The Socially Anxious Have No Interest in Romance

So far, I have never seen a bowl of water that is balanced. This lack of balance is not only the hero's, but also the author's. Chen Jinzhi's pain in his native family and difficulties in his career make it easier for him to resonate with the male protagonist, and it is easier for the male protagonist to develop sympathy and guilt. But on the other hand, although Chu Qingmian is said to be a childhood sweetheart, she is only a one-sided childhood sweetheart. Except for having a mother with some mental problems, she is simply perfect. However, such a perfect person cannot be a perfect party in a love triangle, because she does not need much external help from the male protagonist, and she helps him more. When the male protagonist got into trouble because of beating up Chen Jinzhi and her father, Xia Qingmian was used to fish it out. As well as the connections used later in the investigation of the disappearance, it is revealed that Chu Qingmian's status is higher than that of the male protagonist. If we look at the current plot alone, if the male protagonist must choose between the two, Chu Qingmian has no chance of winning, because she still has too little experience of sharing hardships with the male protagonist, and she has not encountered difficulties that can only be solved by two people. Chen Jinzhi's career will be more difficult if she leaves the male protagonist. Although we all know that she will succeed without the male protagonist and may have to pay more, but that was in her previous life. Chen Jinzhi, who has tasted love in this life, may fail in her career due to emotional failure. On the other hand, if Chu Qingmian leaves the male protagonist, what will she lose? There is only love. Her career is protected by her father. Apart from the emotional blow, it will not have any impact on her life on the established track. So the author's position arrangement in character setting is unequal, and this asymmetry also determines the unequal emotional status between the three people.

This book is unpopular, but I think it is better than the two rebirth books on the list. If you stumble upon this book by accident, don't miss it. It's been a long time since I've felt like staying up late chasing a book.

The writing is okay, but the plot is not, so it probably won't be a hit. It's too bland, like drinking boiled water. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't know what the author wants to write. Will I just do those trivial things all day long when I'm reborn? Will you continue to be a coder in the future? Aren't you ready to start a career? The popular urban rebirth novels are all about love and career. In today's society, few people like to read stories about being in love all day long without money or social status. I like to read novels about urban rebirth because I hope I can realize my dream. To put it bluntly, I like to read novels that are more enjoyable. This novel is not exciting at all and is too niche. I sincerely suggest that the author just cut it off and start a new book, otherwise it will be a waste of time to continue writing like this.

The author's writing style is very good, and the emotional drama is also outstanding. I personally think it is not inferior to the romance novels at the top of the monthly list. However, maybe because of the newcomer's new book, the comment area is relatively deserted and the results are somewhat dismal. Under such circumstances, the author can write for love. I also believe that the author has devoted a lot of emotion to the characters he writes, and I hope he can persevere. Having finished the praise, let's talk about the problem. I really liked this book before a hundred chapters. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very attractive to me. But about a hundred chapters later, the male protagonist suddenly broke away from the social horror setting. It is not an exaggeration to say that it was completely full of life. I understand that the author wants to write a growth story, and I also understand that the protagonist's character cannot be static. However, from the perspective of a reader, I did not feel this process in detail. Although he has experienced a lot of things, there is not much mention of the change in the male protagonist's mentality, so it seems a bit abrupt. So in the end, I simply didn't bother with the setting of social fear. After all, the story itself was attractive enough. The plot between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists, and even the male and female supporting characters, was still very exciting. The next chapter is about 200. I stayed up late last night and read Chapter 220. I really couldn't stand it anymore. After the college entrance examination, I thought the author would post a sweet piece of candy, but it turned out to be a disaster. After a series of events, the protagonist understood his feelings for the two heroines, so he had a "consummation" wish. , And then started multi-threaded operation to deceive Mianmian. I was really disgusted when I saw this plot. I hate the drama of concealment and deception. Feelings are not cheated. Even if I tell the truth, I don't want to see the protagonist lie. At this time, the protagonist in my eyes has changed from a lovable "Yizong" to a disgusting "scumbag". I guess the author may want to show the change of the male protagonist: he realizes his feelings and takes action, but have you ever thought about how disgusting such a plot design is, "Chu Qingmian is able to see through all hypocrisy and illusion, but it is a pity that she is opposite Su Chengyi." This paragraph simply made me die of poison. Even in reality, no one likes liars. The deception here is not Chen Jinzhi's daily jokes between friends, but deceiving a girl who really likes me. It makes me feel that the male protagonist has grown from a scumbag who doesn't know what he likes and is a scumbag who doesn't know what he likes to a big scumbag who wants everything and knows what he likes. I know that it is very difficult to write a double heroine in a modern setting. It is not easy to cleverly bypass the ethical and moral thresholds. The novel itself also requires drama and layers of contradictions and conflicts to promote. But can the plot of this super invincible scumbag be carefully written? Even if it is written a few more times with scenes like Zou Lian jumping off the building, it can at least strengthen the relationship between the male and female protagonists without making the male protagonist look like a scumbag. Having said so much, it is mainly because I am so disappointed. This book was an absolute fairy tale for me in the early stage. Even though there was a final exam recently, I stayed up late to catch up on the book. I didn't expect that the plot of the college entrance examination that I had been looking forward to for a long time turned out to be such a scumbag drama. Seeing that the author in the comment section was still renovating the Luochang, I really didn't dare to read it. I put it on the bookshelf for a while, and then I will look at the direction of the comment section. It will be clear after listening to it. As a mature reader, I have no intention of putting pressure on the author. Authors who blindly accommodate readers' ideas will not succeed. After all, it is difficult to agree with everyone, but I really feel that there is a big problem with this plot recently. I hope the author can carefully consider the design of subsequent similar plots~

