to write about the Mortal World than Cultivation to Immortality when you have already cultivated Immortality? Don't tell me it's about getting gold and experience. The author who gets gold quickly can finish it in one or two paragraphs, and the author who writes ink can only do it in one or two chapters. Normally, the experience in the mortal world is simply about the things the protagonist encounters and what they gain. If you want to be more adventurous, you can write about what happened in the world of immortality, or put the experience before you become an immortal. The longer ones are usually about the experience in the world of immortality.      ，，，，（1），，？ It's better to mention it in one or two sentences. You can add some points, so let's come up with something interesting. Distinguish which ones are important and which ones are secondary. In addition to adding points to novels that are necessary for the novel, naturally the process of adding points and the results of adding points are the key points. Let me talk about a novel about immortality that I read before. The protagonist starts out in the mortal world. In the first few chapters, the protagonist joins a powerful sect of immortality. It seems that the master is still an elder. However, the protagonist does not go to the sect to practice, so he hangs out in the mortal world. Then there is a lot of bullshit in the mortal world, martial arts, and rivers and lakes (based on a simple martial arts novel) The writing seems to be quite bad and bloody), and then the comments in the comment area all felt that they were deceived. Why is it that the novel about cultivating immortals has dozens of chapters before it gets to the point, and you have to take off your pants to show me these. In the end, the author may have discovered the problem, and posted a comment to apologize and said that he would quickly transition to cultivating immortals, but at this time everyone left. The author's explanation for why he wrote this way is that he likes to write about martial arts and martial arts, and he thought readers would also like it. But is there a possibility that the title of his book is related to the cultivation of immortality, and the area where he submitted it is the cultivation of immortality. What readers want to see when they come in is cultivation of immortality, not poorly written martial arts martial arts. If you want to watch martial arts, shouldn't you go to the martial arts area? Or at least go to the fandom area and the infinite area. Even in the immortality area, it is the path from mortal to martial arts to immortality. It is not the case where the main character has become an immortal without other reasons and the focus of the writing is on martial arts, forcing the protagonist to stay in the mortal world. (1) Choice: Notify people in the city that there is danger or not. You are still struggling in your heart not to save the people in the city and wait for them to die to get the gold. You are really short of gold. What have you been doing in the past two years? Did you practice for two years? If I really want to take you as an immortal cultivator, who can stop you in the mortal world? Whether it is directly robbing you, or harvesting through various organizations, etc., There are only a few ways for immortal cultivators to obtain gold.

The most interaction between immortal cultivators and mortals is just the sect recruiting disciples. A cultivator who doesn't want to kill people and seize treasures? Especially Chapter 15: Entering the world to find a way? It's so embarrassing to still establish a Taoist heart. Regardless of whether you are practicing immortality or Taoism, you must understand the laws of metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. Dao heart, inner demons, these things are purely out of my mind. Just like the little fairy thinks that others are better off than her husband. She had an affair with someone else and divorced her husband. Later, she found out that she had not received any money from her ex-husband's demolition, and she suffered from Yuyu Syndrome.

It's better not to write it. It's really embarrassing.

In the past, cultivating immortals was all about having a fairy spirit and lofty artistic conception. Nowadays, leisure is all about getting involved in money, jealousy, palace fights, and career life.

If you have any good ideas or secondary designs, please leave a message below this post.

The writing, logic, and thinking are all good, but the plot is lacking in imagination, especially at the beginning.

Chapter seventeen is about the plot of a movie