I Am a Divine Constable in the Comprehensive Martial World

I read twenty or thirty chapters but still didn't understand why the protagonist became a constable. What exactly is the main storyline? You're not a constable system. There's no reward for catching thieves, and you've already found the treasure of Liancheng Jue and you're not short of money. What's the point of being a constable? You don't need to be a constable to uphold justice.

I've read the free chapters and bought a few paid ones. To be honest, it feels like there's no main plot, or the main plot appears too late for me to see. I can't find the protagonist's motivation at all; the protagonist doesn't have a clear short-term goal.

Is this book a bit too retro? It has a great feel to it, but why can't I get into it?

Shen Lian's gun is roughly like this.

The Dream of the Red Chamber Team

I still like this one, Yaoyue, the one is so domineering.

The writing is good, but it's too chaotic. There are too many villains. These gangs are bound to have friction and conflicts. Usually, one or two villains would be enough, but you've included too many. The forces on the surface aren't quite enough. Even if you add the Six Doors, the Embroidered Uniform Guard, the Divine Marquis's Mansion, the Eastern Depot, and the Western Depot, it still doesn't seem sufficient. Overall, it feels too chaotic.

There aren't many chapters, and the plot is sparse, yet too many characters and factions have appeared, and they all die far too quickly. There's not much description of the characters or factions; the understanding of their personalities and the nature of their power relies entirely on the reader's familiarity with the original work. 😰

This is what a top scholar should be like!

This book has a lot of dialogue, but it doesn't tell who is speaking, and there's no description of expressions or actions in the dialogue scenes. It's a headache to read. If it's trying to imitate Gu Long, then the characters talk way too much.