There is a very important reason why the male protagonist written by the author is not likeable. Men can be scumbags, but they must be responsible. They have already decided to be scumbags, but they are still timid and annoying. Since you want to have two of the best girls in the world at the same time, you must have the consciousness to be the enemy of the whole world, to give the two girls a sense of security, and to have the determination that even if you are sad and hide in the ends of the earth, I will search all over the world to tie you back and heal your heartbreak. "I know that if you leave me, you will be unhappy, so I will spend my life making you happy forever."

As a bookworm for ten years, this is the first novel that made me skip three days of work and read it before I ordered it. It's really good. I'm surprised that it took me so long to read this novel. Maybe most of the people who really like this book are not good at words and don't like to express themselves. Love is timid, but being loved makes you brave

It was a waste of money. It was fine in the early stage, but it was a mess later on. It deliberately created an imperfect plot with villains and setbacks, increasing and intensifying conflicts. The protagonist was suppressed throughout the whole process, and he was so aggrieved. If you didn't know, you thought it was a female video. The scumbag was too lazy to comment. Let me say one thing: this book will make you extremely aggrieved. You can't help but forcefully pose. Do you think it is handsome? No, it's disgusting!

You are obviously very diligent in updating, but it seems that you have not been popular or black for most of the year? The most shocking thing is probably the title of the book and the noisy introduction, which at first glance is a bit discouraging. But before I knew it, I read the latest 2 million words in one go, and my impression was - the aura is surprisingly strong. The front row is a bit green, but after more than 100,000 words, it is not as stable as a novice. Overall, the writing is very good. The characters are well organized and layered. The foreshadowing is quite good for a web article. It doesn't just come to mind when I write it. It can be seen that it is not a pure white text but written with care. I also feel that the author is quite ambitious. Big, in addition to rebirth + historical novel + group drama + business + game + dual aircraft carriers and roaming battleships + it also contains Detective Conan XD Some like Hyouguo and anime styles are quite comfortable, but this one is not as good as Xiaobai Liu. There are too many elements crammed in, and the refreshing points of the rebirth novel are not enough, which may also dissuade people. The biggest highlight is probably because of the female author (?), Who is considered a breath of fresh air in the world of male videos. The female characters, especially the dual heroines and even the supporting characters, are all very delicately written and have pleasing personalities. The only urban heroines who feel so comfortable in my mind are Shen Youchu and Xiao Yuer. Be noisy, I am a little too naive about the law, especially the law and justice of the Chinese dynasty (the level of naivety can probably compete with the heroine 2 of this book). Of course, this naivety is not necessarily a bad thing, and the fairy tale style is not a problem. At least I personally like this kind of purity and innocence. In addition, I feel that the business style is not right. The richer people actually have more control over their time. This is probably also influenced by the style of Japanese comics (after all, the rich people in Japanese comics eat, drink and sleep on the plane every day or have to sign and stamp a carload of documents every day. Orz - the real bosses mostly eat and talk about business and rarely hold longevity meetings every day, which is troublesome) Those who do the hard work are all professional workers - workaholics like Elon Musk are abnormal perverts rather than normal big bosses) Finally, copying is not necessary for the author. After all, copying is mostly used by writers with insufficient skills to fill the number of words and cheat manuscript fees. I think that based on the author's aura, any original work is probably better than copying. As for the text copying part, it can actually be done according to the song list in the normal plot. I think it is better to deal with the song of dawn like this than just copying the book.

Before I knew it, it was almost 100,000 wordsʕ •ᴥ•ʔ First of all, I would like to thank the book friends who have never left me~

Pass on the lovely Mianmian~