I Am a Divine Constable in the Comprehensive Martial World

After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I still don't understand why the protagonist becomes a policeman. What is the main plot? You are not a courier in the system, and there is no reward for catching a thief. You have found the Liancheng Jue treasure and you are not short of money. Why are you a courier? You don't have to be a policeman to act chivalrously. As for martial arts, his brother can take Zhang Wuji as his teacher. He also knows all kinds of secrets, so it is not difficult to find a suitable martial arts. There is absolutely no reason to be a policeman.

After reading it for free, I bought a few paid chapters. How can I put it, there is no main line, or the main line came out too late and I haven't seen it yet. I can't find the motivation of the protagonist at all. The protagonist does not have a clear short-term goal. It can be said that events push the protagonist forward. It is a bit like the way of writing daily novels. When encountering events, The incident is solved, but it doesn't have the leisurely feeling of a daily novel. The protagonist's character is not that of a daily novel, and the events encountered are not the relaxed events of a daily novel. If I have to give an example, it's a bit like Detective Conan, the death of an elementary school student who explodes wherever he goes, but Conan also has a main plot of the Man in Black.

Is this book written too retro? The taste is quite decent, but why can't I read it?

Shen Lian's gun looks like this

Dream of Red Mansions

I still like this invitation the most, it's domineering enough

The writing is good, but it is too messy. There are too many villains. There will definitely be friction and fighting among these gangs. Generally, 1 or 2 are enough. You have done too much. Daming's strength is not very strong. The Six Doors, Jinyiwei, even if you add Shenhou Mansion, Dongchang, and Xichang, it seems that it is not very sufficient. Overall, it feels too chaotic.

There are not many chapters and no plot. There are too many characters and too many forces. They die too quickly. There is not much description of the characters and forces. The concept of the characters and the situation of the forces all depends on the reader's understanding of the original work? 😰

This is the number one scholar

There are a lot of dialogues in this book, and there is no description of who said it, and there is no description of facial expressions or movements in the dialogue scenes. It makes me a headache to read. If you want to learn from Gu Long, the characters talk too much.