Mirroring the Heavens From Douluo Dalu

In a world where strength reigns supreme, there are either no female leads, only decorative figures or tools to satisfy one's needs, or there are female leads who are helpful, powerful, and can protect one in the early stages, or highly talented and can assist one later, or who complement one's character. What's the use of you constantly eyeing a cat with mediocre talent, only around level seven?

I'm not attacking, I'm just saying that I abandoned my previous book because of two inexplicable points: the system, the bizarre re-establishment of the Spirit Hall wiping out the Seven Heart Begonia clan, and the killing of Ye Lengleng for an external spirit bone. So many people were commenting on those points, and you still abandoned that book for just 200,000 words of saved manuscript—I'm speechless. I hope this book will be better.

Some things I don't understand You said you'd change the Purple Demon Eye, and then you just slapped your forehead and changed it. They say that others absorb ultraviolet rays while you absorb infrared rays, and then you develop laser eyes. The key point is that I figured it all out myself, without any cheats, theories, or trials. I really find it disgusting.

Reading novels is supposed to be enjoyable, not infuriating. The initial concept was good, but then they had to go find the kitten. They didn't kill any of the female leads from the original story, insisting on keeping them alive to whitewash them, right? And even when they did kill them, they didn't kill them all. They offended everyone, yet they still had to force a whitewashing.

It's hypocritical, inexplicably strange. Is a little cat that's been thoroughly exploited in fanfiction really worth remembering?

That's too toxic! 💀

Bibi Dong was killed and exiled to the spacetime turbulence by the Thousand Blade Snow created by the protagonist's soul skill, but she survived a few chapters later. I really don't know what you're writing. The Thousand Blade Snow even has a soul. If you're going to kill someone, just kill them all. What's with this "mother-daughter affection" whitewashing? Bibi Dong is already at odds with the protagonist to the death. What's there to whitewash?

I've read about 40 chapters so far, and it seems alright. It's above average for Douluo Continent fanfiction, but the protagonist is always either absorbing soul rings or on his way to doing so. Could you please add some plot? Write something that everyone would enjoy, like adding a third installment or something similar.

This seems like a significant improvement over the previous book. At least there aren't as many flaws. However, your writing is too overpowered. You might run out of steam later on. It would be better to stick to the Douluo Continent universe. After all, a Douluo rank can't raise a Grand Luo Golden Immortal. So you might as well write about a second-generation Soul Master with twin Martial Souls.

Why do you like Zhu Zhuqing so much for no reason? And what's the point of your sixth soul skill wanting Xiao Wu's rabbit soul ring? Does it match your mirror image?