I Have Lost 99 People in the Chat Group.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a bad protagonist. It feels like reading a novel from twenty years ago.

Hey, it's true that it opened high and left low! In Devouring the Starry Sky, your combat power is higher than that of a star, and you have turned back to the Naruto world to start a long story. Your combat power can be directly pushed forward. It is a cool story that is finished in just a few pictures. It has so many twists and turns that it is impossible to watch it.

Speed ​​up, what we want to see is the blood-stained starry sky, you are engaging in urban conspiracy theories

First of all, looking at the chat group, I felt that the author's qualifications were mediocre. In each world, I am in danger. In each world, I am not the protagonist, and I can die anytime and anywhere! Then the perspective changes to various worlds. The protagonist of the Iron Kingdom and Naruto world has become a genius again. Does it take a genius to become a swordsman? Even the realm of great swordsman? The very contradictory Swallowing Starry Sky comes next. Why is it said to be contradictory? The protagonist is the most powerful person on earth at the beginning of Nirvana. From then on to the secret realm of Qianwu (I have only seen this place so far), the protagonist is still a 5-star genius. The protagonist has this qualification but always wants to lie down. The key is to lie down properly. You always want to act like a genius. This is very twisted. Why? Change, let's take a look at the protagonist's configuration conditions. The protagonist has a cheat like a chat group, his own wind domain level 5, and 48 times his genes. The key is to have his own methods to improve his genes, as well as the help of others and me from the heavens. Before the genius battle has even begun, he is smart enough to say that he must understand the lower laws first. To break immortality, all other laws do not need to be understood. Whoever does not break through immortality first is a fool. After the other laws break through immortality, there will be plenty of time for hundreds of millions of epochs to slowly be understood. Not to mention the 100,000-year combat power of City Lord Luo, the master of the universe. Your mentality is wrong. Gods, he and I travel across all realms. You have to put it aside. If you die, just lie down and be patient, or you can be brave and diligent, your writing style is genius, your mentality is docile, it looks very twisted, and you said you have to rely on Luo Feng, Thunder God, and Hong, but now you are crushing others in all aspects, your words and deeds are inconsistent. What I see is not humility and docility, I only see arrogance! It is time to stand up again, there are heavens, he and I. The world view written by golden fingers is also the world view of all heavens and all realms. Sooner or later, we will reach the highest level of all heavens. Then why do we always think about the ultimate goal in our hearts, and want to show off and slap others in the face when doing things? Swallowing Starry Sky is still a place that pays attention to mentality and will. The protagonist has no ambition to be strong but has some natural strength. Isn't this the next Emperor Yan of the Yan God Clan? Moreover, this book will be a proper nanny story from now on. It has no responsibility and likes to be in the limelight when it comes to life and work. If it doesn't die soon, it will be a shame for the mountain guest who created the earth. The mentality is so bad that I can't see any reason to reach the top. I will definitely collapse at the end of the writing. The author can't grasp how to balance the protagonist of the fanfic and the protagonist of the original work.

After watching it for a long time, I still can't figure out what Naruto World wants to do? Are you kidding me? If you have the strength, don't use it!

After reading novels for so many years, you are the first person I have seen who openly kills so many babies. The lower limit of this protagonist is really ridiculously low.

What I wrote before is very good, but the one who defeated the Qin Dynasty looked like a different person. . . It's ridiculous that the military formation can control Dou Sheng. . . According to your logic, the original Tianzun can be beaten to death by the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation, in fact. Yuanshi Tianzun broke through the Ten Thousand Immortals Formation with one finger.

Swallowing Starry Sky and Copper River Standing had novel themes and attracted me. I thought it was pretty good, so I skipped to watch the beginning. However, the protagonist now has normal planet-level combat power, but in the end he was still pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. You explained, that is to say, humans have not experienced the catastrophe, they will not be united, and they may bomb you with nuclear bombs. This is true. If I traveled into the swallowing starry sky, I would definitely start with a sluggish start, but this is a novel, and you have to design the plot. Here you go Take a look at Mr. Hua's new book The protagonist relies on cheats to gain the reputation of a genius, and then installs a character who hates evil and would rather bend than bend. Although it is still in the early and weak stage, the sense of satisfaction will come, and the follow-up reading will come. I suggest you learn from it. As an old bookworm, my advice to you is, the kind of artificial intelligence that interacts with you, or the artificial intelligence that turns into a beast-eared girl or a ship girl, to please you. We are here to devour the stars. You can't write good writing for fun and are relatively poor, so you might as well just write purely career writing. Secondly, it is necessary to write about the importance of the protagonist's leading combat power in the early stage of this great nirvana. One of the major sticking points in online articles nowadays is pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. You have to know that you are crushing the protagonist for the pleasure afterwards, not for the sake of crushing. You can write the protagonist and describe the early stage of the Great Nirvana. You can fictionalize a province or city that was captured by monsters in the early stage, and then write about the protagonist turning the tide and harvesting the flesh and blood energy of the monster system and forwarding it to friends in other worlds. Then you will have great points to write about heroes, as well as two villains, and finally there will be a collision of systems. Or if you don't want to write an invincible novel, you can first create a false identity for the protagonist. One identity is the protagonist's real battlefield, and the other identity is that the protagonist's current identity is the disciple of the protagonist's real battlefield senior. Then, the surface combat power of the protagonist should not be set so low. It would be better if the God of War apprentice had an opportunity to study and gain a high status among humans. If you think these plots are impossible to appear in the early stage of the Great Nirvana, then you should speed up and skip the protagonist's family in one step. What kind of genetic medicine can now increase the strength of several hundred kilograms? The protagonist is now at the planetary star level, and then he is still there actively not fighting for it. Skipping it is poisonous to us. To be honest, I think the best way to keep proportions right now is for the protagonist to explore the alien ruins for three years, and then just turn the tide when the tide hits. The most important thing is to write that the people who were originally dead, the people who were originally hungry, the people who were originally devoured by monsters are the protagonists, and they are saved. Happiness comes from comparison, and you have to feel the pleasure of comparison

