Cultivation: Start from the Equipment Slot

It's not bad. Although it has flaws, it doesn't prevent it from becoming a source of food. It's just that one chapter a day is too little. At least two chapters a day are needed.

Every time a dog is encountered on the roadside, the protagonist will be kicked.

There is really nothing to write about. The plot conflict depends entirely on other people's displeasure with the protagonist.

Haha, you can build a foundation and live for 120 years, and you can make boiled egg ingredients for 300 years! It's like buying an insurance policy for your child that will be collected in 200 years! That's not to say that no one from the Yuanying sect is planting it! There is also no concept of spiritual cultivation, so this world of cultivation has no sustainability at all! How big must the world be to support you "big thieves"? So now it seems that the novels about cultivating immortals are not as popular as before. I can only say "should"!

TMD, Tencent is getting better and better at preventing theft. I can't read more than 100 chapters.

I'm also speechless. Whatever the protagonist does, he has to encounter something, right?

Chapter 29 is extremely poisonous. The author is probably a refined egoist, but also a ruthless and unrighteous kind. Without refuting, is it difficult to use warrior skills and provide his own brother with some elixirs for longevity and health care? Is it difficult to give your biological father some elixirs to cure illnesses and extend his life? No money? Every time, it is an extremely poisonous plot, which makes people feel rubbish.

Before Chapter 70 was released, I felt a bug. I wonder if the author did this intentionally. Practice the alchemy recipe to perfection, and any new elixir recipe that appears will start from 0. The materials for the Jiedan Yuanying Dan recipe will only become less and less. The protagonist Goldfinger will make readers feel very strange. The solution is so amazing, Isn't it normal to gain 20, 50, 80 exp after failing to practice the new recipe? Also +1+1+1+1 The higher the protagonist upgrades, the less precious materials there are. How can you waste it like this? From the perspective of travelers, using plug-ins is very inflexible. For example: if there are 10 elixirs in a batch, splitting each pill and practicing will increase the experience value. The protagonist doesn't try often. Is it possible to practice 2 or 3 furnaces of elixirs together until I am perfect? ​​The protagonist has not tried it often After reading Chapter 70, I recalled what the protagonist was doing, Looking for materials to make elixirs Looking for materials to make elixirs I ran out of time to find materials to make elixirs. The protagonist is very depressed and cannot feel relaxed and happy due to cheats. This is the perception of my readers.

Haha, the equipment column is there, and the problem has been put on the equipment. There is no equipment available. You say it is funny or not, but you have to suppress it to the death.

Disadvantages 1: There is less description of the eyes of plot characters. Almost everyone has a detailed description of their eyes. As for that? 2: The emotional line of the protagonist is a little complicated 3: The plot in the early stage is dull, but it is exciting in the later stage, but the rhythm is not well grasped (For example, before and after the knotting of the pill and the birth of the baby, it should be the climax of the plot, but the author always keeps adding water to such highlights, which is not smooth at all and makes people upset. For example: the birth of the baby in the recent chapters is several thousand words long. The main character has done nothing for ten consecutive chapters. Do you have the patience to wait for you to grind it out? What if you kill Yuan Ying directly at the conference? It can both take revenge and scare the monkeys. ) Advantages: The writing is smooth and the author's writing is good. The recommendation index is three and a half stars. I gave you a monthly recommendation ticket. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I won't read the next plot. The author will come back with a new book.

It's too watery, and the data in Chapter 2 is easy to dissuade. It is recommended to only write about equipment effects, and it is best to only increase qualifications and understanding. If you increase the combat power, it may collapse in the later stage because the equipment column will increase at the back. It's an old trick.

Why does your upright sect want to switch from practicing magic skills to practicing demonic skills? ? ? Is there a hole in your head?

I can accept everything else, but Zhuge Qing's plot disgusted me so much

Does anyone really like to watch protagonists with poor qualifications? It feels too cliche. Great masters with many fans can write with quality assurance, while newcomers should write genius stories to retain readers. Nowadays, there are a lot of ideas in novels about cultivating immortals, but the protagonists are too mediocre at the beginning. Sometimes I don't want to click on it after reading the introduction. No matter how good the ideas and plot are, they can't make up for the first impression of the protagonist. I don't know if I am too picky 😒

Why does the protagonist have to go back? I don't feel that the protagonist cares about his family that much. This puts life and death at risk and wastes a lot of resources.

It can only be said that this plug-in does not show many advantages. It seems that the protagonist's advancement of the pill formation is smooth, but in fact it cannot help the protagonist much. The pill formation is still hiding here and there, making the protagonist feel more involuntarily.

The character you wrote is kind and lawful. You have to attack you first before you can fight back. Can't you attack others for the sake of spiritual practice?

The protagonist Yuan Yang in the beginning has been lost, goodbye👋

So classic

I am finally a eunuch. Let's not talk about the content of going to other worlds. Just in front of me, when I was about to kill the old Jinwu, I was stopped by that person. It made me sick. I don't know what you want to express? You have kidnapped your wife for decades, and you still say you will kill her when the time comes. How can you pretend to be so generous? So what's the point of designing such a plot? Disgusting reader? The content about going to other worlds later is also very poorly written. Forget it, let's just leave it at that. I'm too lazy to complain.

The biggest shortcoming is the series of confusing operations after foundation building. I went directly to the leader without reporting it to the master first. Also, I was too hasty. I didn't know how to back up a little more foundation building experience in the sect, and I could also buy some things to assist foundation building. It's not that I didn't have spiritual stones, and the bonus would be higher. I would bet all my worth on it, and if I failed, I would make elixirs. Let's just say it's less than 100%. If you don't have a loan to build a foundation, you are super stable.

I'm almost exhausted from practice, can I stop writing about the love between men and women? Write more about understanding the laws, how to apply the laws, how powerful are they?

Such a beautiful book is not popular?

I don't understand. Is this also a eunuch? I'm almost finished writing it😂

It's hard to get started with new books. Many old authors are rushing to the market but their results are not bad. They should spend more time conceiving the plot of the old books instead of thinking about the beginning of a lot of new books and then regret it later when the new books are published. If you don't have any ideas, stop reading similar books.

I actually reached LV5, why is there no high-quality product yet?

It is easy to reduce intelligence in the later stage 😰

In fact, I think the author should be pretty good at writing a two-world novel.

If you can't continue writing, write roughly and start the book again.

The updated numbers are much smaller and more writing is required.