Immortality: Senior Sister, Please Wait a Moment

It's great^ω^ It's a very rare harem novel, and it doesn't have any poison. And the characters each have their own characteristics😍😍

Although it has some shortcomings, it is overall a good book In the end, it feels like it ended in a hurry Consider the reputation more.

Sister

I have read this book "Guide to Poison" three times. I am so persistent. I really want others to read it.

Treasure Girl Qingrou😍

What is the division of the author's realm? Are the two maids of the saint younger than the saint? But their realm is indeed Nascent Soul, and the Saint has just broken through to the Nascent Soul. What kind of rubbish talent does the Saint have? Let's talk about the two female protagonists who are 3000 years old+, one is a 3000-year-old Nascent Soul, and the other is a 3000-year-old sect master who has only just reached the peak of divine transformation. Now here comes a great butler who is of unknown power. He rose from Nascent Soul to the peak of Dongxu in more than ten years. Hahaha, what kind of rubbish sect leader is he?

When I saw the male protagonist's plan to use his good feelings to force his sister, he ran away. It was so disgusting.

Let me give you a brief review after reading 201. I have read three books by the author, and they happened to be books that the author followed the world view. They were all interesting in the early stage, but in the middle stage, when the characters of the previous work were brought in, it became a bit boring, because the focus shifted to the characters of the previous work. Reading the new book does not necessarily mean that you have read the old book B, and I have no emotions for those characters. Let's talk about this work First of all, the male protagonist is a classic soft rice development flow, and as the male protagonist in Qian Hui's novel, he is definitely not impotent. As a male protagonist, Chu Bai has basic moral values, is not too salty, is trustworthy, and has a brain, which gives people a pretty good impression. Let's talk about the female protagonist, the female protagonist, the second female protagonist and the third female protagonist. The female protagonist is a childhood sweetheart and the male protagonist's senior sister. She is the perfect template for a husband and a child. However, the male protagonist does not bind her first for the talent of the system. It seems that he will take the route of Kaoru Tamamo. It seems that he will be the first to accept but also the last O. The second female lead is Nangong. She has a classic tough-tongued template. She feels a bit like Qianxue, but not as tough and arrogant as Qianxue. I feel that the author has improved the character in this regard. The third female lead, Ling'er, is more like Qianxue, and even comes with two maids as dowries. The emotional transformation from the death of the male protagonist to the one who is completely devoted is indeed the author's common template, but this transformation is much more comfortable. From this, I feel that the author prefers to write noisy stories. Female character, but the noisy level of this work has been reduced, and it is not as offensive as before. The most important point is to stay away from Ling'er in a timely manner after the plot is over, rather than because Ling'er is ahead of schedule, the male protagonist is forced to kidnap Ling'er. The fourth female is the sect leader, the Taoist companion of the system that the male protagonist first bound to. Since the author doesn't have much description at the moment, I won't give her impressions. However, she feels more like the male protagonist's rich mother's sponsor. It depends on how the male protagonist succeeds in influencing his mother in the future. Not to mention what other people think, I think the author's transformation is successful. I basically stick to the Xianxia and light novel sections. Whenever a new book comes out, I will read ten thousand words to taste it. If I can't accept it, I will abandon it. The ten golden chapters of this book have caught my attention. It's too obvious, and the subsequent plot is above average in my opinion. I hope to continue working hard. By the way, the current viewing experience is very good. I don't want to focus on one female character in the mid-term, and then I hope to add the role cards of the two maids.

This kind of novel seems illogical. Let's talk about the characters. The character of the protagonist Erha is the kind of person who has no wisdom. He has a blue star memory and wrote a few sentences about thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Don't deceive young people to be poor. He also wrote that the sky can't cover your eyes and the earth can't bury your heart. As long as you know it at an early age, I can still understand it. The second reason is that the binding system, binding a god-transforming sect leader, makes me feel that the protagonist wants to eat swan meat like a toad. The three protagonists are flirting with their childhood sweetheart sister. The sister feels embarrassed to show the protagonist the exercises. The protagonist immediately turns his attention to the exercises and throws his sister aside. This way of writing makes the protagonist so useless that I can't stand it.

When I saw Nangong Li, I was so angry that I wanted to laugh

You have no education and you have to fight hard. Let's not discuss the setting of the novel. What's the point of you being serious? Let's just talk about yourself. 20 Years after graduation, you can still remember no more than 10 poems. This is your own problem, okay? Not to mention those masterpieces that are relatively famous among the 300 Tang poems. You have the best learning ability. As long as Qiang memorized it carefully in junior high school, he can now recite many classic poems in textbooks without saying the super long poems like his teacher's, but shorter poems such as Mulan, The Donkey of Guizhou, and Peach Blossom Spring are probably still deeply impressed by many people, and he can recite them with a little smoothness

Six heroines? Author, are you serious?

It's not bad, but the realm arrangement is not very reasonable. After meeting the male protagonist, the realm of each female protagonist rises too fast for no reason. Nan, who has three thousand years of Nascent Soul, transforms into a god when she meets the male protagonist.

I read a lot, and after reading dozens of chapters, I no longer have the desire to continue...

To be honest, from the time I read the book on picking up attributes, I thought it would be a pity that the author didn't write about Xiao Huang.

In Chapter 8, why did the sect leader suddenly appear from a previous wedding? What happened?

Your character realm arrangement is really awesome.

How should I put it? It's too novice. This writing style... I almost thought it was a novice novel from more than ten years ago.

I can't join the book club, the author is awesome.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

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I still like to read the author's fairy tales, urban genres, or fantasy and other world genres.