I Submitted a Report on Another World

After looking at it all the way, it is generally very good. Let me talk about a few of the poisonous points that I personally think. 1. When the protagonist first demonstrated his ability to the relevant departments, he actually did it openly in the restaurant. I can't understand it 2. The first time the team explored a different world, the team found gold in an underground cave. Without knowing anything about it, they made the idea of ​​a team exploration. The reason is that if they get the gold, they can get back their money by exploring this time 🤤. Brother, this is a national-level mission, and you have to risk it with a third-rate person. Like the team, they are basically brainless 3. The third point is the safety of the protagonist. In addition to personal danger, the most important point is that the author has completely failed to consider that the existence of this portal is completely dependent on the protagonist. In other words, if the protagonist dies of old age, the portal will be gone. It is conceivable that in the future, at the end of the day, the profits brought by this portal to Guo Jia may be hundreds of billions. In this case, the protagonist is not equipped with the best nutritionist, personal medical staff or something?

I suggest the author change the reporting process. Listening and reading are confusing. When encountering something with a clear confidentiality level, it is better to go directly to the military area where the People's Liberation Army is standing guard with guns than to make a phone call to poison the readers. I don't know where the military district went directly to the city public security bureau and said that I had several 500,000 yuan affairs that threatened the safety of myself and my family. Someone will take it seriously. Although it may be troublesome, it is better than deliberately poisoning. It is slightly safer if you see the city level or military district or regiment level or above. Any organization you call is a scam.

The first chapter is silly. If you really have the ability to open portals and want to report it, go directly to the police station. After arranging on-site demonstrations and proving the relevant information, the relevant situation will be reported directly to Tianting within an hour. Then the supreme leader will directly instruct to arrange the highest level security, a biosafety level five laboratory, and arrange various wired and wireless drones and robots and other detection systems. Environmental parameters, including gravity, ambient temperature, radiation, air composition, comparison with Earth's day and night time, detection of environmental microorganisms, and collection of animal and plant data and specimens. If humans can adapt to the local physical environment, armed personnel will be arranged to wear full spacesuits to explore, and an exploration base will be gradually established. It's childish to report the whole folklore research association. The portal technology and the different worlds connected to it by living creatures are of immeasurable value. If such a thing really happens, it will be very fast to follow the normal reporting procedures. Afterwards, those with knowledge will be required to strictly abide by confidentiality regulations, and they and their family members will be transferred to relevant departments. Or, just like during the period of research on the atomic bomb, the family members only know that the person is still alive, where they are, and what they are doing, but they have no idea at all.

Hahahahahahaha, so funny. There are people who work alone and want to cooperate with the state every day and turn it over to the state, and there are a lot of people who don't believe this or that. Why are you reading the book?

I've read Chapter 30 and want to complain about how toxic this female researcher is? Let the protagonist play with experimental weapons? It's so fucked up that your hands are the most important part of your body, why are you allowed to play like this? The security guard and this woman around me should be transferred without being shot. Please give me some logic. In the next chapter, the protagonist is encouraged to open a portal privately and take her to another world. I am speechless~ I hope the author will stop doing this. I will give you a monthly ticket~

However, the author's experience is not enough, and his thinking is very self-centered. He does not try to figure out the psychology of the characters, but writes whatever he thinks. A soldier is not like a soldier, an official is not like an official, and a scientific researcher is not like a scientific researcher. . .

What feels most abstract is that the management actually agreed to let the protagonist move freely in another world with a few people to protect him. You must know that if the protagonist dies in an accident, everyone in the other world will not be able to return.

When developing a different world with a country, these two prerequisites must be added to prevent it from appearing poisonous. 1. The first world is particularly dangerous. The protagonist almost died when exploring alone for the first time, and then he searched for a country. 2. The ability to travel is bound.

Doesn't the author think there are too many bad guys and moles inside? There are also many people who are living without food, and people who are willing to sacrifice their lives for profit. The protagonist should directly demand that all the bad guys in the country be eliminated after realizing his ability to do this, otherwise the door will not be opened. This condition is beneficial to the country and you personally, and there are many greedy people in high positions. Moreover, the protection of the protagonist is not rigorous, and it actually allows the protagonist to play with guns that explode. If the protagonist is gone, they will have nothing. I, an ordinary person, understand this truth. It makes no sense that so many think tanks at the national level do not understand. This kind of thing has already involved the national destiny. At least arranging for 24-hour protection is a basic operation, right? What if there are one or two people who hate the Kuomintang? Or what about some accidents? Who can guarantee that. The author still has not raised his thinking to the level of national and national interests, and a large part of it remains in the personal adventure style time-travel plot. And once this kind of news is leaked, it may become a major national event targeted by the whole world, and not everyone can participate. It is impossible to write this kind of article if your thinking is too limited. After all, it is an entire world's resources, extraordinary power, and the possibility of increasing your life span. This kind of thing can already be raised to the level of fighting the Fourth World War.

This type of protagonist can just be a door opener and a television set, but if the author keeps adding drama to the protagonist, it will be disgusting.