Mirroring the Heavens From Douluo Dalu

In a world where strength is respected, there is either no heroine and only vases or tools that meet one's needs, or there is a heroine but it should be helpful to oneself, or one has power and can protect oneself in the early stage, or one has high talent and can help oneself in the later stage, or she can complement oneself. What's the use of you always thinking about a cat with low talent and a level 7 appearance? What's going on with the protagonist? That's running away, hiding from enemies, and concentrating on cultivation! What's the use of finding a vase? Can it give you protection (power)? Can it help you later (talent, resources, etc.)? Can you not make up for your shortcomings (assistance, treatment, etc.)? I guess he will cut it when he finds the vase cat. The author needs to be clear about the protagonist's position. For example, Tang San positions himself as an assassin, so he disguises himself, is hypocritical, murderous, and focuses on interests. What position do you want to give the protagonist? Without good positioning, the end of this book will be no different from the previous one. Douluo generally recommends only a few female protagonists: Xiao Wu and other hundred thousand year soul beasts (with two powerful soul beasts that can be sacrificed), Shui Bing'er Qian Renxue, Ning Rongrong, etc. (Have the power to protect the way in the early stage and have resources), Ning Rongrong or Ye Lingling (pure auxiliary, can complement each other), other women are not qualified to be female protagonists, and can only be vases or playthings at most. If they are in a good mood and have many resources, they can give some, but not If you have enough, just leave it to dry to ensure safety and basic life. Otherwise, what else is there to practice? It's not as good as a stallion. Human nature is like this. This is basically the case with classics. For example, Yun Yun and Yafei in Doupo are just vases. There will be no heroines in the back.

Not attacking, just talking about the inexplicable system in the previous book. Inexplicably, the second establishment of Wuhun Palace destroyed the Qixin Haitang family, and then gave up the trap at two points to kill Ye Lenglen for the peripheral soul bone. Even though there are so many people commenting on this point, you are convinced that you gave up the book just for the 200,000 yuan to save the manuscript. I hope this book will be better.

I don't understand. You said you should change the Purple Magic Eyes, and then you changed them in a flash You said they absorb ultraviolet rays, but you absorb infrared rays, and then they become laser laser eyes. The key point is that it's all just my imagination. There are no plug-ins, no theories, and no attempts. I really feel disgusted.

Reading novels is comforting, not just to make you angry. The original idea is very good, but in the end, you have to find a kitten. The heroine in the original novel is not killed, she has to be kept to clear her name, right?

It's both cute and erect, it's indescribably weird, is a kitten fucked to death by a fan so worth remembering?

Too poisonous💀

Bibi Dong was killed by the Thousand Blades Snow created by the protagonist's soul skill and was exiled to the turbulent flow of time and space. However, he survived after a few chapters. I really don't know what you are writing. The Thousand Blades Snow created by the soul skill also gave birth to souls. If you want to kill them, kill them all. What kind of whitewashing of the deep love between mother and daughter? Bibi Dong has already been fighting with the protagonist to death. What is there to wash away?

I have read about 40 of them so far, and I think they are okay. They are average to above average among Douluo fanfics. They are just the protagonists, either absorbing soul rings or on the way to absorbing soul rings. Can there be some plot? Write something that everyone will like to read. Like adding a little pit three or something.

It seems to be much improved compared to the previous book. At least it's not that poisonous anymore. But what you wrote is too off-the-wall. I won't be able to write anymore. It's better to conform to Douluo's world view. After all, a Douluo person cannot raise a Daluo Golden Immortal. So you might as well write a second generation soul with twin martial souls. For example, the Golden Crocodile King should be matched with Fang Tian Hua Ji or Sword Wuhun. Then rely on foresight and calculation of opportunities to grow step by step. It makes more sense to write it down this way. Later, the Golden Crocodile King succeeded Poseidon. The weapon soul inherits the Shura God. My grandfather broke through the ninety-ninth level with the grass jelly and inherited the God of War. And you don't have to be so careful in the early stages of backstage. Then one person will achieve enlightenment, and the chicken and the dog will ascend to heaven. Or it would be a good idea to use the Dark Demon Evil God Pearl to devour the incomplete godhead of the Ice and Fire Dragon King to become the God King. After all, a single bead can raise a first-level god. Moreover, the self-created God King's control over strength is definitely better than what he inherited. It's reasonable. Douluo resources include whale glue, medicinal baths, hundred thousand year soul bones, fairy grass and the location of ferocious beasts. The final place of inheritance of the gods.

Inexplicably, do you like Zhu Zhuqing so much? And what's the point of having Xiao Wu, a rabbit's soul ring, for your sixth soul skill? Does it match your mirror image?