Invincibility Started When I Saw the Boss's Health Bar

Let me start with the conclusion: run! Run! Run! On a 5-point scale, a normal novel would be rated 2 points, and this book would be a solid 2.5-3 Points. This book is classified as a virtual online game, but now that I see it, I prefer to classify it as a game (system) alien world + a lost city. I was attracted to read this book by the joke at the beginning. I originally thought it would be a good entertainment and comedy article, with good ideas. However, the comedy disappeared, the ideas disappeared, and the plot twists became more and more stable (sloppy). The plot is no different from those short stories about traveling through other worlds (the protagonist encounters trouble, the protagonist gets into trouble, and through manipulation, the protagonist wins The protagonist ran into trouble again due to the previous operation, the protagonist got involved, and the protagonist won again), the key is to pay you back 🐴 It's getting better and better, a small fight can last more than ten chapters. Let me first declare that I don't write novels, but give me these dozen chapters and let me remove unnecessary parts and abbreviate them. It's okay to shorten it to a few chapters. I suspect that the author just started with an outline and then filled in some clues, and now it is just watery.

I watched it all the way to the latest in one go. The early stages all the way to Chutianyuan Town were very exciting. It is rare to see a protagonist who values ​​love and justice and is comfortable in dealing with others, but there is a big mess in the back. Taoist Priest Qingyuan can be regarded as the second coolest point, but throughout the whole process, the protagonist no longer regards ordinary people as human beings. It is hard to imagine that after knowing that the game world is the real world, the protagonist who collapsed because he killed many people would later become such an arrogant and indifferent person. I know that you have great affection for Ding Hui. Jpg, but you don't even consider the situation and kill him if you don't like the situation. In the end, it doesn't matter at all the retaliation of the people around you because of your behavior, right? Many times, when everyone is happy with the situation, you can just relax and say it. The protagonist is like: I won't, kill him. Are you happy to finally be in danger together, are you cunningly in love? Even if he must be killed, can't he be given a reason to have a deadly feud? I know killing people is fun and you gain experience and health, but have you really forgotten that they are human beings too? Catch up on the latest feeling. Although the combat part has begun to have new tricks, it is always very unreasonable to double-standard, inexplicably tough and inexplicably submissive. Who said you have old emotional intelligence, this emotional intelligence is simply amazing. Jpg At every turn, the top management uses power to pressure people and wants to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist starts killing people in a rage. I really beg you, didn't you write a good joint battle at the beginning? You have finished writing about the evil of human nature, what about the good? Did you all feed Brother Qing? From the beginning, all the characters have their own shining points and can cooperate with each other. Now, they are often killed by people to highlight the power of the protagonist who saves them. Don't you think it is boring? After the plot has advanced so much, the protagonist still only has the same people around him as he did at the beginning. He has become completely arrogant and no longer regards ordinary people as the same as himself. What was very exciting was that the protagonist rescued Black Rain Sword, completely saving his own father. Author, I know you really want to give the protagonist materials and connections, but do you have to use such an uncontrollable woman? Is your harem soul awakening again? There are so many protagonists in the Fu Jia Gang who have nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist saves this person and destroys their vitality. It is a completely unreasonable disaster. Moreover, the protagonist has not even thought about making up for the problems he has caused and is not aware of it. I am really speechless. Is this the same protagonist who values ​​love and justice before? In the end, all I can say is that I don't ask for anything else but Brother Qingqing. I hope the protagonist can be a little more logical and considerate. He is already strong enough. Rather than killing inexplicably, I hope to defeat powerful enemies reasonably and protect the people around me without harming others. It is really difficult to keep going crazy now that I am unsteady on my feet. The rhythm is too tight and I really need some relaxation now. I know you are in a hurry, but don't rush it yet. I hope the author can regain the feeling of Tianyuan Town. Now that all the foreshadowings have been laid, it's time to have some fun, but you'd better be really happy, rather than basing the protagonist's happiness on anyone's painful failure. To be honest, when everyone is in pain, even if the protagonist is killed, it is difficult to accept it. Family fun has surpassed 99.9% Of authors, so why not?

