I Have 99 Innate Treasures

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I have finished reading the latest chapter. I personally like the behind-the-scenes setting. However, there are many points in the book that could be improved. The author can take a look at my suggestions and try to improve them if they are useful. If not, please ignore them. 1. The behind-the-scenes flow is about control. After the protagonist distributes the treasure, he will leave it alone and let the situation develop. This is not called behind-the-scenes flow. Writing in this way will be very scattered and without a center. In these chapters, Laomo has obviously used more pens recently, and the protagonist is nowhere to be seen. At a small level, it means that the protagonist obtains resources and merits for cultivation, and at a large level, it means that the protagonist is a person who has fun, saves the common people, destroys the world, etc. The protagonist is required to connect other characters. It does not mean that the protagonist gets the benefits of upgrading the treasure. Otherwise, why do we need a protagonist? 2. Now that the treasure is distributed, whoever gets it will belong to him. This is not in line with the nature of the treasure at all. For example, the Golden Cudgel is regarded as a treasure of human merits for measuring the water levels of rivers and seas from Dayu, and it is regarded as a cudgel to break the bonds from Wukong. In the book, it is a magic weapon that can swallow metal and allow the old man to leapfrog and beat people. What difference does it make if I change the name and call it the Ruyi Panlong Cudgel or the Mace. Wouldn't it be okay to use figures like Dayu and Sun Wukong to determine all the waters in the world? There is a simple way. The author can choose a suitable candidate based on the legend of the treasure. Create a destiny for the treasure, and the person who gets it must fulfill this destiny. For example, the meritorious lotus is about transforming evil people, and this author can write it well. The newly released demon refining pot gives a demon clan destiny, allowing the demon clan to get it and create more demon clans. Or in turn, give a human to destroy all the monsters in the world. Come up with a Buddhist treasure and create a real Buddhist to clean up the dirt of Buddhism. Give a side sect a treasure, give a side sect a genius, and give all living beings a chance. It is also possible to send treasures to geniuses from different schools such as Taoism, Buddhism, Confucianism, witches, demons, etc., And let them collide for the sake of cultivation, preaching, saving lives, and destroying the world. 3. Don't rush to add treasures. You can't finish the ninety-nine. The previous one about traveling through ninety-nine worlds is also abbreviated. Either stand up the image of the owner of the treasure in front and then write something else, or write a few more treasures in a row, pull out a few of the geniuses in your background board, and write them at the same time. It will be even more uncomfortable for you to not be able to get up or down like this. Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it.

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I said in another book review that after I saw the latest chapter, I was going to open a separate post in the hope that the author would read it. Your book relies on the Golden Cudgel to draw traffic, and it relies on the Golden Cudgel to open the book. As a result, the first owner of the Golden Cudgel, I honestly see that he is not worthy of the stick now. Any Chinese teenager who has watched Journey to the West should have a filter for the Golden Cudgel, right? The impression of him is not just his weight, his transformation, his spirituality. And what his master did while using it. Sun Wukong used him to go all the way to become a fighting and conquering Buddha, which included many milestone battles. He fought in the Dragon Palace against the Heavenly Palace to defeat demons and eliminate demons, and even finally became a Buddha without changing weapons. So far, I haven't seen any shining points in the character given to him by such a person's weapon... It can be said that the characterization is not enough, or the character's growth curve is too boring. You can't really just let him pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger and rely on sticks to kill people who are just a little bit higher. Let's be the male protagonist of Xiaobai Wenlong Aotian... The unpleasant truth about him having no tactics and being played by high-level officials is very similar to the conspiracy theory of Journey to the West, but the actual inner drama is two extremes from that of Sun Wukong. One is intolerant of everything. If the top management makes me unhappy, I will fall out with you and ruin the day. The other is tolerant of everything. If I can't bear it anymore, I will explode when I have the strength... To be honest, if it were me, I would still like the former style because it is more like a great sage. The most important thing is that it feels like he is really not very smart and has no brains... He can't see clearly about himself or the situation. Coupled with a group of other supporting characters who know the truth about the world and cause trouble, it seems that he is particularly unworthy of possessing the Golden Cudgel. Even if you change him to Xing Tian/Chi You's weapon, I think it's acceptable, because these two people represent this kind of image. But it is a pity that the Golden Cudgel, as a weapon with a filter, is given to people like this who I don't like. The good and evil sides of the model worker are brought out by the Golden Lotus of Merit, which is a very good design. No matter how you add drama to him, it will not make people feel inconsistent with the character. Although the octopus one feels a bit like "the world is so small" and the whereabouts of the treasures are all connected by a thread, it makes sense in a novel. Jin Ren can now see that it will definitely be given to the emperor in the end, so there is no problem. The protagonist can leave himself a person with displacement ability/enhancement method that is easy to trigger. After all, if you want to give the protagonist a picture, then he must be interesting when he collides with other treasures, right? Also, I am very worried. If 50 of the 99 treasures are scattered, then 50 perspectives will need to be written later, and even the gods will not be able to write well. I think we can consider using more of the well-developed supporting characters in the past to open up more imaginations. For example, if you combine the advancement of the Demon Refining Pot with the creature creation of Wahuang Clay, wouldn't it be the Frankenstein of the immortal world? Another example is suppressive magic weapons such as the Eastern Emperor Bell and the Heaven-turning Seal, which are paired with a human race bag/jade bottle/purple gold gourd. Right, Arcana will fight more and cooperate, and the left foot will step on the right foot to improve. Wouldn't it be nice if you felt better?

