Mystery Revival: Idealism Invades

It's boring. The protagonist seems to be very strong, but the author is still led by the headquarters in what he writes. All the resources requested in the first part are spent on handling supernatural events for the headquarters. Later, the author doesn't know what the protagonist can get from the headquarters, so he simply asks Wang Xiaoming to give the protagonist some guesses and let the protagonist deal with the enhanced version of the ghost. The main character is not in good condition but he still messes around. If he is not dead, it can only be said that the author forced cheating. You can find suitable puzzles wherever you go shopping.

For now, this book can actually be read, but I am not looking forward to the future content of the book, because I have not seen anything that I find particularly interesting. The content I have written so far is pretty good, but at this pace, I feel that the readers will run away as you write. I think there is no problem in writing this book with the author's persistence, so in order to make this book less eye-catching in the future, I have some personal details here People suggest Don't care too much about the headquarters in the mysterious world of recovery. This official organization is actually not popular in the world of recovery. Although the headquarters is powerful and has diverse and powerful functions, it is too restrictive for the protagonist. Wouldn't it be more comfortable for you to work alone? Is it possible that the protagonist can still be written to death by the author? Well, joining the headquarters is indeed a good way out. It can have more guarantees, resource support and so on. Then the protagonist can do things normally, don't be too active, and don't always think about saving people. Ordinary people who are mysteriously resurrected are still going to die when encountering supernatural events. It doesn't matter if they die more, just don't die all. You have to have a mindset. Only when you are strong can you fight against ghosts more efficiently. This requires There can't be too many dangers in the early stage, so you don't want to write that the protagonist goes up and fights desperately for some ordinary people. This will make it look too dramatic. People who watch Mysterious Resurrection fandom are probably not good people and are not willing to read this. If you have to write a story about saving ordinary people, just portray other characters in the original work. It's OK for the protagonist not to be stupid, and the protagonist can have such an idea. When the protagonist is strong enough, he can resurrect all the ordinary people who died in the supernatural. Of course, this does not mean that you should not rescue people in all situations. Just make a little judgment and call for support if you can't handle it. If you feel that it is not possible, just run away. Wang Xiaoming appears too frequently in this book. If I were the protagonist, I guess I would be planning how to kill Wang Xiaoming without being chased by the headquarters. You have to know that readers put themselves into the protagonist, and they will definitely not like someone who can often see through themselves hanging around them. Moreover, the reason and frequency of Wang Xiaoming's appearance in the article are somewhat unreasonable. You are forcing the plot. The content of the plot is too bland. Although you have written multiple supernatural events in a row, due to your poor description of the horror atmosphere, the supernatural events do not bring much sense to the readers. It feels like watching, you know, you have to learn some techniques to embody the horror of supernatural events, write about the critical psychology of the protagonist when facing difficulties, test the rules of killing, and try to solve the supernatural events yourself. Also, the protagonist's abilities are not clearly reflected. I still don't understand how the protagonist can pass through those supernatural events without any injuries. Well, it should be the one used by the clone. What are the attack methods? The protagonist's current status, goals, and environment are all a bit vague. It is recommended to write them in pieces in the following chapters. The protagonist's goals must be clear, otherwise you will not know what the protagonist is doing. One of the attractive aspects of Mysterious Resurrection is the supernatural confrontation in it. It is really boring to kill and kill. It is best for the protagonist to develop some supernatural auxiliary functions and make some supernatural items, or the protagonist has the ability to suppress the resurrection of evil ghosts. In short, in addition to being able to fight, the protagonist must also have other excellent supernatural abilities, otherwise he will be a fool.