The protagonist's IQ can be said to be equivalent to having no IQ. If you don't have an IQ, just forget it and don't listen to advice. You can either always be a reckless man and have a great time, or you can have an above-average IQ and have no plans left. You have installed an external brain, Ding Hui, and you have written the protagonist as a fool. You have nothing to say. The protagonist always engages in unnecessary battles to kill monsters, and then fast-forwards to an inexplicable life-and-death battle. The battle perspective switches to chaos. I know what you want to express, but don't you feel dizzy when you write it like this? You don't focus most of the perspective on the protagonist when writing a reckless novel. The plot is reaching a climax, and then the perspective starts to change randomly. The climax is not like a climax. It makes me uncomfortable. I don't care if I suppress the protagonist so much. I interrupt it when I am enjoying it. The only fun part is the second half of Sunset City. It seems like the characters have been changed in the latter part. The protagonist's brain is completely useless and he has become a fool.

The subject matter is quite interesting, and the author's writing in the early stage is also quite good. The character Qi Xiaojin is also okay, but after more than a hundred chapters, it starts to have some problems. Inexplicable emotional lines appear. The protagonist is a player, and he doesn't even have a soul. How does he develop a family and gay relationship with the two characters, the second sister and Qing Yao, especially the second sister, the writing is very abrupt. Ever since the hundredth chapter, the protagonist has been feeling tied up with his second sister Qing Yao. He and his second sister are both practicing martial arts. The advancement of the demon bloodline depends on Qing Yao. I looked back again, and everyone in the comment section was complaining about the author's serial swordsman character, and the corresponding chapter happened to be free. Then I took a look, and the second sister successfully sacrificed to the sky to kill the protagonist, and Qi Xiaojin, the suspected heroine, faked her death to save the protagonist. Why is this scene so familiar? Will the protagonist have to imitate Tang San and shout: "Resurrection, my love"? Another point is that the title says invincible, but the protagonist is very aggrieved. Personally, I think the title should be called "Become invincible from the moment you see the monster's health bar." This title is relatively more consistent.

I'm not good at it, but I've already written it in an invincible way. The plot is so drawn out that any street guy can just chime in and say something.

What should I say, the first part was very interesting, and then I subscribed. After reading about 200 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Is that reborn woman a pure idiot? The title of the book is Invincible. Can the protagonist please become invincible as soon as possible? Isn't it just disgusting in the mid-term?

I've seen the latest chapter so far, and overall it's pretty good. Some people think that the protagonist is too brash and doesn't look like a professional player. First of all, I think this professional player is the self-proclaimed professional player. I know he is unreliable from the time he entered the hospital in the last game. In terms of the plot, there aren't many bad points. If there are small bad points, for example, the performance of other players is only two or three that are pretty good, as if the protagonist is playing single-player. The protagonist's combat prowess is of course caused by the author's rough description of other players, without any horizontal comparison. It makes people think that even though the main character has thousands of health points, he still can't be beaten by a bunch of people. I hope the author can write about this aspect well, and can write about players in other places to pave the way, so that when the protagonist comes out with a bunch of expert players, it will be weird. In general, the systems in this book can be classified into two categories, one is demons and the other is spirits. Human words have not yet been seen to be purely human, and the author says that humans have their limits. Either become the demon warrior mentioned so far or control the spirit, so I classify the system into two categories. There are also levels, but there are no obvious subdivisions. They just have stronger power. I hope to be able to add something later. In terms of power, the most detailed ones are demons and humans. In terms of spirits, there are some individuals. According to what the author said before, the demon lost to the spirit, we can know that the spirit is powerful, but it was not written out. Finally, if you want to write about the end of the world, then speed up the progress of the protagonist quickly, otherwise the background setting will be very confusing. There is a solution and that is to add more updates! More updates will be added; I am currently reading it, and it is very uncomfortable to read. The plot is intermittent and makes me almost constipated. I hope there will be more updates every day.

It was so fun to jump back and forth when I was undercover, but now the writing is too watery

I feel pretty good! The protagonist doesn't know that reality has changed! Focus on playing games! The author has been writing about Novice Village. This copy is the foreshadowing and it is not over yet! I guess the author wants to change the ending of the rebirth! I also want to be stronger than the reborn person remembers! It's better to develop in a familiar place than in an unfamiliar place! Not every novel is weak! Isn't the protagonist also exposed to the outside world?

