2006: Reshaping My Life

There is a reason why the author is not popular. Maybe you wrote very carefully, but you used it in the wrong direction. You love to show off your skills too much, polishing a story into something less than a story, and becoming more and more empty. Do you know why Zhou Koutiao's first book is so popular? It is because he has controlled the balance between realism and fantasy, making readers feel happy and close to reality at the same time. If you do not control this balance well, the writing style will become more and more impetuous, and everyone in the story will become less human and more like the exaggerated heroes and villains in idol dramas.

First of all, I must affirm that the author writes fluently and the words are relatively interesting. The brightest points: the main characters are very distinctive, Chen Wan's worries and dependence; Liu Su's girlish feelings; Chu Chu's lack of self-confidence; Shen Ningfei's independence and strength, self-protection and self-taught learning to mobilize public opinion for a better life; Qin Wanyu's appearance as a good girl is actually brave enough to express her own thoughts, Jin Feifei's depression and inner self-confidence caused by lack of care since childhood Currently, I have only seen the part where Jin Xiaoxiao died, so I will only comment on what I have seen 1: There are many plots of the hero saving the beauty (Wu forced Chen Wan, Shen Ningfei twice (in a restaurant, Li Li's birthday), Li Li's birthday)) 2: There are many times where it is clear that the character's background or experience is not simple (the two years after Chen Wan disappeared, the first-year experience between Li Li and the protagonist, who initially lost readers' appetite, and the fifth uncle's experience with a gun). The above two writing methods were written around the 10s. It's not bad, but readers are too familiar with this writing method. Frequent occurrences can easily affect the perception. 3: The author has repeatedly stated that plot development requires logic, but in fact it is already very illogical in 5. Real high school students simply don't have the time and energy to get into the Oiran Ranking 4: Lin Lingshan's family background has no chance of going to an ordinary high school in a northeastern prefecture-level city. Even if you go back to China to study, you will still go to an international school or a provincial key school 5: The level of Internet development in 2007 was not enough to support the takeout business. First, you need to pay for the takeout. But offline payments at that time were still very troublesome. Moreover, it was still a feature phone at the time, and the 3G network had only started piloting in 2008. So in 2006, ordering takeout could only be done via phone or computer, and the number of users was too small. 6: The Internet speed and hardware level at that time were not enough to support live broadcast. Young Lion Network changed to recording and broadcasting, selling paid videos, or free videos, which is more reasonable to earn advertising fees. 7: Deputy Director Wu was shot. He was also the deputy director of a prefecture-level city. He was shot for no reason. According to the actual situation, Dongshan City will face an anti-gang campaign organized by the province. It's impossible to pass it easily 8: Jiulong Group is the main boss in the early stage, but the author never explains what the main business of this group is, but instead portrays them as a gangster. What's the use of engaging in underworld and commercial competition? The underworld is nothing more than the black gloves of someone or some people in the court. To engage them, you need to first find out who is behind them, and then engage them through an exchange of interests. Otherwise, if you engage them yourself, you will offend the people behind them. 9: The author said that the purpose of writing Jin Feifei to death was to give the protagonist a sense of urgency. According to my actual experience. My uncle and aunt who were very good to me in junior high school suddenly passed away in a car accident. When I was a sophomore, a classmate with whom I was usually close suddenly had a heart attack and passed away. Last year, one of my elders who was less than 60 years old also passed away suddenly. These three things only give me a sense of uncertainty, not urgency. So I think writing Jin Feifei to death is a very failure, and it does not achieve the role of giving the protagonist a sense of urgency. If you want to give the protagonist a sense of urgency, you should increase the conflict with the Jiulong Group. In order to be able to fight against the Jiulong Group, the protagonist will naturally have the motivation to expand his career. As for why I gave such a low rating, the main reason is that the previous plots of heroes saving beauties made me feel like I was eating a meal that tasted good, but occasionally I ate something that didn't suit my taste. But seeing Jin Feifei's ending, it was like eating shit all of a sudden. All the bad experiences from the past come flooding back, and the emotions will be more intense.

Let me complain, I read the first few chapters and subscribed to the latest chapters on impulse. Now that I have spent money, I can only bite the bullet and continue reading. Does the author himself understand why this book did not perform well? Because the writing is too pretentious and literary. Harem story, brother, the writing is very good, but you wrote it like this, I am speechless, starting a harem and having pure love at the same time? What do you mean, let Susu and Wanyu choose for themselves, and let the heroine choose for herself after starting a harem? Normal people cannot accept being a mistress, a mistress, a fourth, a fifth, and a sixth. Are you sure you are writing a harem story? Want to send a girl away? Shouldn't the normal operation be to stalk her and not let go? If you don't delete my comment, I guess readers will have no desire to subscribe after seeing this comment. There is a reason for poor grades in books.

The female teacher's design was already very humble, and the secret of rebirth was shared, but now she has to catch up with her lifelong fiancée. I really can't stand the scene of catching up with my lifelong relationship in college. After all, if I am moved by my previous life, it will not be moved by me, and Wanwan's humble Wei Zhen impressed me, but the result is that now there is a new female character who is completely unfamiliar to me, and all the female characters that I had a good impression of in the early stage have been marginalized. I can only say that I can't stand it. I will watch it again when the plot arranged by the author to pursue the touching feelings of my previous life is over.

