Mystery Revival: The Haunted Tower Guarding the World

It's well-written. The protagonist has normal intelligence, and there are no haphazard changes to the original setting. I haven't found any major flaws yet. If you continue to maintain this high level of quality, no one in the Mysterious Revival fanfiction genre can compare to you. Anything like "The Mysterious Revival" or "The Infiltrator" is utterly incomparable. Only recently has "The King's Spiritual Insight" been able to rival you.

I've read up to chapter 154 so far, it's really hard to break down... It's clear the author wants to establish a kind-hearted character for the protagonist, calling it having a broad perspective, but isn't it just for him to play a minor role in the main storyline? 😅 Also, what does the author think a Ghost Master is? Is it a human or a ghost? Can a Ghost Master even be considered human?

The tag says "invincible novel," but after reading a few chapters, I didn't see where the invincibility came from. Don't tell me it becomes invincible later on; which book's protagonist doesn't become invincible in the end? Does that mean they're all invincible novels? Han Li also becomes invincible later on, so can we say that "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" is also an invincible novel?

They were unwilling to completely abandon the benefits of the original storyline, yet dared not make any major moves; He's given himself an extreme concern for human life, yet he dares not touch Yang Jian because, theoretically, Yang Jian has already killed tens of thousands of people.

There's a reason it's not popular; not many people enjoy watching a "saintly mother" character in a mysterious resurrection story.

Haunted Building

It's not very interesting, so the haunted building serves no purpose other than aiding in recovery. Wouldn't it have been better to just control it directly? Aside from a rotting creature, it has no other abilities, its strength isn't outstanding, and the atmosphere of terror isn't strong enough. It's a bit hard to read. Also, the emotional transitions are too abrupt.

I feel there's a problem that needs addressing. First, the protagonist is a time traveler and knows the plot. Second, the protagonist has a truly saintly personality. However, from the reader's perspective, even though the protagonist has read the original work and knows certain things, he could have warned about them in advance to avoid them, which fits the protagonist's character.

The previous protagonist was a disgusting character with warped values ​​who indiscriminately killed innocent people. This one is even more nauseating, turning into a complete hypocrite who constantly sacrifices himself for others. He acts like a saint during the mysterious resurrection, which is insane. Is it so hard to give the protagonist a normal persona?

The tag says "invincible novel," and you call this an invincible novel?