Starting as the Sun God in Douluo Dalu

Fu Jiang transmigrated and fell into the eye of two hundred million ice and fire demons, gaining immunity to both. She awakened the Fu Jiang Martial Soul. Starving, Fu Jiang ate a herb, only to be poisoned and die, her blood pooling on the ground. Countless Fu Jiangs rose up, starving again, and began eating the herb. Countless Fu Jiangs fell, their blood pooling on the ground.

People are stupid. Really, as a god of technology, not to mention that he is born with a divine body, he only needs to learn a little bit about the gene library to defeat the gods. I just don't know if there are solar flares. If there are, a solar flare will directly blow up the divine world. The Douluo Continent should belong to a pre-nuclear civilization.

It would be so much better if the main character was Winged Rathalos.

Here's a suggestion: nine out of ten Douluo Continent novels are harem stories. I'm really sick of harem novels. Regarding the choice of female lead, if you can't grasp the original character, you could write your own original female lead (this is the best option). It's best to maintain the main character's established traits throughout. Believe in yourself.

The author is still in elementary school. Lena's father detonated the Deno sun, destroying the entire Deno star system. The protagonist has the genes of the blazing sun and is even from the royal family. He can easily use his genes to connect with the sun of the Douluo and emit the sun's temperature, which is enough to make him invincible. Whether it is the first, second, or third generation, or the Divine Body Douluo, he is basically not afraid of death without weapons that target his genes.

Well, to put it simply, Douluo Continent is inherently morally flawed; any normal person who uses their brain a little can see that. But you, the main character, don't seem to be doing too well either, do you? If you say "anything goes" when you go out to eat, but they actually serve you expensive food, and you feel like you've been ripped off, do you then try to skip out on the bill? If you can't afford to act cool, just be a down-to-earth person, it's not a big deal!

I skipped to the part about the apprenticeship and asked the author why he chose an apprenticeship. It felt like a scientist becoming an ancient martial artist's apprentice—that's weird, I'm outta here.

Your chapters 37, 38, 39, and 40 are rather pointless. You abandoned Xiao Wu and chased after her for some worthless Soul Emperor, telling her to wait. (I know you left her contact information, but then what? How will she return if she's in danger? From a great distance? How will she escape if she realizes she can't win? Will she curse and swear revenge?

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Uh… the author's concept is great… but unfortunately, their writing skills are limited! It's just so awkwardly written… And they're incredibly lazy. A tech god from the tech side arrives in a fantasy world, so why not sort out their power system? Maybe do some magical or scientific modifications? But they didn't!