Across the Heavens, Starting with My Own Swordsman

All three of this author's novels are mediocre. The protagonists are unremarkable; they're always just as talented as everyone else, have great charisma as everyone else, and are stronger in martial arts than everyone else. It takes skill to write the protagonists like supporting characters in all three books.

Whether the Overwhelming Force can defeat the Sunflower Acupuncture Technique depends on whether Guo Furong or Guo Juxia uses it; whether the Spiritual Rhinoceros Finger can catch Little Li's Flying Dagger depends on whether Li Xunhuan or Li Huai uses it.

This is the first time I've seen a protagonist train their lightness skill to the point of leaving no trace on snow and landing with a sound, all for the sake of Hua Manlou.

Personally, I think that "My Own Swordsman" could be linked with "Magic Phone," which would reconcile the time travel storyline and broaden the scope of the project.

Actually, the author wrote quite well in all aspects, except for one thing: although the martial arts techniques are clearly very powerful and the protagonist's combat results are impressive, they lack the artistic conception of these powerful techniques. It feels like he's just using ordinary skills.

When I watch Gu Long's dramas now, what impresses me most is: the inflation is too severe, with millions of taels of silver being used all the time, it's as if silver is not considered money!

I've wanted to complain about this for a long time, dude. Hybrid species aren't necessarily infertile. You've written in both of your books that they're infertile. In the last book, it's normal that the lion and camel couldn't mate. The problem is that ligers can't mate with each other, but the problem is that they can still have offspring with tigers and lions.

Is it possible that Ah Fa is the Monkey King, and Li Xunhuan is Erlang Shen, or Yang Jian?

Bringing people through time was the biggest mistake.

Hahahaha, there's this book called "Starting with Nine Swords in the Heavens," and the opening scene with the Little Li Flying Knife is a complete rip-off of yours! Hahahaha, it's unbelievable! When people say he plagiarized, he just argues back, hahahaha! 😄