The book reviews are a little better now, but if the Green Demon dies in today's chapter, the comment section will be completely one-sided 😎 The author had better learn from the mistakes of the previous book. This one is more interesting than the previous one, so don't let yourself down.

Let me give you a brief review. So far, the latest chapter gives me a good impression and quality. Meme can be a success or failure. Occasionally seeing a meme will always make people smile, but when there are too many memes and they even occupy the content of the main plot, it feels very boring. The description of the player is spot on. He is indeed a pure and happy person with no distinction between good and evil. The protagonist's temperament is also in place. First of all, in the virtual world (the protagonist thinks), killing NPCs and monsters is all for upgrading. Then he only needs to retain a little kindness and not hurt ordinary people. Most people are experience packages for him. This is already a reflection of quality. Why should we write about the second sister? Because the first task of the player is to lurk, it is also very important to enter the game character. Coupled with the character of the male protagonist, if others treat him well, he will repay him twice as much. Therefore, if the second sister is so kind to him, he will naturally not give up on the second sister . The character design of Qing Yao is great, but later on it felt like it was deliberately selling out... I personally am not used to reading pornographic stories, but I would be able to accept it if there was a gender change or a new heroine.

It's a very interesting book, overall it's lighthearted and humorous, and the grading is also very simple. Remember to protect your second sister!

The plot is quite exciting, but there are too many poisonous points in the early stage.

Be sensible

It feels good to jump horizontally and vertically Hold on, author!

"Invincibility Begins When I See the BOSS's Health Bar": An online game novel that combines various elements [Theme] Games and virtual online games [Author] I am also desperate [Tag] Technical flow, relaxed [Comments] Fang Yu, a professional game player, had a conflict with someone in order to snap up a game helmet for the epoch-making game "Seeking Demons". In the end, the two reconciled, and the other party gave him a game helmet as compensation. What he didn't expect was that the young man who had the conflict with him held a piece of parchment. The writing on it showed that the future game would come to reality, urging him to enter the game as soon as possible. Just when the young man was excited and ready to fight, he didn't notice that the parchment in his pocket showed new words: "The moment it is included in the game, your body belongs to me!" Fang Yu's acquaintance from the same neighborhood, Uncle Zhou, said nothing after greeting Fang Yu and chatting for a few words. Unexpectedly, I discovered that a series of numbers appeared above myself and others, like some kind of countdown... There was a period in the past few years when various online game novels were very prosperous, and many excellent works appeared. "Game helmets" were a commonly used prop in many online game novels. However, with the exploration of this subject, almost all the creative ideas that can be written have been written, and this subject has gradually become silent. When I saw the gaming helmet as a prop at the beginning of this novel, I felt sincerely affectionate. As I continued reading, I found that it actually combined some of the ideas of the popular novel "I Have an Adventure House" to enhance the sense of urgency and readability of the beginning. Coupled with the fact that game content has come to reality, which has often appeared in recent years and is also very popular, the readability of this book has been greatly improved, and the room for imagination is huge. In terms of overall style, this book tends to be relaxed, passionate, and sometimes even a bit nonsensical, and is intended for a wide range of readers. What is particularly worth mentioning is that the author updates very quickly and promises to update 5 times a day. Friends who are accustomed to reading should be able to enjoy it. Recommendation Index★★★{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

I feel like the second sister will also be the main force in the future.

I feel that the title of the book should be changed to, "Being a grandson from when I saw the blood bar", invincible as a ghost, it does not have the feeling of getting away from "The Ultimate Demon". The protagonist is being a grandson the whole time, and he adds dark blue all day long.

The landlady is dead, and so is Ding Hui. No one can be trusted in the real world. In the game, humans don't trust, and monsters don't trust either. One person can fight against the whole world and then be moved, right? What on earth are you writing?