I didn't want to read it after seeing Chapter 8. Living by corroding others is no different from supernatural events 🤫

The plot is a bit messy, the logic is there but a bit vague. Overall, it feels like the protagonist has been arranged clearly. This is the effect of the author's over-arrangement of coincidental plots. He is arranged to control ghosts at the beginning, and then finds the puzzle. This is too deliberate, and the protagonist seamlessly transitions too quickly. Ordinary people directly become the person in charge and work diligently, and then continue to be manipulated by the headquarters. Then he was manipulated by Wang Xiaoming. This is very bad. The protagonist cares too much about the responsibility of the person in charge. There is no need to rush to the front line for everything. If you feel that it is not working, just call for support. It's better to be the main character and not work. What you wrote feels like the protagonist owes the headquarters, and he does not get any benefits without being able to do his best. The point is that the protagonist's strength has not improved, and it seems that he is working in vain. Although there are many shortcomings, there is room for explanation. At present, they are all small problems, but there are also big problems. It is just not fun, and it is not interesting to read. The author's description of the horror atmosphere is not good enough. The plot seems bland and a bit tasteless. The author's level is still good. From the current point of view, if the protagonist only needs to be reorganized and less manipulated, the overall quality of the book can still be improved. Moreover, there are few words now, and it may be able to take off directly with a few changes.

The protagonist is quite cold and decisive in the first few pictures, but then he becomes extremely responsible from the vegetable market and becomes crazy and transfer money to the headquarters, which is equivalent to working in vain? ? ?

It's over 30 chapters, and the more I read, the less I want to read it. The protagonist becomes less and less independent and has no goals of his own. He has foresight but no plan on how to become stronger. The newly opened dungeons are all useless nonsense. Firstly, it is not fun. Secondly, there is nothing to help the protagonist become stronger. It feels like the number of words is just scraped together. Also, don't compare yourself with the author of the original work or the main character of the original work. If you can't compare with them, they will become gods and it's easy for them to get into trouble. People in Yangjian have their own unique charisma, but you, the protagonist, lack a lot of it. To be honest, your personality and performance are far from enough. You have to have some principles in everything you do, and being the protagonist even more so. To be honest, the protagonist in this book doesn't have any principles, at least for now.

You must at least have a reason to kill decisively. Don't say he is harming you, he is provoking you and you are not in good condition, so there is nothing wrong with killing him. As a result, when you go out and see a store clerk who greets you, you kill him... Isn't this so crazy? Don't talk about the worldview, that's how it is. None of the respectable ghost masters in the original book kill people for no reason. Those who kill randomly are just cannon fodder passers-by who will be finished soon. What's the difference between random killings and ghosts? I'm here to see people control ghosts, not to see ghosts control people. Fang Yuan killed someone because the other person was in the way or had value. You are simply sick.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that in order to suppress the strength of the protagonist, it abandons the excitement and plot logic of the plot. For example: In the beginning, the protagonist's weakness is ghosts. As a time traveler, the protagonist can obviously control a ghost with ghosts, but the author just doesn't arrange it. If you write like this, it is impossible to get results in that type of book. As an analogy for the mysterious resurgence, how many chapters did it take for the protagonist to die as a ghost? Others also wrote a lot. In summary, it is difficult to distinguish the priorities. You should study how to make the plot of the dungeon more vivid, rather than studying how to suppress the protagonist's strength and make the novel longer (the plot is well researched, and the length will be longer by the way. Now you are just discarding the basics and giving up the fun points and the protagonist's IQ. The plot is longer, but it is not attractive.). I was very optimistic about this fanfic at the beginning. There were no other elements. However, I didn't read much of the basic plot. I skipped through it, and I didn't read it after Chapter 50. Not to mention that the plot was not attractive at all, and instead gave me a sense of being brainless and disgusting.

After seeing about 100 pictures, I felt that the main character's power of expression was very weak, and sometimes he felt like he had no sense of existence, like a passerby. A random ghost would stump the main character, and he would die on the spot if an incident happened. The original attractive thing about the beginning was that the main character controlled the idealistic ghosts and had a ghost domain, and then the infinite superposition gave people a very awesome posture, and it almost turned into a refresh monster.

I consider myself not a Holy Mother, and I will not offend others unless they offend me, but I must have three views. First of all, it is the early stage of recovery. Will the headquarters invite the protagonist to do this? It would be nice not to give a warning or send someone to kill him, right?