I was dumbfounded when I opened the character bar. Is the protagonist's waist made of iron?

This is a book worth reading twice.                                                                                                                                                                                                       being neither arrogant nor arrogant, nor being pretentious nor hypocritical, neither being a gentleman nor a villain, just being ourselves. Occasionally, I am lustful and look forward and backward, but I am always focused on it, just so that after rebirth, my thoughts will be clear and I will leave no regrets. Generally speaking, the character creation is more delicate and vivid. There is no pretense or mechanical application. Although there are many girls, they have distinct characteristics and clear priorities. There are many classic scenes, and everyone needs to experience them by themselves~ (I hope everyone can meet their own Chen Xiaowan or Liu Xiaosu or Shen Ningfei...) Because the plot has a lot of foreshadowing, some involve major events, and some involve social and humanities, the writing is not too smooth, but the plot progresses layer by layer, and the sense of satisfaction is overshadowed by waves. The overall narrative style is concise and reasonably detailed, but it does require a little bit of experience and knowledge reserves on the part of the reader, so readers who are used to reading popular and refreshing texts may not be used to it. (As the saying goes, foreplay is too long.) The process is now halfway through, and it is already half a sacred book in my mind. As long as the whale does not die suddenly... Next time I have time, I will write some song list reviews, corresponding to each heroine~

First of all, let's make it clear that urban rebirth writing is a cool writing! It's not a brain-burning article! It's not a suspense story! Not even serious literature! It's a thoroughly enjoyable article! What is the purpose of Shuangwen? Cool! Cool! Still fucking cool! Then it is up to the author to consider how to enjoy it. Some authors write about the protagonist making money with his clever mind and then subjugating beautiful women to enjoy it. Some authors write about the protagonist as an urban soldier king who slaps rich second-generation officials and second-generation officials in the face to conquer beautiful women to enjoy it. Some authors write about male asuras falling in love and spreading dog food to each other to enjoy it There are many, and they have all been reborn. Everyone is here to make up for their regrets, to become famous, and to have beautiful women like clouds At present, it seems that the author of this book is the same, and he also comes to become famous and beautiful. So in my opinion, two parts are needed to achieve this goal: reduce the depressing plot and Increase the characteristics of the novel In my opinion, the author did not do a very good job in the first part We all know that the degree of depression in Shuang novels is generally very low. It does not mean that there are no depressing plots. The depressing plots should be for the sake of comfort, just like Xiao Yan was broken off for the sake of the pleasure of joining the Yunlan Sect, but as for the author, I think Many depressing plots designed by the author serve the characters and the plot, and are intended to promote the growth of the characters, such as Jin Xiaoxiao's death, but they do not solve the depression. In other words, this depression is just a depression for the readers, and there is nothing else to see In fact, depressing plots are not said to be only enjoyable. The solution can also be written very profoundly, but this kind of profoundness is easy to overturn. Everyone has read the novel. You still want to earn my tears, or the tears of separation and death. It will gain you an extra reader, but there is a high probability that you will lose another reader. This is not in line with our original intention and that of the author. In addition, there are actually many depressing emotions. Sections, these are all in the opinion of the beholder and there is no need to say more The second part is actually what attracts me the most about this book. In my own narrow understanding, the author is a bit like a "literary youth". He can write about romance and love in a gentle and meaningful way, and in writing about the emotions between people, he can write in a simple and sincere way. He is letting the dog out. The food and female character creation are really excellent in urban literature nowadays, but it is because of the depressing plot in the first part and the protagonist's occasional madness and cowardice that the book always wanders between fairy grass and poisonous weeds, which makes people want to stop. I think the author should try his best to give full play to his strengths and write about emotions. Good writing should continue, and try to avoid some depressing plots. There is no need to put rationality first, and even excellent writing can't cover up the thin storyline. In fact, I think this book should be more positioned as a daily novel, so that the characteristics of the author's excellent writing can be maximized, but Fangyuan has grown too fast. Now the author's writing is a bit awkward. Since Fangyuan became the chairman, the author still tried to find ways to write daily plots, so why did he get out of the university environment so early? The above are all my personal thoughts, and I don't want to express my displeasure. The author is very tired and hard-working staying up late every day to update. I don't have any money to reward, so I can only subscribe to support. If you feel uncomfortable after reading it, just turn around and forget about it. Don't take it to heart. This is my first time coming to Qidian. I really like this book.

A dozen female protagonists are still not bulldozers?

Alas, most of them are very interesting, but some plots are too poisonous 😅 1. The advance notice that there will be casualties and poisons makes me completely uninterested in watching the plot before the fight with the 0 family. 2. The protagonist made it clear that he wanted to accept two classmates, but he did not emphasize that his choice was not Peking University, resulting in three people choosing the wrong choice. This kind of youth pain literary plot is very inexplicable. 3. Li Xiang was sold by the trafficker without saying a word, and his phone was turned off. This was an outrageous development. People in 2 and 3 are almost sick of stupidity... There are also various kidnapping plots, especially the kidnapper is a standard lecherous villain. The author should know that this is the standard beginning of many Liu Bei's articles.

Damn it! Are the dozens of female protagonists and pig-footed JJs busy coming over?