Master of the Fountain of Youth: The Path to Immortality Begins as a Daoist Novice

Personal complaints Other places are fine, but the pet in your last picture made me vomit. First of all, all the resources he needed to transform were given by the protagonist. What right does he have to be angry and blame the protagonist? Secondly, there are definitely not so many people scolding Qingniu for not transforming. You actually transformed in the first place. It can only be said to be a failure. Even if you transform, you still write disgusting things.

The previous article was very good, I stayed up late to follow it. There is a bull coming from behind, it disgusts me to death. This guy eats the protagonist's stuff, takes advantage of the protagonist's stuff, alienates him in various ways, and blames the protagonist.                       ，，，，                                                                                                                                                                               but I keep a dog at home to look after the home and care for the house. This ox is really poisonous. It is so poisonous that even Shen Nong could poison it to death. Even more white-eyed wolf than white-eyed wolf. If I were the protagonist, if this cow doesn't survive one chapter, it will be turned into steak, sprinkled with cumin, and have some beer.        ，，，，， Run away first and come back after the protagonist has finished eating the steak.

Why is it all the same routine? After a short stay, the family will be wiped out and run away.

Now that I have read it, I can see how toxic it is. The protagonist is wonderfully called the middle-aged man. He has countless divine objects and bears the sworn hatred of heaven and earth. However, he is not as perfect as others at the age of 22. The protagonist is also 62 years old and achieves great success. At 82 years old, he forgets the hatred of heaven and has no wisdom. Er, one might say that it is the dregs of heaven and earth, a waste of 60 drops of the divine fountain of youth. One drop can make you 20 years younger. A 20% chance of accumulating experience. Sixty times and sixty defeats. When you first taste it, you will be shocked, shocked, angry, and incurable. In short, it is better to taste the poisonous weed and go away!

The sect is looking good, what will you write after it is destroyed?

The old book is not finished and will not be updated, so I secretly start a new book 🙂

If you keep writing like this, you will probably be close to being a eunuch. Forget about the lack of updates, the quality of the plot has dropped rapidly in the past two days. First, a female protagonist appeared inexplicably (although she was under the guise of practicing law), and then an enemy appeared to take advantage of her and deal damage to her spiritual pet. It doesn't mean that these two plots cannot be written. If the writing is good, you can add more space. If the writing is poor and you have to write it hard, it will be "you have a way to kill yourself." This kind of plot makes readers very frustrated. Changsheng Goudao doesn't just have to be a "real dog" all the time, endure the pain and finally punch the nursing home. If there are not enough updates, we can only quickly skip this plot. For example, Song was recognized for his magic method, and then it disappeared, Xiao Qing actually betrayed him for various reasons, and then the protagonist's red dust method skyrocketed by leaps and bounds. Otherwise, if you are stuck here and feel aggrieved, another group of people will probably have to leave. I wonder what you think of these two plots?

I'm not optimistic about it, saying that I will do it again as a son later. The protagonist is just young and not a different person. How do you know that others can't find out if you don't know Qingxu Palace? In modern times, there are fingerprints and DNA that really rejuvenate people, and even ID cards can't be obtained. What's more, a sect that has been passed down for a long time may directly lock the soul.

There are several books on The Eunuch, will this one be far behind?

The stuff written in the last two chapters has no other purpose than to disgust people and directly kill most of them.