In fact, to be honest, it is better to change it directly into a combination weapon, such as changing Pangu Fan to 12 Dutian Fan, and changing Golden Cudgel to Hunyuan Yiqi Stick. Who has the fusion of four magic weapons? Only by reuniting these four divine weapons into one can they be turned into an innate treasure, the innate five elements.

So, do you guys have any recommended treasures?

Why is the innate treasure called innate? Because they were born naturally when the heaven and earth first opened, or because they existed before Pangu opened the sky. Nothing can be called an innate treasure. What is refined the day after tomorrow is called the acquired treasure, or the acquired spiritual treasure. Maybe their abilities are stronger than those of innate spiritual treasures. Fusing Hongmeng Purple Qi will make you innate? Are you kidding me?

This protagonist is a real loser, his IQ is impressive, and he does some deceptive things.

I just read dozens of chapters. The subject matter is really good and the writing is okay But the plot is a little bit poisonous. Firstly, the feedback is a bit subtle. The golden cudgel only feeds back one spiritual root. It doesn't matter if you have a few thousand spiritual roots. You don't need the skills. There is nothing wrong with practicing, considering that it is necessary to survive for a long time, but it is not worthy of the title of "treasure". In the later stage, you can consider blessing magical powers; Secondly, the position of the protagonist is unclear. Is he simply a tool for discovering the treasure? At present, it makes no difference whether there are pig's feet or not. This book lacks the motivation or theme of pig's feet. Whether it is saving the world, mending the sky, replaying the role of the treasure, or driving the world to dimensionality, etc., There must be something reliable that connects the pig's feet with action. Even if it's the pleasure addiction of pig's feet: watching people get and lose treasures, or the bottom counterattack, the villain's counterattack, etc. The third is the world structure. A small court can monitor the world. The world view of this world is a bit small. Even if the author thinks how awesome this world is, in the text, the court is just a martial arts world structure, because the structure is not much different from that of martial arts novels. The text must be slowly revealed and constantly consciously instilled. For example, how many cities have several Qi training periods. At present, there are too many immortal cultivators in the mortal world. They are not qualified and are just like the professionals in Western Fantasy. Considering that there are more than 90 treasures in the later stage, how can this world withstand the tossing, or that the top powerhouses are exposed as soon as they come out, and the world view will naturally appear small. (For example, if it weren't for Zhetian, it would be so rare to see an emperor. There would be dozens of emperors as soon as they came out, and they would have lost all their strength. They were all based on constant comparison.) At least the Earth Immortal directly restrained the mortals from those cities to the cave sky, and let them die of old age naturally. The result is like an incompetent background board issuing tasks. In short, the subject matter is good, but the plot needs to be strengthened. (Especially when I join the Demon Slayer Division, it's a little bit toxic. It feels like I'm being arranged for a plot. I'm very passive and have no ability to resist. When I encounter the kind of pig's feet that I'd rather kill by mistake, I'm going to get sick.)

I'm also drunk that the innate treasure can be promoted

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the author's focus is completely off-center. The ability of the treasure itself is the focus. Now I am just writing about upgrades and feedback. As a treasure, it should have some abilities that can be blessed by the user. For example, adding a golden cudgel to the user will gain the same strength and physique as the weight of the secondary treasure. This can also round out some unreasonable places.