Now that I have read more than 140 chapters, this second sister is too troublesome, so hurry up and reduce her appearance. Once the second sister appears, the plot is so boring, and the interaction is so awkward. Or you should find the elder brother quickly and ask him to take him with him. A player will ask an NPC to tie him up. It is a waste of time and energy, haha

The landlady's character is outrageous. Then, it is very unscientific for the protagonist's character to sacrifice himself to save others. And orthopedics? Playing a game is to improve real life, but the protagonist wastes development time and money for NPCs, which is outrageous. I have to say that the protagonist is a good person, but at the beginning, I couldn't think of joining in even if what happened to the shopkeeper's wife happened. And then, aren't there too many innocent people killed directly for experience points? Of course, if you have to say that beautiful NPCs have special privileges and deserve to be played by protagonists who don't prioritize reality, then I have nothing to say. Finally, if the heroine is Ding Hui, I can accept it. What else is written? The suggestions were all cut off, and they all seemed outrageous.

I thought it was a cool article, but it turned out that it was not. The first part was pretty good, but then it became more and more off-topic. Although I have been getting stronger, most of the time I encountered big problems, I relied on others to sacrifice their lives to save them, and I could only bully those who were weaker than myself. Most of the whole plot was just drifting with the flow and being beaten without any ability to fight back. I was walking on thin ice, running around with my head in my hands, and was in danger. I was scared by all kinds of monsters and ancestors like my grandson, let alone invincible 😰

He was asked to work as an undercover agent among demons, but what did the protagonist do? Not a single piece of information was given from the beginning to the end... He was given a salary, a house, a status, and the information was kept confidential The protagonist discovers that the demon is moving, the protagonist: It's time to have some fun, haha The protagonist discovers that the head of the Lin family is dead, the protagonist: Is it still too late for me to run away now? The protagonist discovers that the Li family has become a demon base. The protagonist: Who should I take with me to run away? The protagonist discovers that the Bonfire Club and the Tang Sect are colluding with demons. Protagonist: Do I want to balance the demons and humans?

Is it really possible for anyone to read a book without thinking? Or is it just for brainless people? The data is so good, I just gritted my teeth and read Chapter 27. What the hell is this? ? ? Is it so profitable to write a book? ? ?

The current exact information People: flowers, plants and trees demon: cold and heat, dryness and prosperity spirit: wheel chanting, hollow pearl wisdom People who kill people have evil aura to attract demons, and demons kill people with evil aura to attract spirits.       ；， Humans have their limits Demons also have their limits. When the demon is trained to the point where the avatar is completely human, it can gather the status of immortals and Buddhas by earning merit. Guess Spirits are God's servants. They can be said to be species close to God, or God's dependents, equivalent to angels. So maybe the seventh level of spirit is God? (The spirit god who came to the world from the previous spirit god) So why do spirits kill demons? It may be similar to the Western Holy See killing wizards and heretics. Or maybe the spirit complements the characteristics of the demon and becomes a god? Why do demons kill people? Maybe demons can become immortals and Buddhas by complementing people's characteristics and merits. Human Xinling may also supplement its own characteristics, thereby emerging from the cocoon and becoming an immortal. I also know of other friends who would like to correct me.

In the first 200 chapters, at least half of the people ran away because of this stupid second sister role.

It's such a mess, it feels like AI is writing it

Is the protagonist still getting beaten later? It's written that he is invincible but the armor with the thickest stack just ends up being beaten, right? Then the protagonist is not smart enough and can only practice rubbish skills with lower values ​​than others? Is this the case later?

The biggest failure of my book is Qing Yao. With the abilities of the protagonist, he can be a great gamer in real life. He can own a rich girl, a car and a house. In the game, he can be a spy and eat resources to develop. He is not entangled in his heart. It is a completely refreshing article and easy to write. Readers love to read it! It's nothing to have a green demon, a little Baga with his hands stained with human blood, the protagonist got so powerful that he could kill monsters and upgrade, and the green demon's strength also increased so quickly. How many people do you think he has eaten? The more brotherly love you show here, the more awkward it becomes for readers. Even now you don't know how to control it. There are more and more people scolding you. Do you still want to write about your brotherly love?

This book is really okay and very interesting. Don't hesitate to read it.