How Did the End Come? I've Paid Off All My Debts

My personal comments on the pros and cons of the first three chapters of this book represent only my personal feelings. The first big taboo: too much system nonsense I have seen in many VIP book club groups that many readers do not like system articles. I don't like the system's presence being too strong. I personally like system writing, but I also hate splashing too much ink on the system. The presence is too strong. Very embarrassing. Chapter 3... The system text is not popular from the beginning, but the system ends up talking a lot of nonsense... The entire chapter is devoted to settings. The second taboo: writing explanations Following the plot step by step is like opening a blind box. Gradually become familiar with the system through the plot. The author Fei Luo Liba has written a lot of system settings. A few short sentences will suffice, preferably in one sentence. Famous success story Deep Blue System. Third taboo: The content is empty and self-talk It's only three chapters and I can still make a U-turn. Author, you didn't realize that all three of your chapters were about the background and origins. It's still acceptable so far, and there is no interaction between the characters. It's like playing single player. Lessons from the past: You can read the book review section of the book "I Simulate the Road to Immortality in a Chat Group". The entire book review is full of criticism and hollowness, but in my mind, one chapter is half as bad. The characterization is hollow. The current attractions that keep me watching The first attraction: The introduction is quite funny, making the protagonist unlucky but not unacceptable, and it feels a bit satisfying for some reason. The second attraction point: The plug-in gives you something for nothing, satisfying unrealistic fantasies, but it is still controlled and does not let the protagonist fly into the sky and destroy the balance. But I feel like you, the author, will lose control. Personal suggestion: focus on the plot, even if it is a mindless and cool novel, there is still a plot. Produced by interactions between characters. The author's remarks after finishing the book "I Just Want to Be Quietly a Taoist Man" suggest that the author take a look at it. It contains the writing reflections of a successful author. How to pretend to be cool, how to shape your cool personality. The type of book is also systematic and refreshing, but not brainless.

Any loan shark that can be repaid is not a loan shark.

I read a few pictures, Alexandre Dumas, The Doomsday Comes, and after returning home, he will have sex with a woman.

Daily guide to poison: 8 out of 10 books are poisonous, and the remaining two I don't like to read😰️

If the protagonist is dead, he can only awaken one holy item. There are a lot of holy items in the back, and the origin also emerges. It would be really funny to use the protagonist to jump to a draw.

Foolishly. And it's the end of the world and you're still pursuing a title

I'm not bragging, the rest of the writing is okay, but the first few chapters are poorly written, especially those about the reborn people, the monk family, the big world and the small world. I think that at least so far, these messy settings are meaningless and blindly distract the readers. The field of view is too wide, and its effect is no less than that of inserting an eye into the big dragon pit when you are full at level 1. Deleting all these messes can greatly improve the reader's experience. These settings have nothing to do with the early stage. If you slowly add them later, it will be more rounded and reasonable. There seem to be some problems in the back, but basically a little poison is acceptable. In fact, the general context and plot direction so far I think is acceptable, but the poison at the beginning is not very good.

This title reminds me of my grandfather and his family. When they were young, they ran out of food and borrowed it from the landlord. Fortunately, the harvest was good and they finally paid it back. After that, it was a fight with landlords 🙂

I remember one story about being reborn after surviving the apocalypse. The protagonist: What a big trough!

When I look at my resume, my blood pressure rises, 🐎️

I really admire myself after reading Chapter 22. You can still read the first few chapters👀

The more people lack something, the more eager they are to express something. The author must be a peerless virgin.

It's the end of the world, think about becoming a noble first! Sweat profusely!

It starts with an abusive article, even a dog wouldn't read it

What's more, the Ming Empire, where the sun never sets and the Queen has established a constitutional monarchy, can the feudal society die?

It was mentioned earlier that the protagonist has become a national aerobatic athlete and can be granted a noble status with just one gold medal. Later, it was said that only nobles can obtain a gun license, so don't even think about it for a little shit like me.

Wouldn't it be possible for a book like this to be included in the daily guide? This is too boring, what is written in the first chapter, there is nothing to catch people, it is all written to persuade people to quit.