Mystery Revival: The Darkness of This World

Dude, I couldn't find your book even if I specifically searched for "Mysterious Revival" and clicked "updates within three days." You're writing this much purely out of love, that's amazing!

Native protagonist? That's not really my style.

The following instances have been removed: The Ghost in the Room Incident, The Foreign Captain's Side Quest, River God Temple, and The Horror Wax Museum... Added instances: Five Burials, The Face Threader, The Hairdresser Corpse, The Horror Wax Museum, The Vegetable Market, Ghostly Shadows, Riddled with Holes...

Your book is quite opportunistic. You try to express the despair of the original world by describing the perspective of a lowly ghost tamer, combined with your original plot and new fan-created settings. The content is well-written, but what I find flawed is that you abandoned the well-developed protagonist from the previous hundreds of chapters and changed him into a boy and girl with one body…

The protagonist is utterly useless. It's not that you can't write minor characters, but every time the protagonist rushes in and then just lies there, waiting for someone else to clean up the mess, then they switch to some random NPC's perspective to pad the word count. What kind of skill does the author have to write an ensemble piece?

Although it's not very good, it's free 😰

It's well-written. This is the first story I've read that describes how an ordinary person in charge struggles with paranormal events. It's not the kind of story where the protagonist has an amazing destiny. Although the protagonist has grievances and anger towards headquarters, he is still willing to fight on the front lines of paranormal events for the sake of the general public.

There's a reason I couldn't sign the contract: it's too bland, completely lacking the tension that should accompany a mysterious revival. I forced myself to read ten chapters, but I still couldn't bring myself to continue.

It's amazing that he managed to write over 400 chapters without a contract.

The plot is too bland and lacks highlights. Even just running through the Ghost Post Office dungeon a few times would have been better. The writing about ghosts is also unimpressive.