Also, a lot of messy settings from Xianqin were added to Dou Po. There was a Dou Sheng in Dongzhou and the settings were normal. Why did the Dou Sheng forces fight and seize territory? Didn't I have to count? One million Dou Wangs were also slapped to death by Dou Sheng. The entire Zhongzhou Thousands and tens of thousands of Dou Zun, if you directly form an array and defeat the Soul Emperor according to your method, you are actually only missing a small level. If the Dragon Emperor and Gu Yuan bring hundreds of Dou Saints, thousands of Dou Zun, tens of thousands of Dou Zong, hundreds of thousands of Dou Emperors, millions and tens of millions of Dou Kings, the Soul Emperor will still be beaten to death with two slaps. Even if you add Dou Sage and Half Saint to fight against each other, you can only reach Dou Zong at the lowest level. Do you not understand what the meaning of rubbish like Dou Zhe and Dou Master is in front of Dou Zun? And all the people are soldiers. This gameplay is just for raising Gu in the Soul Palace. After reading so many comics, your setting is the most rubbish. Fighting to Break the Sky is not a particularly niche thing. If you don't know how to write it, just don't write it. I have read the good ones in the past and are still thinking about whether to order them all. The more you write, the worse you write. In the original work, the fighting between saints, especially the ninth rank and the semi-saint level, is very rubbish. You are even more rubbish than what you wrote in the original book. I can only say that I have nothing to say.

The writing of Naruto is really slow and there are no good things. The strongest six paths are like wild dogs on the roadside.

What is Dou Po? Dou Sheng Dou Zun lets the combatants fight for territory. If you don't know how to write, you can copy Zhongzhou. Opening and closing your mouth is Dou Zun Dou Sheng. Things like battle formations are originally meant to be a blessing when the same level fights against the same level. The battle formations of the great master are not as good as you. Direct Dou Zong fights Zun Dou Sheng. I think if Muchen had learned the battle formations in Douqi Continent like you, he would have beaten Tianxie God, right?

Introduction to Douluo. Just lose half the people

It looks okay. I suggest you eat less of the Juhu household. I feel that there is a high chance that you will be scolded 🙂

There are too many useless plots. For example, visiting a brothel and changing secret skills were just watery and had no ability to promote the plot at all. Five, six, seventy-eight pictures, pure pure water! 😅

When I see someone writing about Douluo, I come in and have a look. What's there to write about in a junk book?

The logic of Dou Po is that in addition to the protagonist, you need to be one level higher or at least one level lower to lead a group of people to fight. It is only two moves. A city subordinate to a semi-saint force opens its mouth to block the saint. Not to mention which of the eight ancient tribes, the Stone Tribe and the Spirit Tribe is stronger. The most rubbish Spirit Tribe also said that there are at least several Fighting Saints, and the minimum one must have three or four stars. The Stone Tribe is even more powerful. There are five or six-star Fighting Saints, the same Medicine Clan's seven-star Fighting Saint plus nine-star Fighting Saint's remnant soul. They can't stop the same Fighting Saint at the same level, and there are so many bad things that make me want to vomit. Man, you really don't know how to write about direct anti-inflammatory medicine brothers or cheating on anti-inflammatory medicine. You create a lot of your own and it's rubbish. Even if there is an explanation later, your combat power logic is no longer equivalent to Dou Po Cang Qiong. I don't want to say anything else.

I always feel that the author is writing the opposite, explaining why the first 99 people died It is because of the arrogance engraved in the bones of the protagonist that so many people died in the previous part After all, he started to waste his money after a little bit of strength Then the real protagonist did not come, the villain with no halo and no name, he was directly targeted and killed without being subdued. After all, the protagonist is so arrogant that he will not think about why the other party has to target him. He is "not" wrong and must kill him Especially the demon fox chapter. It can be said that the arrogance and distress of both being and standing are vividly expressed.

How can this introduction accurately hit all the lightning points _?, It is both Naruto and the fantasy Mariana Trench funny person 🤔 Very curious

After reading the word count of the first two books, I was disappointed.

The style of writing the plot of Dou Po has changed. I guess the author has changed whether he likes it or not.

It's okay. I tortured many people to complain. Kitsune and Dou Po are both good. Naruto is also good. I haven't watched Starry Sky but I've watched a lot of unlimited streams and I know some about it. Watch some parts of Starry Sky and jump to other parts.