The innate treasure Ruyi Golden Cudgel✘ A stick that can swallow and become stronger✔

Do you know the shortcomings of this novel? That is to say, the protagonist does not need to become stronger quickly, but only needs to be slow. Therefore, it is best for your protagonist to give up most of the benefits to the tool man, but you now own 90% of it. It is foreseeable that the protagonist's strength will inevitably increase rapidly, and you have to suppress the protagonist's level. You might as well focus on those who hold the treasure. Write the protagonist as a tool man, and occasionally rely on the treasure to show off.

I haven't read it yet, I only read the introduction. Just talk about the problems inside. The innate treasures are the Golden Cudgel and the Kyushu Point. Can it be innate? Isn't it all made by the day after tomorrow? 😅 We talk about the concept of innate and acquired. Shouldn't the innate be naturally generated between heaven and earth? 😅 For example, Pangu Ax and Qinglian Sword

This is a novel with a crazy number of words. If you want to read it, be careful with your wallet.

After reading more than 200 chapters, the story was well written, but the Innate Treasure felt so weak that Lao Huo had no sense of its existence. It felt like it was giving me a Star Destroyer Cannon, but it was actually like a shit stick. Without this Innate Treasure, it would not affect the development of the plot. I personally feel that it should be every treasure holder who gets the Innate Treasure. Because the Arcana is very powerful, other bosses will feel scared and intimidated. Even if you work on it for a long time, there is nothing powerful. The introduction to the Arcana is very unfair. It gives me the feeling that the pictures are for reference only and the actual product shall prevail. I bought a Star Destroyer Cannon but the delivery was a plastic toy.

There is one thing I must mention. Doesn't the innate treasure describe being born from heaven and earth? The Twelve Golden Man and King Yu's Cauldron, which are made from the world's gold, shouldn't be called acquired treasures. No, they are not qualified enough. Shouldn't they be called acquired treasures?

The disadvantages are a bit smaller. The most important thing is that it is too watery. I have to write the settings over and over again. Comrades with small wallets can run away. And after three hundred chapters, the protagonist is still Jin Dan? The story only progresses a few months. Turn it over and over again and it will be the number of water characters.

I feel that the biggest flaw of this book is that the protagonist is an individual, or that the protagonist is directly involved in the story (and the protagonist himself is not invincible. The upgrade content of the protagonist makes me think that the protagonist is the competitor of the treasure holder rather than the mastermind behind the scenes.), And there is no sense of calmness as the mastermind behind the scenes. This makes the behind-the-scenes novel feel a bit half-baked. (It would be nice if the protagonist is the way of heaven or the will of the world itself, and the purpose is to strengthen the world by distributing treasures) Moreover, the chapter about the protagonist's upgrade is too long, and the plot of the treasure holder is divided, making it difficult for me to get into a fixed character when reading the article. Usually group portrait articles will have several main characters (treasure holders in this article), and their highlights will be mainly described in specific events, and then move to the events of the next character. (At this time in this article, there is usually content about the protagonist's upgrade, which separates the events of the treasure holder. As a result, my emotions towards the previous character were watered down before I could lay the groundwork for it)

The protagonist is the owner of so many treasures, but he lives a miserable life

He really, I cried to death, actually gave 10% of the share to the holders of the treasure, a conscientious capitalist.

The man stood on the left, the woman on the right, and started robbing the characters! Do you want to appear in the book? Please post it~ Race, name, gender, origin, and cultivation. I will choose some interesting characters and become the holders of the treasure... To participate in the subsequent plot!

After working on it for a long time, it still feels unsatisfactory, but it feels like it should be right.

Author, are you alive? Did you just update a chapter today?

Wait until the end to watch it, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to get stuck halfway through.

This author is very spiritual. . .

The setting is good, probably written by a newcomer. Come on, author, polish it well and look forward to your next work.

I put this book into the collection of eunuchs a year ago. Unexpectedly, a year later, this eunuch actually grew out? !

Not even a word. If it's updated, I'll keep it; if it's not, I'll delete it.

The book is good. If the author were a eunuch, you would have told me earlier. If you were still making this kind of money, the update speed would be a bit unsightly. But I'll still give you the monthly pass