Immortal Venerable of Ten Thousand Beasts

Please give me your opinion. We have arrived at the Immortal Realm. The setting of the realm is a poisonous point. Only those who reach Tao Ancestor can live forever. This makes the road too narrow. Even Daluo Jinxian cannot live forever. That is too nonsense. Regarding the plot of the fairy world, the author must remember that you are already plotting the plot after transforming into a god and ascending. You have already done it once and cannot do it again. Transformation of Gods and Mahayana did not reflect the changes brought about by the improvement of the realm. It was always a fight. If you win, there will be no more. The characteristics of each realm and the changes brought about by the gap between realms were never written. The gap between the high realm and the low realm of the protagonist was not written. It seemed that it was always a fight and the winner. , There is no description of the changes brought about by the improvement of the realm. It gives the impression that not improving the realm is just a punch, and improving the realm is still a punch. It does not bring about the changes brought about by the sublimation of the realm. It is like learning high school mathematics, but still using the method of junior high school to solve problems. There is no change, so why learn from him. I never write about daily life. Immortal cultivators are still human beings, and human beings have seven emotions and six desires. Don't always write about what you did when you went out, or you came back to retreat, etc. Always write like this. The fairy world is the ending of this book. No one will read it again. After all, it is just a running account. There is no need to read it.

It's really tasteless, it's a pity to throw it away, just like keeping a running account, without any ups and downs. I saw that in the middle stage of elixir formation, many scenes in it were repeated descriptions. For example, someone asked the protagonist to make an elixir. Each time, he only had one set of materials, but he had to make ten elixirs. This has been repeated six or seven times. New book friends, be careful and don't waste money and time.

I don't like to see indigenous people, so let's not talk about whether to bring them in or not. I'm afraid that modern jokes will pop up suddenly and make me look awkward.

The advantage of this book is that the sect is quite normal. The disadvantage is that the narrative is really fluid. .

The descriptions of dialogues and battles are emotionless, straightforward, noun combinations, and almost no description of psychological activities.

What the hell is this written about? Be a reader fool!

I suspect ticket fraud, but there is no evidence

What kind of novel is this? The more I watched, the less I wanted to continue reading, no passion at all, and endless nonsense.

The same anecdote every time, every time it is said that Senior Shen has some good things, dozens of spiritual treasures, can he use them all? As an antique collector? The names of those monsters come and go, and the plot comes and goes.

It's like keeping a running account. Every time I fight, I basically just run away. I can't write down the specific details of the fight, and I haven't developed a golden finger.